Description: A crossover between the Legend of Zelda and Friendship is Magic
It's going to be a series, 8 parts. All 6 temples, the prologue and the last battle.
"A crossover between the legend of zelda and ocarina of time."little mistake here? :P
Yes, I will use less of the word "Friendship" in the next chapters. My second story, how exciting!
It's kinda short and choppy, and jumps from one thing to the next so fast it nearly leaves you dizzy.Maybe slow it down some? Unless that's what you were going for. Otherwise, it's good so far.
nice concept, keep on writing and maybe polish it up a bit otherwise i love it~
@AnonymousI will admit, I did jump around a lot. That was mostly because I didn't want to try to go into detail. I was worried I might bore people if I did that.
This idea is completely silly!Nonetheless, I encourage it full-heartedly.
heh, i really likes the preview pic. It made me lol
I sure hope this gets a sequel some time. I really enjoyed it. Some more detail would be great but other than that I really like it a lot.
@hikuroHi there. I like the story. You say (well, kriby says) you have planned 8 chapters - prologue, 6 temples, final battle.I have some ideas for the very beginning of the game, and if you are interested, I would love to work it out in conjunction to your story; make them work together (or at least not contradict eachother). How would I contact you, should you be interested?