Description: Spike is held against his will by three devious characters. How will he escape?
a few liberties were taken between the story and the pic
@Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party ClownBlogger scrunched the comic down, so I had to make some sacrifices.
@Sethisto thank very much, kind sir
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yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss..........................................Perfect. The characters were spot on, and I love how you made Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo secretly (well at least to Spike) behind it all.Great job, and I'm glad you decided to give shipping a try.There needs to be more Applebloom x Spike. This is a great addition, and I look forward to more by you, whether they be shipping OR normal. No grimdark from you though. ha.
:DSprinkles, when you put your mind to it, you really can be one of our most wonderful writefriends.
I d'awwwd heartily
Can't stop smiling. :)
HNRRRG, my heart. I really enjoyed that, thanks!
this made me giggle - though I wouldnt want the shipping to be more than a girlish crush I found the awkwardness cute.
Seriously cute and innocent. Two thumbs.
spike handling 3 lady's at once :B
I like how you integrated that great Princess Spike pic, too. Nice work!
@PacceThis times ten.
Just finished reading it. It was absolutely adorable. <3
This was way too cute. I'm such a sucker for Spike/Applebloom fics. This was great. I'm hoping you write more like this.
daaaawwwwwwww how cute
That was adorable:)
Made my day.Well done.
THAT WAS SO CUTE THAT I STATED TO PUKE RAINBOWS, SUNSHINE, CANDY AND MOTHERFUCKING FRIENDSHIP!!! in a good way. Seriusly though I think that is the most times ive said awwww in such a short time.
Now that I've gotten over my little fangirl spree with Spike and Applebloom (2 of my favorite characters) I do have ONE problem with this fic.Applebloom was acting a little too shy. We see in the cartoon that she's more headstrong like her sister, and I didn't really get that feel from this fic.Maybe this is simply her reaction to her first feelings of love? I don't know.Still unbearably cute writing, especially coming from you. But I guess you already proved that with Trespasser.
That was adorable. I liked it when Spike was a princess.
@MidnightFact. I was thinking "Spike and Applebloom? eeeeehhh" but this was just perfect.
3rd time I've read it. haha
Hnnnnghh, this gave me a weird, warm feeling...but it's all goood.
@Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party ClownAre you human asshole?Ты чё мудак?