Author: Cereal Velocity
Description: The ponies find several mysterious objects in Twilight's library. Whatever could they be?Tech Support
Additional Tags: iphone, laptop, soda, trollestia, cluelessness
Description: The ponies find several mysterious objects in Twilight's library. Whatever could they be?Tech Support
25 comments:
"This isn't that kind of fanfiction" priceless!
Noooo! Y u change banner?!
Cereal Velocity:
You are amazing. I love you :D
Why exactly did Princess Celestia have these things? Souvenirs from a trip with Dr. Whooves?
Dat ending.
The swearing threw me off a little, but aside from that I think this is probably the most enjoyable fanfic I've read so far. <3 This in combination with the image is a great pair.
I liked this! short and simple with good imagery...and now I want to know more! WHY was Celestia in the library with the strange boxes that glowed and the tin of happy drink?
I didn't think it was that great tbh. It was short and sweet, but the idea felt kinda boring.
you could have done better with this concept imo
'It isn't that kind of fan fiction'
OH IT IS, IT TOTALLY IS
I giggled. 10/10
It says there are six ponies, but what was Rarity doing during all this?
Some ponies are too critical with fanfics. I enjoyed this.
@Anonymous
Oh, Rarity was being ponynapped. She secretly enjoys that sort of thing.
Oh god that was the best fourth wall break I've read in a while.
Was laughing loudly the whole time, five stars.
It gave me a smile and a giggle.
"What's a 'Cereal Velocity'?"
A GIGGLING PILE OF FRIENDSHIP. BUT ENOUGH OF THAT, HAVE AT YOU.
nice fic, would read again!
A fun little piece that feels too short to properly use the potential of its idea. The author also gets a negative mark for self-referencing (mustn't allow it to be overused, hmm?) however this is balanced out by using a godly troll as the story's climactic deus ex fenestra. I do have to complain about using both indentation and blank rows to separate paragraphs, however. Use one or the other, please! Anyway, this gets a solid thumb and I will share this with a fellow pony lover at some point.
A little too short but a very fun read.
@Cereal Velocity
I actually completely forgot about Rarity when I drew the pic, so I gave her a debacle all of her own.
I still can't believe that you wanted to use my picture for the Draw/Writeoff. Compared to yours, my short stories are feeble twigs. Bravo, friend!
@rmsaun98722
Oh, you're the one who drew this? I would have given you credit in the story, but I had no idea.
I've been wanting to write a story based on this image for a while and I'm glad I got a chance to. It's adorable. Thank you for drawing it, and I'm glad you liked the story!
Cute meta story is cute.
Also, Hi, Cereal! I know you can see this.
So Applejack really tries an iPhone in this story?
lol that was pretty good. I give you props. I laughed at the ending, though. Dash breaking the 4th wall AND getting a slightly (ok, it's one hell of a stretch to say) shippy moment? Win.
i had an unopened can of soda next to me and I tried opening it with my teeth after reading this
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