[Grimdark] [Adventure] [Sad]
Author: Pish
Description: Unfathomable destruction and chaotic reckoning has driven every remaining living thing of Equestria underground. For years, they have endured and rebuilt their homes deep within the earth and soil, but are they really safe from the fires above?
Fires Above: Part 1
Fires Above: Part 2
Fires Above: Part 3
Fires Above: Part 4
Fires Above: Part 5 (New!)
Additional Tags: Underground, Revolution, Fighting, Corrupted, Royalty
27 comments:
Le first
Cereal posting an underground story. Seems like it's legit because of that
Woo, Grimdarks, must read!
Hungry Morlocks
@Travis Smith
Umm
The thing from that movie where the guy has the odd time machine?
Ah, I stick to ponies
I just know it from Big Bang. Maybe someone else will know.
I read this story when it was... still... -wait. Never mind.
The description reminds me of Minecraft...
Anyone else?
After reading part l, nice job with it
star needed?
Murlocks are from "The Time Machine" novel written by H.G. Wells, published in 1895
*Morlocks
See I knew someone knew it! Thanks Flutterguy
Had to read it for a report
Hm, people read good books and all I get is, Great Expectations. I know it's a classic but, boring. Animal Farm was great, the only person in my class to know it wasn't just about talking animals.
I know the name, but I have yet to read that particular novel. Might pick it up and try it.
As for me, I've set my sights on pieces by Jules Verne. I mean c'mon! Journey to the Center of the Earth? Around the World in 80 Days? Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea? Where are our Pony crossovers of those?!
Let's go Community. Make it happen! :D
Awww... Another incomplete story :/ I'm already reading too so many incompletes that I get confused sometimes. But I will read it for sure when it's finished.
@Travis Smith
Animal Farm wasn't great. It's alright, but hardly literature.
Maquabra said...
"Awww... Another incomplete story :/ I'm already reading too so many incompletes that I get confused sometimes."
+1 on that
I found the intro a bit of a confusing info-dump. But it's pretty hard NOT to info-dump when you're writing on a different context. Maybe... write only about bits that you're gonna use later in your story?
@cheezesauce
a different context?
please let me know when next part comes out
Blessed Faust, Mother of Luna...
Poor Dinky...
Poor Luna...
...and Twi as well, if she's alive...
Heck, poor EVERYPONY...
*Five Stars*
Haha! Yes! Morlocks! Bloody briliant! Not to sound too cruel...but I'm secretly hoping no-one survived.
-Bloodpool (Resistentia est inutilis)
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