Description: For one who does not count their lives in years or decades, regret can become an almost unbearable burden.
This make me cry.
Tear of the goddess good item
"Long" is a bit of a misnomer, unless it refers to Celestia's lifespan. Regardless, I enjoyed this.
4th and wow
Sorry, haven't read it, but you might want to reconsider the long tag, seth, it's only 8k words.
Could y'all stop with sad fics? I need a shippy adventure fic! A little grimdark could be added as well.8th
@ponydoraprancypantsWell, I was referring to the length of the story when I submitted this and tagged it as "long". I consider 8K words to be kind of long for a short story, though I guess it isn't too terribly long. Sorry about that, then.
I don't get it.*SPOILER*So... Celestia died? or what?
@ThecrazyrabbidfangirlHi author. It's not a big deal. I associate "long" with novel-length fiction, but that is just a comment on the tags. I read your story and I enjoyed it, sad as it was. I encourage others to give it a shot. Given the great popularity of Celestia/Twilight melancholy, I have to assume that this is going to generate a lot of interest.
@Bigyeti1369*SPOILERS*Well, yes, Celestia died at the end.@ponydoraprancypantsI'm glad you enjoyed it. I sure hope it generates a lot of interest, as I want as many people to enjoy it as possible! It was a lot of fun to write, and I put my heart and soul into it.
@MaquabraDude, I got you. That's exactly what i'm writing right now.
No... It just can't be the truth!Celestia...is...eternal...She IS EQUESTRIA!It's a well written story, but there is still one big flaw...it made me cry!
Damn ninjas chopping onions and blowing dust into my eyes.
Hidden league of legends referenceactually its not hidden. It the title
amazing fanfic.... i guess this as well asrainbow factorymy little dashiepretty in pinkthe coughare the ones that have made me shed tears
It hurt a lot to read this. Tears and pain in my throat. It's a moving piece. But...don't read it unless you're ok with crying.
This moved me to become teary, but the tears were never quite expelled. I still loved it to bits, though.
BRAVO! BRAVO! a masterpiece! i have never been moved in such a way. my only concern is Luna and her position in the mortal realm.
Sad, yet beautiful. The ending was a tear-jerker for sure. Thanks for sharing!