Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Story: Hostage Situation


[Shipping...?] More Last minute friend-off stuff!
Description: Spike is held against his will by three devious characters. How will he escape?
Hostage Situation

29 comments:

Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party Clown said...

a few liberties were taken between the story and the pic

Sethisto said...

@Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party Clown

Blogger scrunched the comic down, so I had to make some sacrifices.

Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party Clown said...

@Sethisto thank very much, kind sir

Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party Clown said...

ignore first post

Cottonmouth said...

yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss..........................................


Perfect. The characters were spot on, and I love how you made Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo secretly (well at least to Spike) behind it all.

Great job, and I'm glad you decided to give shipping a try.

There needs to be more Applebloom x Spike. This is a great addition, and I look forward to more by you, whether they be shipping OR normal.

No grimdark from you though. ha.

Pacce said...

:D
Sprinkles, when you put your mind to it, you really can be one of our most wonderful writefriends.

Anonymous said...

I d'awwwd heartily

Anonymous said...

Can't stop smiling. :)

Anonymous said...

HNRRRG, my heart. I really enjoyed that, thanks!

Midnight said...

this made me giggle - though I wouldnt want the shipping to be more than a girlish crush I found the awkwardness cute.

Mads said...

Seriously cute and innocent. Two thumbs.

pollardy said...

spike handling 3 lady's at once :B

Anonymous said...

I like how you integrated that great Princess Spike pic, too. Nice work!

Retl said...

Just finished reading it. It was absolutely adorable. <3

Anonymous said...

This was way too cute. I'm such a sucker for Spike/Applebloom fics.

This was great. I'm hoping you write more like this.

hikuro said...

daaaawwwwwwww how cute

Starbuck said...

That was adorable
:)

Hiro said...

Made my day.

Well done.

Anonymous said...

sooo cuuuuteeee

Anonymous said...

THAT WAS SO CUTE THAT I STATED TO PUKE RAINBOWS, SUNSHINE, CANDY AND MOTHERFUCKING FRIENDSHIP!!! in a good way.

Seriusly though I think that is the most times ive said awwww in such a short time.

Cottonmouth said...

Now that I've gotten over my little fangirl spree with Spike and Applebloom (2 of my favorite characters) I do have ONE problem with this fic.

Applebloom was acting a little too shy. We see in the cartoon that she's more headstrong like her sister, and I didn't really get that feel from this fic.

Maybe this is simply her reaction to her first feelings of love? I don't know.

Still unbearably cute writing, especially coming from you. But I guess you already proved that with Trespasser.

Desert Rose said...

That was adorable. I liked it when Spike was a princess.

Anonymous said...

@Midnight
Fact. I was thinking "Spike and Applebloom? eeeeehhh" but this was just perfect.

Anonymous said...

3rd time I've read it. haha

Shaun said...

Hnnnnghh, this gave me a weird, warm feeling...but it's all goood.

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