• Story: Admiration

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    [Shipping][Grimdark]  Shipping AND Grimdark?!  This one will be hell for the archive.
    Description: A story about one pony's love for another and how she will do anything to keep it.
    Admiration
    Monday, February 14, 2011 op
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    9 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 5:59 PM

      Goddamn that was depressing.

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    2. Rent5dogsFebruary 14, 2011 at 7:04 PM

      @Anonymous

      But it was great.

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    3. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:57 PM

      Depressing but well written.

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    4. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2011 at 1:13 AM

      Good read but it was a little confusing at a few points due to terminology. Was beginning to wonder if they were supposed to be human or pony form towards the end.

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    5. MadsFebruary 15, 2011 at 6:34 AM

      Good story, if depressing. Could use a thorough read-through to get those last few spelling mistakes, such as 'to' instead of 'too' and vice versa. One thumb, might read again.

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    6. ZarkanorfMarch 6, 2011 at 12:54 PM

      A few grammatical and spelling errors aside, this story was incredible! I never thought of grimdark/shipping to work together so wonderfully, and yet you've woven this tapestry of desperation and lust and...

      Man, I want to give you four stars, but those little things are what's holding me back. Great job, Thel!

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    7. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 4:54 AM

      meh...

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    8. La BarataJune 13, 2011 at 6:44 PM

      O_o;

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    9. Pinkie's_assistantNovember 25, 2011 at 7:54 PM

      I am actually in that same situation. I hate it and I hope ashy doesn't take it the same way bon bon does >-<

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