• Story: Child of Two Worlds (Update Part 2!)

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    [Sad]

    Author: Sketch Scribbles
    Description: Forgetting the past is easier said than done, especially when fate keeps trying to remind you of it. But perhaps Luna isn't as alone as she thought...
    Child of Two Worlds, Part 1: Luna's Prison
    Child of Two Worlds, Part 2: The Last Day (New!)

    Additional Tags: Derailment of Cannon, Substitute mane six, Sad Luna, Nightmare Ponies, Merponies
    Tuesday, October 25, 2011 op
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    18 comments:

    1. BombedrumbumOctober 25, 2011 at 10:00 PM

      Sad is the only tag? Wow.....sounds, sad.....

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    2. RBDashOctober 25, 2011 at 10:00 PM

      spike and discord?

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    3. HanselOctober 25, 2011 at 10:01 PM

      That's quite the set of ponies in the labels to help Luna.

      Hah, not even canon stuff can stop fics!

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    4. BombedrumbumOctober 25, 2011 at 10:01 PM

      Merponies sounds good, though!

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    5. Renegade Of FunkOctober 25, 2011 at 10:02 PM

      more sad fics ._.

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    6. TheIdlingRevOctober 25, 2011 at 10:08 PM

      Think I'll bookmark this for later...

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    7. Dr.Dͪ͊ͦḮ̘ͯS̔̐̓C̹̔Ò͓͙̫R̀͠͞D͙̫October 25, 2011 at 10:13 PM

      Ooo me in picture its now a must read XD

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    8. AnonymousOctober 25, 2011 at 10:18 PM

      @Discord

      It's like you're really Discord lol!

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    9. BlackbeltOctober 25, 2011 at 10:23 PM

      More! Must read more!



      Awesome story is awesome.

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    10. DawidOctober 25, 2011 at 11:05 PM

      [spoiler]
      TWILIGHT IS TRIXIE LITTLE SISTER?!
      [/spoiler]
      Want more..

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    11. Dr.Dͪ͊ͦḮ̘ͯS̔̐̓C̹̔Ò͓͙̫R̀͠͞D͙̫October 26, 2011 at 12:43 AM

      This comment has been removed by the author.

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    12. DiscordOctober 26, 2011 at 6:38 AM

      @Discord

      Are you a spy?

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    13. Sketch ScribblesOctober 28, 2011 at 10:00 PM

      wow, i honestly didn't expect this to get above a 3...

      you know, four months ago i had actual hobbies. one argument ending with "just watch the show." "only I'f you'll shut up about it." later, and i make... this... thing. this isn't even my genre! i'm a scifi geek!

      @Bombedrumbum
      Considering a reoccurring theme is homesick luna, [sad] was more or less a mandatory tag.

      @RBDash
      yeah, i dunno why spike is there... unless something suddenly changes enough for me to do a rewrite, he doesn't get a speaking part in the entire story. even in twilight's chapters.

      @Jelfes

      well, obviously discord's not there to help her, but yeah. each of those ponies plays an important role, even if some only seem to be in the background.

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    14. banjo2ENovember 18, 2011 at 6:17 PM

      Since this is MLP, can you please give us a happy ending wherein Twilight uses her SUPER SPECIAL SNOWFLAKE MARK POWERS to open a portal to the moon and everyone gets to live together in harmony? Because that'd be exactly the kind of thing that this fandom should have more of. Srsly, grimdark spam in a children's show, much?

      Looking forward to future developments regarding Twilight, and a completely different scene with Trixie.

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    15. AlondroNovember 19, 2011 at 7:05 PM

      @Discord

      He's a clone I made from you. I'm a geneticist! :D

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    16. banjo2EFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:43 AM

      I miss this story. Please update, if you ever read this, author.

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    17. Sketch ScribblesApril 20, 2013 at 12:27 AM

      I've taken down the copy on Google docs. I'm fixing a few continuity problems with it, then I'm reposting it on fimfiction.net under the name "Cortland Apple". Chapter 3/5 is Written just needs editing, and I'm starting on chapter 4/5 right now. To be honest, for the longest time i thought this fic was unsalvageable after i got stuck part way through writing chapter 3, but having recently read another fic with a similar premise, (though drastically different in execution) that gave me a few ideas on how to save it.

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    18. Sketch ScribblesApril 20, 2013 at 12:32 AM

      Also, the rewrites have invalidated all of the tags except "twilight" "luna" "discord". Again.

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