• Story: A Magician's Attire

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    [Normal] Great and Powerful Tri-Twilight?

    Author: Waterthrush
    Description: Following the events of Boast Busters, someone is poking through the remains of Trixie's wagon looking for an object of great personal value. Some important things are worth taking a risk for.
    A Magician's Attire

    Additional Tags: Short, Nighttime, Hat & Cape, Magic, Fantasizin
    Wednesday, April 13, 2011 op
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    13 comments:

    1. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 9:19 AM

      I felt bad for Trixie on this one

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    2. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 9:20 AM

      Me too. Although, it was a neat twist with Twilight there.

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    3. Nova25April 13, 2011 at 9:48 AM

      Meh... I don't know... The story feels quite average, for some reasons.

      It's not 'bad', but I just didn't find that much interesting elements in it.

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    4. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 9:50 AM

      Snips and Snails were the ones that had to clean up that mess.. can you imagine if wither of them found the cape?
      And what if if the cape actually did have some magical spell on it?

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    5. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 10:21 AM

      Twist? It would have been a twist if it haven't been spoiled twice in the description and opening picture.

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    6. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 11:14 AM

      >Capes. Are. Awesome!

      I'm now imagining Photo Finish appearing out of nowhere shouting: "No capes!"

      It was a good story, but there isn't much to it. I think it needs to be expanded upon, have something more interesting in the mix. Like perhaps this could be the start of Twilight becoming a showoff like she feared; or Trixie could show up searching for her prize outfit (where it is learned that the outfit is an heirloom, contains super magic, or something like that) and Twilight creates a web of lies to keep the cape to herself, before realising the err of her ways; or even something more... explosive?

      Really, this feels more like the start of a story than an entire story. I'd like to see this expanded upon

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    7. Hikuro14April 13, 2011 at 11:29 AM

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    8. Hikuro14April 13, 2011 at 11:30 AM

      Capes.Are.Awesome!


      Epic win

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    9. HayquillApril 13, 2011 at 12:33 PM

      I agree with anon. Please edit out the spoilers.

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    10. LordOfTheWrongsApril 13, 2011 at 5:00 PM

      The proper tag would be "Robe & Wizard Hat". :)

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    11. ZarkanorfApril 13, 2011 at 9:21 PM

      @LordOfTheWrongs
      Was just about to say...

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    12. Stephen CawkingMay 28, 2011 at 6:41 AM

      Well written.

      Wouldn't mind seeing a second chapter!

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    13. RoxorJuly 23, 2011 at 3:10 AM

      You know, I don't blame Twilight for cracking up. Trixie's outfit is overkill on pretty-much anyone.

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