Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Story: The Room

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Author: Capt. Marua
Description: Apple Bloom and Vinyl Scratch are in a room. There really isn't much more than this to say.
The Room

Additional Tags: Room, Bottle Episode, Oneshot, Lighthearted, Dream

73 comments:

Zerone said...

A Vynal Scratch fic with no comments? For Shame . .

MetalGearSamus said...

inb4whatastorymark

Zerone said...

No spell check either? Tsk tsk . .

Anonymous said...

Why do I feel that this will be slightly similar to "Waiting for Godot"??

Anonymous said...

"YOU ARE TEARING ME APART LISA!"
The first thing that came into my head when I saw the name of this fanfic, sorry if I annoyed you.

Anonymous said...

I did not hit her! I did not. O hai Mark!

Anonymous said...

All I thought when I saw the title was everything I remember off the top of my head from Tommy Wiseau's "The Room"

I'll still read it, though. ^^

Anonymous said...

Apparently I'm not the only one who saw this title and immediately thought Tommy Wiseau.

poopnate said...

Strange, but I love the reference to the Vinyl Transcriptions.

Does anyone know when the first audio recording will be released?

Zerone said...

Ok, so that made no sense at all, but I'm looking forward to someone writing the fic of that next broadcast!

Anonymous said...

Has anyone ever been far as decided to use even go want to do look more like?

NotAGoodUsername360 said...

So anyway, how is your sex life?

frybrain said...

Reminds me of the Vinyl Scratch Tapes. I love it

lesserpoet said...

Vat... has just happened?

Chris said...

Why is this tagged 'normal?' This is the very definition of capital-R Random, if you ask me!

Anyway, lots of thoroughly inexplicable jollies to be had here.

Avogadro said...

Did Tommy Wiseau write this?

Anonymous said...

Made no real sense to me but all in all it was a good read and I enjoyed it.

Anonymous said...

.... wat AppleBloom said "Waaaaaaaaaat?"

~Appltank

Anonymous said...

name correction from above
~Appletank

Anonymous said...

A very sort of bizzare episode concept, but very interestingly played out! I like it! 4/5!

Anonymous said...

"Hahaha great story Vinyl."

J0J0 said...

@Anonymous

"YOU ARE TEARING ME APART APPLEBLOOM!"

Anonymous said...

Needs random tag, not normal.

Anonymous said...

"What a story Mark!"

Josh said...

I also thought Tommy Wisseau

Also, weird story is weird.

jman said...

It was...good.
Odd, and unusual, but
good!

Dave said...

My brain is full of fuck.

Anonymous said...

What is 'Mark'?

Thattagen said...

BUT WAS IT A DREEEEAAAAM?!??
The ending made me scratch my head. Too bad this is a oneshot...I want another chapter!

(this fic made me look up the word "ersatz." Oh, it's German for "substitute"!)

Punchline said...

nice :D you sir i givith onto you all my internets.

Anonymous said...

Uh. Okay. Cool story!

Sketchpad said...

What... I, uh... but di.... guh...... HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
*head explodes*
*Deus ex machina powers reform head*
What just happened?.........

Delta Pangaea said...

Weird, but good. The Scratch don't let nuthin get her down.

4 stars. I'd vote 4.5 if I could though.

Rainbow Derp said...

Reminds me of the flash game "Escape from Crimson Room" a lot.

Anonymous said...

So much WTF in this story. It was good though.

Anonymous said...

This really should be a Random story instead of normal, but it was a good story anyways.

Anonymous said...

Applebloom: I'll kill ya', ya' bastard!

Scootaloo: You couldn't kill me if you tried.

Applebloom: Ya' betrayed me! Ya' ain't good! Yer... yer just a chicken, chirp-chirp-chirp-chirp, cheep, cheep!

Anonymous said...

some one needs to write a pony version of The Room

Scribejay said...

Oh Celestia please don't kill DJ-P0n3, Applebloom.

Anonymous said...

It kind of trailed off and didn't go anywhere. That was basically the least satisfying ending possible.

John said...

I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who thought of Tommy Wiseau's The Room when I saw that title. :P

Anonymous said...

No I want this same concept applied to other ponies that have nothing to do with each other.

Raven said...

...I wanna read what happens with Applebloom at the radio station. =O

Anonymous said...

@Raven
TG&P Trixie shows up.

~Totally not Sethisto

David Reinold said...

EQDaily's been accepting a lot of weird stuff lately...

Anonymous said...

YOU ARE LYING! I NEVER HIT YOU! YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA!

SkyrimOrBust said...

Really good! One of my new favorite one-offs.

182crazyking said...

This is awesome, and also, I as well thought this was gonna be a parody of the actual movie. Too bad it wasn't but now I have an idea for a fic :D

I did not heet her, I did not, its bullsheit, I DID NAAHT. O hai Vinyl.

Conner Cogwork said...

Agreed on Random. But what the hay, t'was a fun read. Look out world, here comes DJ Applebloom!

Anonymous said...

Scootaloo is just a giant chicken.

CHEEP! CHEEP! CHEEP! CHEEP!

CHEEP! CHEEP! CHEEP! CHEEP!

Tylendal said...

I really liked Vinyl Scratches complete and utter disregard for the fact that she'd somehow shown up at Sweet Apple Acres.

Present Perfect said...

>not a Room crossover
>son, I am disappoint

Despite the fact that nothing actually happens in this, I enjoyed it, and I chalk that up to good Vinyl Scratch characterization. So in other words, IS GOOD FANFIC HAAAAAAAH?

Anonymous said...

Seems more like a Twilight Zone episode, really.

So frakkin RANDOM.

Timber said...

wow random story is random.

Anonymous said...

.......wut


4/5

Anonymous said...

Wat.

Anonymous said...

"I'm TIRED of this WORLD!"

"Hahahaha! What a story MARK!"

Oh Tommy Wiseau, you so funny the title caught me

theuncalledfor said...

The HAY did I just read? @.@

Anonymous said...

this is just filler for the next vinyl tapes

bubsAKAvermin said...

Strangely enough, I read Vinyl's voice as that broadcaster guy from Fallout 3.

182crazyking said...

@bubsAKAvermin
You've probably been reading some Fallout: Equestria, in which case, so have I ^_^

ItsTheWhinyGuys said...

Um...I...hmmm. This needs a random tag.

Anonymous said...

At least it didn't end with them both in cupcakes.

@_@

Anonymous said...

YEAH, I SAID IT.^

?_?

Anonymous said...

You're just a chicken, eh, cheep cheep cheepcheep cheeeeeep

Anonymous said...

You're just a chicken, eh, cheep cheep cheepcheep cheeeeeep

Look down Look up Youre a Brony said...

...what?

No, seriously, what?

Very good writing and characterization, but the concept is just... confusing. Maybe take this a little further?

...Now I wanna write a sequel

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