• Story: Forgotten (Update Part 2+3! )

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    [Normal] Pre-readers said it invoked the power of potential tears! So maybe a bit sad?


    Author: JenovaII
    Description: A pony from Twilight's past returns.
    Forgotten Part 1
    Forgotten Part 2: Soft (New!)
    Forgotten Part 3: Hollow (New!)


    Additional Tags: Nopony should ever be forgotten.
    Tuesday, July 12, 2011 op
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    24 comments:

    1. Dark Side of the WorldMay 8, 2011 at 9:13 PM

      This story was really good. Not a bad OC and I like the moral. 4 stars

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    2. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 9:20 PM

      I cried. Should have 'Sad' Tag

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    3. DaveMay 8, 2011 at 9:29 PM

      Likewise. As a short story, it certainly did what it set out to do. Job well done.

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    4. Hikuro14May 8, 2011 at 9:32 PM

      I almost cried...

      This story is amazing...

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    5. HeatWaveMay 8, 2011 at 9:39 PM

      A stirring story, it evokes images of those who feel they have little or nothing to live for, which hits home... I have been at that point.

      I've never been desperate, but there are multiple methods to cope.

      Nevertheless, it makes you realize who you COULD be influencing, but might inadvertently choose not to, and that's something we could all be a little more aware of.

      Well written, and a good story. Quick, but efficient.

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    6. MarrockMay 8, 2011 at 9:53 PM

      @Anonymous No... not sad... Hopeful.

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    7. RandonMay 8, 2011 at 9:53 PM

      Well written, a little sad, at least a 4 star.

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    8. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 10:19 PM

      Liked it. A lot.

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    9. NinestempestMay 8, 2011 at 11:22 PM

      Five stared. Shuppow. I've five stared like maybe 8-9 things on this website? Too good. Said everything necessary on dA.

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    10. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 11:52 PM

      made me feel a little sad there for a bit, but I agree with Marrock, a sad story is one that containes a tragic tragic ending, this isn't sad, this is inspiring. I love the friendship report at the end.

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    11. Lectro DubMay 9, 2011 at 4:53 PM

      I fell in love with this story.

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    12. CrimeOfKickingMay 9, 2011 at 8:27 PM

      ;_;

      Moondancer....

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    13. ZardulMay 10, 2011 at 9:32 AM

      Noooo not such a well developed Moondancer!

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    14. Silent SolaceJuly 5, 2011 at 12:04 PM

      I think I died a little inside... I need to stop reading sad FICA... Time for some grim dark! :)

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    15. MarrockJuly 12, 2011 at 4:01 PM

      @Marrock Ok, never mind... I was painfully horribly wrong.

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    16. VarJuly 12, 2011 at 4:42 PM

      This is amazing. The third part just doesn't hold back, does it? And the spiritual power behind her last two letters... wow.

      5 stars, for sure. Needs a Sad tag, too.

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    17. La BarataJuly 12, 2011 at 4:44 PM

      Like a motherfucking BOSS.

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    18. Valmir_R0yalGuArdJuly 12, 2011 at 5:24 PM

      I cried.... This is one of the more touching stories I have ever read. There are moments where theres happiness and moments of true sadness. This fiction gives a very strong message and speaks to those who have nothing. I'm giving this a Five.

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    19. Valmir_R0yalGuArdJuly 12, 2011 at 5:27 PM

      @Kujiiro

      Ditto dude.

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    20. RubidiaJuly 12, 2011 at 6:49 PM

      T_T

      >mfw 4/5 latest stories on EqD has [sad] tag

      TT_____TT

      >mfw after reading this story.

      Oh God why... why must these pony fics be so gosh darn sad? ;A; Still, an excellent story.

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    21. Friendly UncleJuly 12, 2011 at 7:23 PM

      I've read a lot of pony fics that have made me laugh. There have been some that made me think. There were a few that made me sad. This is the first one that's really made me cry.

      Thank you.

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    22. Delta PangaeaJuly 13, 2011 at 8:40 AM

      I am full of sad.

      This is all...

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    23. AnonymousJuly 26, 2011 at 1:29 AM

      Oh goddammit, now im all sad again.

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    24. StarsDecember 16, 2011 at 8:04 PM

      Very much in need of a sad tag as well as one I would deem "hopeful"

      The story is great, sad, but a clear and deep meaning. Well written and I enjoyed it very much.

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