Short and sweet, thanks.
I kinda really liked that.Twilight's response was perfect!
The world always needs more Twilight/Rainbow Dash.
Too short. Moar Boar wants Moar.
@Moar Boar1. Oh GOD I lol'd2. Agreed, moar.3. D'AWWWWWWWw ^^
Aw...Lol, short, but nice.
Okay, sorry if this sounds offensive but I have a bit to say on this.1. WAY too short.2. You needed to put the date in- you can't just build up to it then forget to put it in!3. Here's the storyline: Rainbow Dash crashes into the Treebrary; Twilight Sparkle helps Rainbow by fixing up her scratches; Suddenly and without warning Rainbow, (who realizes she has a small crush on Twilight,) jumps out and randomly kisses Twilight; Twilight get's mad at Rainbow so Rainbow kisses her again?4. You REALLY needed more plot development. The plot was WAY underdeveloped. 5. It looks like something a 6-year-old would write in their spare time.Okay, other than that I thought the story had some good ideas behind it and had a lot of potential. Next time put just a little more thought into the overall story?Thanks! -AdmiralCubie