Monday, February 14, 2011

Story: Pretty Fillies

[Shipping] A few late entries for the Valentines shipping thing coming up.
Description: Spike and Big Macintosh share their thoughts about the ideal mare.
 Pretty Fillies

19 comments:

Anonymous said...

Poor Spike... Rarity is really messed up in this fic, not even considering Spike a legit person to ask her out.

Pacce said...

You are a terrible person!
But the story is alright!

Anonymous said...

d'awww, so cu-
>dat ending
WHY

Anon Writepony said...

@Anonymous

Because.

Reading Brony said...

You are quite the card. Was not expecting that ending. Still cute though leading up to it.

Pecan said...

Now, hold on. We're assuming Spike asked first! It's possible that Big Mac asked first, and we don't need to get violent, right? RIGHT?

Anonymous said...

Or Rarity just thinks that Spike's way too young to consider like that. He is described as a "baby" dragon, after all.

Anon Writepony said...

@Pecan

Next time: Spike gets his revenge.

K said...

Awwww, now that just makes me sad. Poor Spike. He never gets any tail.

Anonymous said...

am i the only one that got the sweeny todd reference. i love that song and now it's stuck in my head thanks alot

Anonymous said...

The link seems to be broken :(

La Barata said...

D'OH!
Oh, Spike...

Anonymous said...

@Pecan

We know he asked: "Having been denied by the love of his life hurt him more this time than others."

Anonymous said...

Oh, wow...

I just want to hug Spike now...

Anonymous said...

♫ SWING YOUR HAMMER HIGH, SPIKEY; SWING IT TO THE SKY... ♫
♫ RING THE SKULLS OF ALL OF THOSE WHO WOMANIZE... ♫

Anonymous said...

I absolutely loved that ending.

Anonymous said...

Pretty fillies
Fascinating
Sipping coffee
Dancing
Pretty fillies
Are a wonder
Pretty fillies

Sitting in the window or
Standing on the stair
Something in them chills the air

Pretty fillies
Silhouetted
Stay within you
Glancing
Stay forever
Breathing lightly
Pretty fillies

Pretty fillies
Blowing out their candles or
Combing out their hair
Even when they leave
They still are there
They're there

Pretty fillies
At their mirrors
In their gardens
Letter-writing
Flower-picking
Weather-watching

How they make a colt sing
Proof of heaven as you're living
Pretty fillies! Sir, pretty fillies
Yes, pretty fillies
Pretty fillies
Pretty fillies
Pretty fillies

89masteryoda,Master of the Pony Saber Style said...

Wow amazing poem.you should definitely register! I'm ATM am just waiting for spike to take his revenge.... Ah shipping,one of the great joys of a bronys life...
My best friend told me about it,he intro'd me to bronyness.
A teacher of mine knows tho,she tells all her classes=I get pissed.wait.wait just a second.why the heck am I typing this. Oh screw it why do i care. My thumbs hurt. I can bet that I have the 2nd longest post that actually has something to do with Mlp.

ExtraSoap said...

I think spike just recieved a slap to the face from pony cupid. I know the feeling :'(

Great Story! Sequel? Maybe? Please?

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