Thursday, December 22, 2011

Story: Evil's Twilight (Update Complete!)


[Dark][Adventure]

Author: Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi
Description: When unforeseen weather disrupts the Winter Wrap Up effort, Twilight is left to fend for herself. She stumbles upon a once in a lifetime experience, but everything has a price to pay.
Evil's Twilight Part 1: Chills
Evil's Twilight Part 2: Inklings
Evil's Twilight Part 3: Revelations
Evil's Twilight Part 4: Echoes
Evil's Twilight Part 5: Convictions
Evil's Twilight Final: Farewells (New!)

Additional Tags: OCs Are Not Bad Mkay?

20 comments:

Lotharius said...

This story has the best additional tags yet and I shall read it just for that reason.

Lafter said...

I think I've read these tags before somewhere! XD Will read soon.

Gypsy said...

twilight sparkle is ebil

Cyber.Kuriboh said...

Really really good o.o needs a chapter 3 though :3

P. Pony Ponyson said...

Goddamnit, DA. Why the hell can't I read this?

Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi said...

@P. Pony Ponyson

Huh, well I provided Google docs links too, but I guess they weren't posted. For anyone not wanting to deal with the DA warning:

Chapter 1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KtjS78bITWYT_v_SO716XL2zpsbHINo0Dm09X_DPsHo/edit?hl=en_US

Chapter 2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KN5TEJ7c2RXPaXzC9EGWG_l3DPLRG7ygZfsEeOnAJYo/edit?hl=en_US

mycutiemarkisagun said...

Soooo Twilight Sparkle can sustain LittlePip-caliber battle damage and walk through gory war-zones without triggering a [Grimdark] tag? Dammit Seth, you're worse than the MPAA.

Drakengarde said...

In before argument over the tags.

The_Owl said...

I can't really focus on this story. It's not very interesting to me, I'm not sure why.

Kixu said...

Very nice. Well written. I look forward to whatever comes next.

Tast said...

@mycutiemarkisagun
I'm going to learn how to code things for Blogger. When I do, I'm making a like button for comments, just so I can like yours.

LittlePip-caliber battle damage... LAWL

richfiles said...

Keep up with this story. An origin story for Nightmare Moon, and hopefully, a true defeat... That would be cool. I sure hope that that ray of hope in Twilight's friends can pull her free enough of the Nameless to let her element work.

I do so hate to see canon ponies suffer. Heck, I even hate when fleshed out OCs suffer. Still, I like my endings happy, and that suffering does make the defeat of evil so much sweeter. I sure hope this ends well for everypony!

Naly said...

Need links to Google docs versions; The DA links keep going me a "403: Forbidden" error/whatever :/ I've read chapters 1 and 2 (the chapters with google docs links) and the story is really interesting so far. :)

Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi said...

@Naly

Sure. Glad you're enjoying it.

Chapter 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JVNob27bqqrgIrwT_xpJf6vaKcCZ9nSVB-0nm7Ygh44/edit

Chapter 4
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vIKLQxQ8EeWtKAiILabN0OfKRgGW1FUfwRHL7L2jyeo/edit

Chapter 5
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PcI-dCiFp6SYTVCHPLM7hA6nFuxEGJ7ypJ7Ii7kQbok/edit

darksidecomma said...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4w4pEgrD7A

AxanZenith said...

Twilight's such a bad-ass. Great read.

Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi said...

Just in case anyone's having issues with DA again:

The real Chapter 4 because I'm dumb and posted an outdated version:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lAfvIWqHIYjqlkv1FU27ScmXA_J2i1HjHAmR3LwB6WQ/edit

Final Chapter:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1opr2g5KCasMVKPuFEIjOJzFfGWsIZgGO2EheWCVgcJs/edit

metapsionic said...

Loved it! What an adventure. Thanks for sharing!

Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi said...

For anyone who prefers FIMFic and happens to wander by, I've got it up there too: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14061/Evil%27s-Twilight

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