• Story: My Nuclear Dawn + Defcon Game Mod!

    [Normal]  The author Swears this isn't grimdark, but it's really long!  If you play Defcon, he also included a My Little Pony mod for it!  Check it out below the story link!  

    Author: Fire Esper
    Description: Equestria has changed, and the thousand-year reign of peace and friendship is about to change as well unless our heroes can stop it... But war? War never changes.
    My Nuclear Dawn

    My Nuclear Dawn DA Link

    Defcon Pony Mod

    Alternate Tags: War, Adventure, Romance, Light-hearted, Fairy Tale

    13 comments:

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    2. DEFCON + PONIES

      OH GOD YES

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    3. ...I say this with no malicious intent in my heart, but this is one of the worst stories I have ever read on here. The sentence and paragraph structures were awful, the wording was at many points incomprehensible, and it felt like it was missing the first third of the story. No character except Pinkie Pie was in character, and no one was at all relatable. I can't in good conscious recommend this fic to anyone.

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    4. omg....when i was near the end...NIER ernil/karma started playing...it was perfect...and this WAS a beautiful story...a little confusing at parts...but still well writter! 5/5 stars from me!

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    5. ... I can't decide to read this after seeing these two posts one after another, but Brian seems to be more critical about it. Also without a weird name...

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    6. I'm not one to be mean, but this was a pretty bad story, bro. I'm hoping the main attraction was the actual mod, yes?

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    7. @Zarkanorf
      > Attempts to install mod
      > Goes through the instructions and follows to-the-letter
      > Shit don't work

      WELP

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    8. Shouldn't it be Grimdark... or at least Sad? I mean, if I read it right in the end the main cast gets... Not wanting to spoil the story, but the title is a dead giveaway. Emphasis on "dead".

      Plus, things are kinda confused... Is there a "mass mind control" as Twilight suspected? Are Celestia and Luna simply butting heads (kinda painful for unicorns, I guess)?

      Hope the first, IMHO. The "Celestia is a freakin' tyrant" meme is getting kinda old.

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    9. I don't really want to be rude there, but...

      I'm not sure I understood anything of what was going on, really ?

      ...also, it was kinda hard to read.

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    10. Huh...I dont get why I wasted my time reading that.

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    11. OUCH. OW.

      Now I'll have to figure out what's gone so wrong somehow, because I don't even see it. If anyone has more detailed criticisms, or bad examples, don't be afraid to bash me some more!

      @7f281bb8-58ea-11e0-be3b-000bcdcb5194 Apparently you are a deviant, and must be culled. Nevertheless, thanks!

      @Zarkanorf How could it possibly fail? You unzip it into Defcon folder, it creates a "mods" folder, you go in-game, click "mods", click "activate". What's wrong?

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    12. Updated formatting and punctuation a bit, tell me if it helps any...

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