Description: A story about one pony's love for another and how she will do anything to keep it.
Goddamn that was depressing.
@AnonymousBut it was great.
Depressing but well written.
Good read but it was a little confusing at a few points due to terminology. Was beginning to wonder if they were supposed to be human or pony form towards the end.
Good story, if depressing. Could use a thorough read-through to get those last few spelling mistakes, such as 'to' instead of 'too' and vice versa. One thumb, might read again.
A few grammatical and spelling errors aside, this story was incredible! I never thought of grimdark/shipping to work together so wonderfully, and yet you've woven this tapestry of desperation and lust and...Man, I want to give you four stars, but those little things are what's holding me back. Great job, Thel!
I am actually in that same situation. I hate it and I hope ashy doesn't take it the same way bon bon does >-<