Author: AuroraDawn
Description: Trixie has been driven by vengeance to become a better magician than any other pony. But when she finally achieves this, her thirst for power shows no end, bringing Trixie to consider grander schemes than a successful career, and into plots of a more... treasonous nature.Subject of Revenge Part 1
Subject of Revenge Part 2
Subject of Revenge Part 3
Subject of Revenge Part 4
Subject of Revenge Part 5 (New!)
Additional Tags: Power hungry Trixie causes problems
32 comments:
Yay for disgruntled cream on head trixie!
It seems that in every fic where there's another power to rival the alicorn sisters that Trixie always sides with that other power, she must be very power hungry...
Anyways, I'm gonna have to give this a read, sounds interesting.
First of all Yay for the pic. Second, it looks like an interesting read.
-Minty
The frosting is spreading ^w^
Yay for frosting! I knew we were on to something!
You've got to be kidding me... Oh well, anybody got some milk?
-Moonlight Ballad, Bard of Equestria
Trixie showing an interest in plots? Me gusta.
@Saufsoldat
I see what you did there :)
Hey, you made it to EqD!
I like what you've got up to now, can't wait to see what follows. ^^
Hmmm.
Hmmmmmmmm.
Well, it IS Trixie, after all.
You got it on EqD! And it's doing well! *squee*
A very nice story! Wonderfully written and interesting. I just wish the preview image was more... suited for the fic. You need a pic that's more grand and powerful.
Ah, a much much better pic for this story.
@Specter Von Baren
Yeah, I won't be making that mistake again! Haha~
I wonder how long it will take Dreamy to figure out where Trixie got the money?
Ooh, who made the title pic, with Trixie burning the wanted poster? I want more of it!
HOW ARE YOU PEOPLE SUCH AMAZING ANIMATORS IT MAKES NO SENSE!!
"and into plots of a more... treasonous nature."
Heh...um...pass the mind soap please.
Well now, this just got a LOT more interesting! I think I like where this is going, Aurora. Keep up the good work.
-Moonlight Ballad, Bard of Equestria
Hhm... be careful with the Strater character. OC's need to be handled delicately lest they alienate the readers.
No Grimdark tag so I'm not readin but that's a pretty awesome pic.
I love everything about this story. It still needs a refining, but the whole concept is ~magical~. In my top 10, definitely!
A Trixie story that isnt grimdark or shipping? will have to check out
Hey,
What an amazing story! Eagerly looking forward to more!
Yours,
JMH
“Sorry. What I’m saying is, sometimes weird ideas sound bad by themselves, but when paired with other weird ideas they become brilliant. So don’t forget the odd thoughts."
you should write the lines in the Doctor Who show.
good story, trixie is getting what she want,but also what she didnt expect heh
I like the direction this story is taking. Definitely something to watch out for.
So... Trixie is now Jesus? Strater and Trixie kind of compliment each other a bit it seems. Trixie doesn't believe in having empathy for others and thus doesn't understand it but she does in fact have feelings underneath her exterior as seen when she mentioned her parents. Strater on the other hand, does understand that being nice to people is important but at the same time, it seems to me that he more cares about it because it's a useful tool and not necessarily out of any good will to others.
Favorite quote from the chapter.
"Trixie loves you too obnoxious nut job."
Well, even though Trixie seems to have dropped the whole "revenge" thing, which was the reason I started reading this, it's still an interesting read.
@Zexoguy
She's getting there, don't worry =P It's just the kind of revenge that, without enough exposition, makes the fiction jump the shark.
This one still alive? Has been a very good read so far...
AuroraDawn, please, I beg of you, continue the story. It's a read that I love. Dearly.
Well, it looks like no one has touched this in over a month, so I'll be the one to ask is the story still alive?
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