Author: Tumbleweed
Description: When a very...special individual comesVengeance and Fashion (All Links!)(New chapter 4!)
to Ponyville, Twilight volunteers to manage Rarity's shop. Hijinks
ensue. What else could happen?
Additional Tags: Comedy Hijinks Vengeance Fashion
35 comments:
what a twist
Lolz, fantastic story so far! Can't wait to see how it turns out!
I'm looking forward to what happens next, I love hijinks.
I like where this is going
Is that an Electric Six reference as the title?
"So she can seduce him!"
hehe ok I like it
The use of the dictionary in the second chapter ws great.
First because I can easily see Twilight reading a dictionary to note changes between editions, and because I can easily see Spike looking up words in the dictonary to use as insults.
Oh, THIS oughta be good. Looking forward to further installments. Also, I'm still waiting for a fic to try to justify Prince Blueblood's douchey behavior, but I guess he's way below most writers' standards. We can sympathize with Trixie and Gilda, but nopony will give the time of day to Blueblood.
I require more. More, I say!
I came in here just to compliment the Electric Six reference.
Okay, this was a damn fun read. There were numerous laugh-out-loud funny lines, but Applejack's comment "Ya do know I'm named after liquor, right?" was the best for my money. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Yes. Yes! YES!
I will be following this fanfic with great interest.
"Ya do know I'm named after liquor, right?"
PFFAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Oh, man, this is great stuff. I REQUIRE MOAR.
:D Ahaha, excellent read, I look forward to reading more =p
Great story, looking forward to the rest.
Its great to read this in their voices. Can't wait to read more.
Oh this is wonderful! I can't wait for more!
Everyone is enjoyably in character. I can really hear their voices when I read.
The Cutie Mark Crusaders are absolutely adorable. Dry-cleaners are... not so much a go. reLeavingNowBye!
I'm eager to see how Spike's actions unfurl.
The continuation of Applejack and Rarity's special friendship from "Learning Curves" is warming and delightful. I loved that story, and anything that follows in it's subtle hoofprints is going tug at my heartstrings.
Thank you for a wonderful read. And please update soon. ^.^
I like where this story is going.
AHHHAHAahew . .. i really like where this is going . . . . I hope to see more soon. Its got its own charm and i fell for it LMAO. I kept a smile the whole time . . . an the little tidbit with flutterhsy BAHAAHAHA!!!
Part 4 was awesome.
lulz were had
Radium dust!? Okay...what fashion book was she reading?
Still awesomely funny.
Spike get's an extended vocabulary, Prince Blueduche get's put in his place and pinkie shows up for no other reason than she's Pinkie Pie and with snacks no less.
Is this complete? Either way, it was a great read!
"Now Spike, just put these lead lines gloves on-"
5 stars author. Well done.
"Those ponies are so random."
Amazing that not only was it Pinkie Pie that said it, but that it made perfect sense in the context it was used.
So many fantastic moments in this chapter.
This whole story was kinda random.
But it was also rather entertaining. Most enjoyable, nothing else to say ^^
This was great!
Somepony just has to draw Captain Jack Harness.
Just hilarious! I really, really hope the story isn't over yet.
@DJ Rainbow Dash
Me too! Nice to see some other Electric Six fans out there!
This was absolutely brilliant. Hysterical, well-characterized, and really reminiscent of the joyful energy of the show.
I honestly think this is one of the best MLP fan fictions I have ever read.
I'm a man, and I'm torn between vengeance and fashion!
Anyways, it was pretty good. It started out slow, but it picked up with the CMC. My favorite part was the bit with the Twilight putting radium in Blueblood's suit.
Best. Comedy. Story. EVER!
Every single line in the confrontation was just golden!
You've made me very happy. Thank you!
And I would love to see more of your subtle Applerare fanfic!
I actually read this because Kkat recommended it, and I don't regret it at all. The characterization was spot-on; I could easily hear in my head the lines being said in the voices we've all come to love, and the first three chapters made me smile. Chapter 4 though is the one that had me laughing out loud; the back and forth between all the characters was the perfect culmination to the crazy events prior! Bravo!
(Personally though, I favor Applejack/Fluttershy, Twilight/Rarity, and Pinkie/Dash if one was to ship the whole mane cast, but then I never said I wasn't weird.)
Anyway, thanks for the laughs!
Radium in the suit? Telling Spike to use lead-lined gloves? Yeah, I'd say that's a not-so-subtle hint that Twilight and Blueblood have met before, and that whatever happened, it went badly-enough that this meeting has pushed her over the edge.
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