[Sad]
Author: Sketch Scribbles
Description: Forgetting the past is easier said than done, especially when fate keeps trying to remind you of it. But perhaps Luna isn't as alone as she thought...Child of Two Worlds, Part 1: Luna's Prison
Child of Two Worlds, Part 2: The Last Day (New!)
Additional Tags: Derailment of Cannon, Substitute mane six, Sad Luna, Nightmare Ponies, Merponies
18 comments:
Sad is the only tag? Wow.....sounds, sad.....
spike and discord?
That's quite the set of ponies in the labels to help Luna.
Hah, not even canon stuff can stop fics!
Merponies sounds good, though!
more sad fics ._.
Think I'll bookmark this for later...
Ooo me in picture its now a must read XD
@Discord
It's like you're really Discord lol!
More! Must read more!
Awesome story is awesome.
[spoiler]
TWILIGHT IS TRIXIE LITTLE SISTER?!
[/spoiler]
Want more..
@Discord
Are you a spy?
wow, i honestly didn't expect this to get above a 3...
you know, four months ago i had actual hobbies. one argument ending with "just watch the show." "only I'f you'll shut up about it." later, and i make... this... thing. this isn't even my genre! i'm a scifi geek!
@Bombedrumbum
Considering a reoccurring theme is homesick luna, [sad] was more or less a mandatory tag.
@RBDash
yeah, i dunno why spike is there... unless something suddenly changes enough for me to do a rewrite, he doesn't get a speaking part in the entire story. even in twilight's chapters.
@Jelfes
well, obviously discord's not there to help her, but yeah. each of those ponies plays an important role, even if some only seem to be in the background.
Since this is MLP, can you please give us a happy ending wherein Twilight uses her SUPER SPECIAL SNOWFLAKE MARK POWERS to open a portal to the moon and everyone gets to live together in harmony? Because that'd be exactly the kind of thing that this fandom should have more of. Srsly, grimdark spam in a children's show, much?
Looking forward to future developments regarding Twilight, and a completely different scene with Trixie.
@Discord
He's a clone I made from you. I'm a geneticist! :D
I miss this story. Please update, if you ever read this, author.
I've taken down the copy on Google docs. I'm fixing a few continuity problems with it, then I'm reposting it on fimfiction.net under the name "Cortland Apple". Chapter 3/5 is Written just needs editing, and I'm starting on chapter 4/5 right now. To be honest, for the longest time i thought this fic was unsalvageable after i got stuck part way through writing chapter 3, but having recently read another fic with a similar premise, (though drastically different in execution) that gave me a few ideas on how to save it.
Also, the rewrites have invalidated all of the tags except "twilight" "luna" "discord". Again.
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