Monday, December 5, 2011

Story: All of a Fluttershy

[Comedy]

Author: Impossible Numbers
Description: When Applejack discovers that a thief has been stealing her prized apples, she looks for help in capturing the culprit. Fluttershy is eager to step in, but she's been acting very oddly of late...
All of a Fluttershy

Additional Tags: A pony friendship-comedy whodunnit

18 comments:

Select Few said...

Guessing before reading: It's Angel.

Shingo said...

Come on everypony! There's a mystery afoot! Or is it ahoof?

Jack Knox said...

Who dunnit? lolidunno.
DONE.

Marine726 said...

Eh it was a decent story! But still good worth my time!

Thar said...

A mystery is upon us! Call in Sherclop Holmes (not THAT kind of clop, it's not a dirty word!)

Fluttershy said...

A story about me?
you rock, woohoo!
I guess ill try it :)

twohuman said...

I have the coolest idea for a small fluttershy comic now. I am going to make the Stare at least 20% cooler!

DPV111 said...

Good god RD was a total bitch in this one.
I'll let it go since it's a comedy fic but that was borderline OOC.
Hmm. What should Flutters fight next? I know! A Salamander!

Xuncu said...

It was ok, but felt kinda messy and rushed...

Stryke said...

That was cute as hell and nicely episodic in feel in a good couple of places.

Conner Cogwork said...

I thought that was an AMAZINGLY good read. Absolutely loved it. ^^

Nomad Prime said...

Big Macintosh reminds me of GrimdarkBigMac in this. the ending was so perfect.

Luna-tic Scientist said...

Excellent story, despite the foreshadowing I didn't figure it out until the 'reveal'. Really enjoyed it, had some great descriptive bits (the 'stare' and 'windows on the soul' spring to mind).

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