• Story: Griffon a Hard Time (Update Part 4!)

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    Author:     Tricky-Step
    Description: Gilda is on a mission of desperation to find Rainbow Dash to become best friends again. However, her pride and conflicted feelings causes her to act impetuously, posing confusion and dilemmas. As she finally reaches Rainbow Dash, she soon finds herself staring down a magical concoction she will never forget. When she wakes up, she will being seeing the world in a different way, literally. New emotions arise, along with old and new conflicts with Rainbow Dash and her friends.

    Can Gilda use this new opportunity to make things right and forge new relationships? Or will she sabotage herself against her unyielding pride.
    Griffon a Hard Time (New Part 4!)

    Additional Tags: First-Person / Dilemmas / Transformation / Cupcakes / Gilda insanity
    Tuesday, February 28, 2012 op
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    23 comments:

    1. lolke12February 28, 2012 at 1:00 PM

      oo shiny

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    2. Masquerade313February 28, 2012 at 1:01 PM

      Gilda doesn't look half bad as a pony.
      Bookmarked.

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    3. wackyponyFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:04 PM

      good job, myzz(author's name on another site)

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    4. Luxin_NocteFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:06 PM

      Cupcakes and insanity in the tags?

      Uhmmm... >_>
      not sure if want

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    5. Tricky-StepFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:08 PM

      @Luxin_Nocte
      It's not what you think >_>
      Besides, just look at that normal and shipping tag.

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    6. Luxin_NocteFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:12 PM

      @Tricky-Step
      Just kidding :P

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    7. Chemistryaway119February 28, 2012 at 1:14 PM

      I don't know. Heart of Gold, Feathers of Steel is such a compelling story you have a lot to compete with but let's see!

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    8. Luxin_NocteFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:17 PM

      @Tricky-Step

      Oh, you are the author....
      now I just feel silly >_<

      Well, congratz anyway to getting posted on EqD!
      I always had a huge amount of respect for people who are able to tell a compelling story.

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    9. Lucas BrönnimannFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:25 PM

      wait, somethings wrong... it's a shipping story, posted 20minutes ago and hasn't been star bombed yet! Are those guys getting unreliable? Or *gasp* are people actually reading the story before rating?

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    10. Tricky-StepFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:26 PM

      @Acriaos
      Just telling you right now, my story hasn't gotten to the shipping part yet.

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    11. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:29 PM

      I have a soft spot for Gilda stories, and the tags "Pinkie Pie" and "Rainbow Dash" always pique my interest. I'll definitely give it a read.

      Why does every Gilda story insist on using that horrible, horrible pun :P?

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    12. ScreenedPlumFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:42 PM

      I must admit, HoG, FoS will always be my favourite Gilda fic, but this one isn't half bad

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    13. RessQFebruary 28, 2012 at 2:02 PM

      I dislike Gilda shipping.

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    14. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2012 at 2:07 PM

      Thanks for sharing.

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    15. Ese_VatoFebruary 28, 2012 at 2:57 PM

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    16. Ese_VatoFebruary 28, 2012 at 2:59 PM

      Gilda looks cute as a pony /)^3^(\

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    17. TenchiFreak5February 28, 2012 at 3:09 PM

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    18. TenchiFreak5February 28, 2012 at 3:13 PM

      Okay, yeah. You got my attention. Can always use more Gilda stories, and this one gives off those lovely HoG vibes.



      Plus, I've been interested in reading GilDash lately (that's what this is, right?), so this came at a pretty good time.

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    19. Party FavorsFebruary 28, 2012 at 4:47 PM

      I've been following this since its inception on FimFiction. It's a great fic so far (though I'm biased in favor of anything starring Gilda), and has the potential to become even better if the rest will keep up the intro's quality.

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    20. Tricky-StepFebruary 28, 2012 at 6:09 PM

      @Party Favors
      Do you mean all three chapters?

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    21. TundraFebruary 28, 2012 at 6:23 PM

      That's...
      interesting.
      In any case, I'm not rating it one way or the other just yet.

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    22. TenchiFreak5June 12, 2012 at 7:18 AM

      I really like the way that you are writing her in this so far. This latest chapter is perhaps the best in that regard, too.



      In regards to your question on FiM Fiction, I think this new formatting is good. It helps the reader keep their place in the chapter without accidentally skipping lines or anything.

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    23. Aldo5037August 22, 2012 at 3:10 PM

      Wait!! But what will be Gilda's cutie mark???

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