[Normal] Pre-readers said it invoked the power of potential tears! So maybe a bit sad?
Author: JenovaII
Description: A pony from Twilight's past returns.Forgotten Part 1
Forgotten Part 2: Soft (New!)
Forgotten Part 3: Hollow (New!)
Additional Tags: Nopony should ever be forgotten.
24 comments:
This story was really good. Not a bad OC and I like the moral. 4 stars
ReplyDeleteI cried. Should have 'Sad' Tag
ReplyDeleteLikewise. As a short story, it certainly did what it set out to do. Job well done.
ReplyDeleteI almost cried...
ReplyDeleteThis story is amazing...
A stirring story, it evokes images of those who feel they have little or nothing to live for, which hits home... I have been at that point.
ReplyDeleteI've never been desperate, but there are multiple methods to cope.
Nevertheless, it makes you realize who you COULD be influencing, but might inadvertently choose not to, and that's something we could all be a little more aware of.
Well written, and a good story. Quick, but efficient.
@Anonymous No... not sad... Hopeful.
ReplyDeleteWell written, a little sad, at least a 4 star.
ReplyDeleteLiked it. A lot.
ReplyDeleteFive stared. Shuppow. I've five stared like maybe 8-9 things on this website? Too good. Said everything necessary on dA.
ReplyDeletemade me feel a little sad there for a bit, but I agree with Marrock, a sad story is one that containes a tragic tragic ending, this isn't sad, this is inspiring. I love the friendship report at the end.
ReplyDeleteI fell in love with this story.
ReplyDelete;_;
ReplyDeleteMoondancer....
Noooo not such a well developed Moondancer!
ReplyDeleteI think I died a little inside... I need to stop reading sad FICA... Time for some grim dark! :)
ReplyDelete@Marrock Ok, never mind... I was painfully horribly wrong.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing. The third part just doesn't hold back, does it? And the spiritual power behind her last two letters... wow.
ReplyDelete5 stars, for sure. Needs a Sad tag, too.
Like a motherfucking BOSS.
ReplyDeleteI cried.... This is one of the more touching stories I have ever read. There are moments where theres happiness and moments of true sadness. This fiction gives a very strong message and speaks to those who have nothing. I'm giving this a Five.
ReplyDelete@Kujiiro
ReplyDeleteDitto dude.
T_T
ReplyDelete>mfw 4/5 latest stories on EqD has [sad] tag
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>mfw after reading this story.
Oh God why... why must these pony fics be so gosh darn sad? ;A; Still, an excellent story.
I've read a lot of pony fics that have made me laugh. There have been some that made me think. There were a few that made me sad. This is the first one that's really made me cry.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
I am full of sad.
ReplyDeleteThis is all...
Oh goddammit, now im all sad again.
ReplyDeleteVery much in need of a sad tag as well as one I would deem "hopeful"
ReplyDeleteThe story is great, sad, but a clear and deep meaning. Well written and I enjoyed it very much.