Summary: An alternate ending to "Griffon the Brush-Off" where Pinkie tries a saucy prank to get on Gilda's good side.
Damn, that's cold.
BUT WAIT!The story's not over yet!Have the alternate tail as well!https://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0Bz0uoaPEmWsHNzNkZGIzYjQtYTQ4Yi00Y2YwLWI5NzMtM2E4ODYzODM5YTRm&hl=en&authkey=CIaqrfAG
Er, alternate TALE. I mean.
Seems the ponies get to host their own version of the Darwin Awards.
I hate commenting on my own story so many times, but I gotta say:This whole thing is dedicated to Madmax and her twisted sense of humor that I love ever so much.
Well that was....darker than I expected. Still, well written and entertaining. Good work Pacce!
What happened in the second story is what I was expecting when I read the first. Both are pretty danged funny and made me laugh pretty hard. Thanks to the original author(s) and to Dseibert28 for saving and posting them.It's great to see so many people getting into the alternate-ending business: they're great little shots of pure fun.P.S. Fillies and Gentlecolts: If possible, let's try to capture text when it's available; if it's posted as a picture please reply to let the author know about Equestria Daily and Google Docs (etc.).
Poor Pinkie. I think she should stick to ponies. Preferably Dash.
I didn't care for the original much. Too dark to be funny. The latter actually make me chuckle.
It's too small to read, but if you killed Pinkie in a non-grimdark story...that's not cool.