• Story: Pony Apocalypse

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    [Grimdark] Yep, the most apocalyptic image I have!
    Summary: A short grimdark story about the apocalypse in Equestria.
    Pony Apocalypse

    Pony Apocalypse Part 2: Desperate Measures
    Friday, February 4, 2011 op
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    12 comments:

    1. aldarizFebruary 4, 2011 at 1:46 PM

      >mfw no comments

      its my first story, feel free to tell me i suck...

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    2. AlwayslateFebruary 4, 2011 at 4:34 PM

      @aldariz

      I made you an image and story, buuut I only post my stuff on /co/.

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    3. aldarizFebruary 4, 2011 at 6:36 PM

      @R.O. Brony

      ill be namefaggin it up on /co/ then. see you there...

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    4. DeviousPsychopathFebruary 5, 2011 at 6:56 PM

      Mygod.. That ending!
      That ending!
      This was brilliant!

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    5. LadyMoondancerFebruary 6, 2011 at 4:04 PM

      Awesome story!

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    6. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 12:24 AM

      You want comments? I'll give you comments!
      It was short. There, now that criticism is out of the way, I liked this story a lot. I felt like I was there, I could see the destruction of Ponyville, I could smell the burning airships and see Rainbow Dash's body language after her triumph. That one line, "I rode the lightning" gave me an image of Rainbow Dash, hair frizzled, eyes wide, knowing the true destructive power she possessed and knowing it would kill her, but willing to use it anyway.
      That's just my take on it, anyway.

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    7. aldarizFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:44 AM

      what? people like it? woot! my writing skills are kinda rusty after all the years, plus im not a native english speaker, but it seems i can still pump out decent story or two.

      thx guys.

      @Anonymous

      about it being short, i kinda agree. on the other hand, a wall of text would probably intimidate people. its just a fanfic after all...

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    8. BronyboyFebruary 10, 2011 at 2:25 PM

      Rainbow Dash. Riding the lightning.

      EPIC. AS. FUCK.

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    9. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:07 PM

      I liked this. :3

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    10. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 1:34 PM

      WE NEED MOAR!

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    11. AnonymousJuly 28, 2011 at 7:05 PM

      probably going to pony hell for this but does this mean applebloom got a wicked scythe cutie mark?

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    12. AnonymousAugust 16, 2011 at 10:45 PM

      That was beautiful. A thousand roses to you good sir.

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