Summary: Blues tells his friend about how he developed a crush on Pinkie Pie
This was absolutely adorable. I'm hoping you write more.
That was absolutely precious. Just...so precious. I'm using that word two times too many, so I'll just end this by saying whoever you are, WRITE MORE.
Dawww, I hope you write a another story where they meet my friend.
Please write more!This was BEAUTIFUL!
This story was quite great. I loved it.
I love this ending, I knew it just had to be like this! I want more of this one! Write more and write chapter 3 ! Amazing!
Thanks for part two!It was perfectNow go write more!
I really liked it!Poor Caramel ;_;
Thanks everyone, your comments really mean a lot to me.
Re: End of Part 2I lol'dBut really, good story.
This was adorable.Also, I really liked the ending- Twilight strikes me as the type of gal that can turn a guy down without insulting him with patronization or waffling.
This was fantastic! This is the kind of shipping story that I can enjoy. It's sweet without being smarmy or saccharine, and it's commendable that you managed to pull tension off without turning it into a soap opera or, at the risk of sounding like a prude, falling back on inflicting guilt over illicit sex on the characters. You've got some real material here.
Wow, I seriously thought my boyfriend was the only person who shipped BluesxPinkie
@AnonymousOh my, no. Blues x Pinkie forever! I mean, they're both named after colors, they're perfect for each other.
Achesst if you see this, I want you to know that I thank you for making this.Also, if you feel like it, read my story Blue Days on fimfiction. Rereading this made me realize I may have unintenionally been inspired by this work.Thanks!