Description: An unusually dry summer is nothing the ponies of Ponyville can't deal with, but what happens when it begins to affect things outside of their town?
Well, this sucks. In my excitement about a new fic I did not notice the Grimdark tag. Now I want to know what happens next, but I am scared to find out.First chapter was good, anyway. Not sure if I will ever read the second.
To be continued, eh? I guess there will be a lot more to this story than a simple denouement. Although it was tense and with bits of violence, I wouldn't say this seemed particularly grimdark. Save for the ending, of course; that was something to make one's breath halt. I'm curious to see where this story goes.
Not very Grimdark... yet.
I can tell the next few chapters are going to be very grimdark..
So far so good. Great writing skills. It played out in my mind like a movie.
Thanks for the comments guys! This is actually the first story I've ever written, so I'm glad to see the feed back.
*Ahem* MOAR. All I've got to say. MOAR. Well, that and EPIC WIN. That about sums it up.
I'm working on the second one right now, I'm open to suggestions if any one has any ideas. Feel free to email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
It was a nice read IMO but my problem is with the title, because of the ending of chapter one is with*SPOILERS*Chapter one ends with Fluttershy with a fang embedded in her neck and the title name is "Poison" which makes the reader speculate that the fang is filled with poison.Anyway that was a good read and I did not find any obvious spelling/grammar mistakes, 5-stars for you.
That was...good. I hope the next chapter is finished soon.
It's taken me some time to get started on the second chapter. I had some writer's block, mostly because I was planning further ahead than just the next chapter.Plus I spent more than a few nights skimming my medical books to help plan some things out. Either way, as of today the plot and details of Chapter two "Venom" is complete and I've officially started writing it. I'm a fast writer once I get to it. Expect it within two days.
So... Is part 2 coming or what?
Three months later:Hello? Anypony home?