Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Story: Snowfall (Update Story 2 Part 3!)


[Sad] It's an OC pony, so have some Applejack!

Author: Golden Dragon
Description: A mysterious pony with amnesia shows up in Ponyville in the middle of a winter night. Who is he, and why has he come?
Snowfall Part 1
Snowfall Part 2
Snowfall Part 3
Snowfall Part 4

Spring Blossom Part 1
Spring Blossom Part 2
Spring Blossom Part 3 (New!)

Additional Tags: OC Pony, Amnesia, Drama

27 comments:

DJ Midli said...

Ohh OC and AJ gonna chekc this out

Jelfes said...

Haven't seen this story idea before, very original of you.

DJ Midli said...

>MFW i clearly got owned by my speedreading of the description. (Still checking it out :P)

Unknown said...

*gulp* amnesia? LAWL, it's not in any way connected to... Please no?

Streek471 said...

Looks like somepony has a startling case of...AMNESIA!

Unknown said...

That is a good story, :)

ChronicallyCreative said...

Well, I feel sheepish.
I just wrote a 2 pt fanfic of my pony OC crashing into Rainbow and breaking her wing/hitting her head causing her to lose her memory except for a few things like her name. I was trying to find a post date of this because I just wrote mine about 2 days ago. Looks like we had the same idea bro. I just dont want someone to accuse me of copying. Although yours is waaay more well written than mine is.. xD If literature can have doodle forms, mine is doodle level. I've never written fanfiction before until now and then I stumble across this thinkin my idea was sooo original.

/feels very unnoriginal now.

no said...

Hey, could you at least post a source, to where you got the picture from? That'd be nice for the artist.

iAndster said...

Just read part 1

I feel shipping between Rainbow Dash and Snowfall coming up...

Azarias said...

That was a pretty nice read I look forward to part 2.

On a semi related note, more stories need to be set during the winter. Seriously now, it makes for a great environment.

iAndster said...

Needs part two now D:

EDracon said...

wait... end part 1? but huh... how do you do a part 2 from THIS?!?

Robert said...

@EDracon mwahaha, there's a hint in the story . . .

lmaozorzz said...

HA HA! I know what the hint is!!!!!! >:)

Richard said...

I would be cool if someone made a elfen lied pony story

That anime was so basass

Oscar Strokosz said...

Man, this fan-fic was dark. it was amazing
then again, it's the first fan-fic I have ever read so you know...

woodledoodledoodle said...

If someone's cold and hurt, they dont declare that they're cold and hurt
they'd probably make some sort of pathetic sounding whine and attempt to claw their way around.

i dont know how exactly to word that.
you get 3.5 stars rounded to 4

Robert said...

@woodledoodledoodle

I'm intending to do some work on the first four chapters soon.

Timber said...

Spring Blossom is really weak minded.

Robert said...

@Timber

Or Mistress' magic is strong . . .

iAndster said...

The second part is about Spring Blossom?

D'aw I wanted them to find a magical way to revive Snowfall and everything was happily ever after.

Then again almost nothing ever works that way and I am sadface.

PaperCamm said...

Is the... Organization in this fix the same as the one in Past Sins?

jimmynator said...

reading part 2
so snowfall is alive?
ohhh its a flashback
but wait he is alive?
wait is spring blossom going back or is it a flashback?
is it both??
is it like a re run or something?
dammit this is the most confusing shit ever!

Robert said...

@jimmynator

Yes, there's a flashback
Yes, he's alive now, too

Das said...

Great job golden,I will for sure enjoy reading the end
<3 NIBBLES <3

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