Summary: Derpy and Luna swap jobs for a day.
Wow, that was really quite good.
This is wonderfully well-written; I enjoyed the hell out of it. You have an exceptional narrative voice. I specifically liked Derpy's characterization (which we don't often get enough of in other stories) and the bit with the dog. Keep it up!
Wow.I laughed when Luna commandeered the couch and then was kinda moved by the end.Good work!
Very, very good!
Darn you, anon writer. You made me tear up. That's not supposed to happen.
Good show sir that was very cute.
The prayers to Luna were very touching. C'mon, I shouldn't be sympathetic towards Diamond friggin-Tiara of all ponies!Derpy fics are awesome! Nice work.
Now THIS personification of Derpy- Bright Eyes, I can live with. I wish we knew who this mystery author is; they did such a wonderful job with the story-telling and gave us moments to laugh and admire.Great job, Anon!
why is this not one of the most populer stories on this site? Its amazing :OI dont know why this had to be Derpy exactly, seeing as how she sounds and acts like any normal pony in this story. But its still good.
I think It's great that you know the difference between autism and astigmatism. It annoys me to no end when derpy is portrayed as retarded. Good writing too. Imagery cold be touched up a little but other than that I thought it was a great story1
Great story, Moabite, whoever you are.
I really like this one...mainly for the points other people have brought up in comments above me. I talked about it on Episode 1b of my little podcast because it is the best Luna fic I have read so far.http://mylittlepodcast.blogspot.com/2011/05/episode-1b-cute-kick-to-face.html
This was actually my first pony-fic, and because of it, I have given so many others a chance. Thank you.
I wish this fic was more well known. The Luna segment was very fun and enjoyable. But the 2nd half with Derpy was truly inspired. Bravo good sir bravo!
This brought me to tears. Oh Luna.