Description: Scootaloo meets her first crush, and the cutie mark crusaders try to give her the confidence she needs to talk to him.
I approveBut why Sweetie Belle image?
@Anonymouswhy not sweetie belle image
Maybe it's a spoiler pic
I don't see why they are trying so hard for their cutie marks. A cutie mark does not represent everything you are capable of, just the most defining aspect of your personality. (Which you have to accept as a unique part of yourself, also some ponies have the same cutie marks as others. If you look carefully for a second Photo Finish has Twilight Sparkles cutie mark, it's either A a goof or B the mark means something different for her as she has 'Da magics'.)
What happened to "I draw the line at OC shipping", Seth?
@AnonymousI think he meant oc x oc and besides not many canon males with names in the show and they're all older than Scootaloo
@AnonymousWould just like to say Tornado Bolt is not an OC, hes a background pony who appears very briefly in call of the cutie at diamond tiara's party.
@VanderblastThis is objecting anon from earlier.Loophole found, carry on brony.
@AnonymousThats quite alright, he was in the background pretty good, more so than most other ponies. I can see why some people would think he was something I made up.
@AnonymousWould you rather have another Scootaloo/Rainbow Dash fic?
So. Goddamn. Adorable. Good work, dude!
ever heard of a tomboy? Anon who implies that Scootaloo is a lesbian.
Wait, what? why is the tag green?I thought this was normal until I read it. Anyway, scoot shipping without dash is pro. Carry on.
@Cray0nI'm glad you're cool with it. Secondly I'm not sure how people would ship Scoot and Dash other than a sisterly type of way.
@Vanderblast Well prepare to laugh. Or cry I guess.
@Cray0nI lost my shit at "Scootatrap".
@Cray0nI'll admit. I laughed
Brilliant show my boy
I had a lot of fun editing this. Vanderblast's characterisation of the CMC is absolutely spot-on, and I can totally see this as the plot of an actual show. Ms. Faust, are you reading this? Buy the script! Make this canon! :)
@Purple TinkerYou flatter me way too much
I lost it at "frankenstrudel".
Umm... huh. Going by muzzle, I'd have said Tornado Bolt was a girl.
@LordOfTheWrongsYea I thought so as well, but I decided to just work with the fact that he could be male.Especially since we don't exactly know if their muzzles differ when they're that young.
That was cute! I really liked it
SCOOTZ BEING SHIPPED? AND NOT WITH STEVEN MAGNET?I has sad. :(
Good work...though the ending kinda drags on.