Description: An incident in Ponyville ends up getting Twilight and her friends arrested, but one pony is in far more trouble than the others.I Need a Freaking Drink
Description: An incident in Ponyville ends up getting Twilight and her friends arrested, but one pony is in far more trouble than the others.I Need a Freaking Drink
10 comments:
Poor Fluttershy!
I always lose interest a little when ponies start swearing...
@Pacce
forgive my orwellian editorness but I did decide to change that on second thought... Didn't really pay that part much mind until someone mentioned it.
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@Roy G. Biv
Second.
Fun but too short. Could've been a fun "Rashomon" style story where each pony recounts the event in their own POV. Pinkie Pie's story would have been hilarious.
Hmmm, I wonder if I can write it...
@Anonymous
Yeah I wanted to do it rashomon style but I only had 24 hours to write this thing. and I am neither fast nor clever enough to write a story like that in such a short time.
Nice story! Ditzy the lawyer made me laugh quite a bit
This was awesome! Too bad Ditzy is no Phoenix Wright.
Fun indeed but this leaves me craving more. Toothpaste, after all. One thumb, might re-read.
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