Author: S.AuraKnight
Description: Sometimes our lives are tied together before we ever even meet. Sometimes, one lucky pony is picked to learn a grand lesson and have an adventure of self-discovery, from a young filly up to her present day adventures with others she could call her friends. But what does happen during that process, and how does it affect the journey? Well, let me tell you...Intertwined Chapter 1
Intertwined Chapter 2
Additional Tags: Sad, Long, Adventure, Origin, Self-discovery
8 comments:
First person trixie? Hopefully she actually speaks in first person.
ReplyDeleteI'm curious; will read later.
Ooh, this is good. I'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteIt's so annoying that the ratings aren't displayed in Firefox 4. -.-'
ReplyDeleteWell, when I started reading I was a bit disappointed to discover that you hadn't used Trixie's illeism to write in first and third person simultaneously, but the story has been quite good so far. However, I can't help but have a sinking feeling for Sunrise; if he's there at the beginning and not there in Ponyville, then something must have happened to him sometime in the middle…
ReplyDeletei read these two parts and am both hooked to the story and growing attached to sunrise.
ReplyDeletecan`t help but feel bad when thinking about why he wasn`t in ponyville with her
the 14th of june anon here again. just asking if you gave up on this story. (come on throw a sucker for happy endings a bone)
ReplyDeleteI've been working on this, but the sudden amount of work around the place (namely one a one-shot that kinda evolved and a large amount of guests) has made it hard to write this. I can promise though that I do have a chapter being pre-read and one in the works right now. I just need my editor to give me the go-ahead.
ReplyDelete@S.Aura Knight
ReplyDeleteUh..... good luck? I'm kinda horrid with comments, but somethinglikesayingyourstorywasgoodorsomething......