Author: NightOfAccordionSax
Description: After living in Ponyville for so long, Twilight is used to strangeSix Mares in Tanks
things happening to her and her friends. One would think nothing could
faze her. However, she may have met her strangest challenge yet. The
Ponyville penal system! Can she handle the terror of a system designed
by ponies who weren’t really trying? *Note: story does not contain
ponies in armored vehicles
Additional Tags: Main Six, Dialog, Crazy, Jail, Tank,
34 comments:
surface-to-air Pinkie Pie
What a tease
Yes! Random and comedy make the perfect combination com tags!
Tanks you say?
So random, the title doesn't even make sense.
Oh boy.
*Note: story does not contain
ponies in armored vehicles
*Note: story does not contain ponies in armored vehicles... I died a little inside
I see what you did there.
that was intresting 3/5
> "Ponies in Tanks"
:D
> "Does not contain ponies in armored vehicles"
:(
> *Reads the story*
XD
A very silly little read, and it makes sense surprisingly. Would recommend
@Pinkie Pie
I know that feel bro
Consarnit, I want ponies in M1 Abrams!
I'm severely disappointed in the lack of armored ground attack vehicles.
As Gypsy said, the story's quite interesting. Nice read. End of transmission.
That was surprising and amusing. Well done.
@Pinkie Pie
Yeah, that one was my bad. I asked for clarification as to what the word, "Tank," meant... and the rest is history.
Oh...those kinds of tanks...
Totally silly and random. My favorite kind of fanfic!
Great misleading but not misleading title, and a very, very random story.
Overall, I liked it very much. But I can only say three words: WTF!?!?!?
Hahaha!
First thing I thought of when I read the title was drunk tanks. Then I thought, 'No, that'd be too easy.'
Then I thought of sea ponies in a fish tank.
I was promptly disappointed.
*Note: Story does not contain ponies in armoured vehicles
that made me sad
No tanks whhhhhyyyyyy -:(
Advert on the side for a game with an actual tank. Pinkie Pie: Spoooooooooooky.
the lack of ponies in armoured vehicles is seriously putting me off from reading this piece of fiction.
I loved the story. Fun and funny.
As for the facts that it doesn't contain ponies in armored vehicles... WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR! WE MUST MAKE IT HAPPEN! GET WRITING!
Despite the lack of armoured vehicles this story was quite enjoyable. We need a prequel of Twlight's night though!
Baited!
okay, funny, to an extent. But a good bit of fridge horror in there.
Consider: Twilight was convicted of multiple crimes without a trial, without legal counsel, without an opportunity to mount a defense or confront her accusers, without being informed of what she had done.... without even being WOKEN UP before sentence was carried out. To say nothing of the legal absurdity of some of the charges she and her friends were hit with (public nudity in a civilization with no nudity taboo? Jaywalking in a civilization with no paved roads or cars? Imprisonment for "speeding" and petty larceny?) Mild punishment or no, that's a pretty horrifying legal system. (And considering that dunking was used as a form of torture in the Salem witch trials... maybe not so mild as it might seem. Especially if you're aquaphobic, or can't swim.... or are unconscious when you got dunked)
>*Note: story does not contain
ponies in armored vehicles
-Oooooowwwwwwww... :(. Why ?
(sigh)... might read...
Oh, and don't forget that Twilight was more than likely falsely accused, convicted, and sentenced, and her personal record and reputation permanently besmirched....
Title - "Six Mares in Tanks"
"*Note: story does not contain
ponies in armored vehicles."
Title is misleading...
I don't even care about the lack of armoured vehicles; this was awesome and silly and I want a prequel of Twilight's night. :D
And it does kinda make sense, as Equestria makes earth as a whole look like nazi germany. I hope dunk-tank prison becomes canon!
So. Much. Win. Title is misleading though D:
@RHJunior
Ahhh... The ability to see ''horror'' anywhere and everywhere, and even where there's not really any to speak of.
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>"I'm in a dunk booth!?!" Twilight yelled out
-Huhhh, whaaa ? Ooook ?
>The others responded with a void of silence. Muttering something about "crazy ponies"
-I tend to agree more and more with the last part of that statement, as I read, honestly.
>"I have to admit Rare, I never would have thought you had it in you"
-Me neither...
>"Nothing! I think he just did it for the thrill of it."
-I always knew that darn rabbit was only trouble !
... meh... It was 'ok', at most it was mildly interesting ...
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