Description: Yet another take on where the ponies came from, and why their creators aren't around anymore.
This was a fun read! A few spelling errors, but I think the concept was very cool, and you did it well.
Well... that was, different ?Err, I guess it could be a way, through fantasy of course, to explain the apparition of magical ponies on a quite-like-Earth planet ?Also, I like that last touch in the end, with the 5 Sages creating the 2 Pegacorns and becoming the 5 Elements :)
"And that, my son, is how ponies are made."
its just epic
Glad to see people liked it. I've been trying to work on chapter two of On Wings of SCIENCE!, but then the writebug bit and it had this story instead. :/ Still, at least I know I'm not completely incompitent if I can throw this together and have it not be crap.As for the errors, I've gone through it again and I think I've cleaned up most of them, now. If anyone notices some that I missed, it'd be great if you said something so I can fix it.
This is the first fanfic I've ever read, and I can wholeheartedly say, damn that's good. I'm definitely going to be reading more. Especially if they're as awesome as this.