Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Story: Serving Justice

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Author: The Mechanic
Description: A young mare's research into the nature of Justice yields unexpected results, and shapes the rest of her life.
Serving Justice

Additional Tags: Slice of Life, Justice, Legal

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

I miss the days where people didn't fight over who was the first post.

Anonymous said...

Why do you even mention it?

Anonymous said...

Because his comment makes him more unique than all the other comments.

This story needs a touch more Trollestia.

Anonymous said...

First

Denon said...

I wish the Brooklyn Supreme Court was like this. (I'm an intern at the DA's Office). I could hang out with ponies all day :)

Scorch_Mechanic said...

First my grin was wide.
Then it got wider.
Then I giggled.
Then I smiled.
Then I laughed with joy.
Then I sat back in disappointment. Surely that's not the end?

The tag says "incomplete". There is more to come!
I look forward to it, dear author.

Additional thoughts:
Though it was silly of me, I expected a shouted "OBJECTION!" or "TAKE THAT!". When none were forthcoming, I was very satisfied you didn't play a meme for cheap laughs.

Glimmer was glamoured!
I chuckled.

I am curious as to how exactly the Princesses knew about Glimmer's desires... I suppose I'll put it down to them being goddesses or something.

Also, why bring the bailiff and guards out of retirement? Granted it's all a bit theatrical, but did it need to be?

Corwyn said...

In some naming conventions, her name would be a pun.
Glimmer of Hope
(Daughter's name, born of, Mother's name).

BlankFlankBrony said...

Well written, with just the right touch of humor.

Anonymous said...

FOR GREAT JUSTICE

Anonymous said...

FOR THE GREATER GOOD

But I lol'd. Nice fic! Awesome work with twists.

Anonymous said...

I hate lawyers. That is all I will say about this.

Anonymous said...

@Anonymous We're an eminently hate-able breed.

On the other hand, Glimmer isn't, which is rare for a lawyer. I had a whole lot of sympathy for her plight, throughout, and I thought this was a particularly well-written fic, even if she did exhibit some notoriously Sue-ish traits.

Kudos to the author, five stars from me!

La Barata said...

Gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ^^

Steel said...

I rather liked this one, nice, to the point and it comes from a new angle. Very nice and I look forward to more from this author.

Jace Arveduin said...

I've yet to read it yet, but that picture can only be trumped by a picture of Minas Tirith in the same style.

Yuri said...

Justice does not exist!!! It is an illusion

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