[Shipping] [Adventure] [Normal]
Author: Conner Cogwork
Description: What would you do, if you met a pony who was at once your brother, and yet not? Applebuck wishes to reunite with his 'Cousin JayJay', and braves the dimensional divide to reach his goal. But being a small foal, how will he deal with a world in which everything is flipped? His friends, his family, and even... himself? Finally from A Cross and Arrow, the sequel is here!On a Whisper of Wind (New Part 5!)
Additional Tags: Alternate universes, existential crisis, genderswitch, family, MORE HIJINKS
126 kommentaari:
Might have to read this one.
VastaKustutaOoooooh Boy...
VastaKustutaWorth a read
VastaKustutaOhgod Sequel
VastaKustutaNo way. It's here! Yes! I was worried I wouldn't have something to read!
VastaKustutaHoly cow! It's finally here!
VastaKustutaFinally! I was starting to wonder if it would ever come out.
VastaKustutaA sequel YES!
VastaKustutaBy Thor's ample bosom...
VastaKustutaIT RETURNS.
Oh my God. There goes my plan for the day.
VastaKustutaYES, FINALLLLY
VastaKustuta*G.I.R. squeals and explodes*
Squee~ This is is the greatest day of my life.
VastaKustutaYEEEEEESS!
VastaKustutaOh, yes, I have been waiting for this!
VastaKustutaNow this I've got to read, been waiting for this since I read the prelude linked at the end of 'On A Cross and Arrow'.
VastaKustutaWoo! Been waiting for this one for a while!
VastaKustutaI thoroughly enjoyed On A Cross and Arrow, and I can't wait to read this.
VastaKustutaYes!!!
VastaKustutaTotally made my day! :D
VastaKustutaJust as I finished On a Cross and Arrow! Perfect Timing
VastaKustutaBeen looking forward to this for some time now.
VastaKustutaHow regularly will you update this story? I loved the On A Cross and Arrow, but I ussualy only read Completed stories since I hate cliffhangers + long wait time (like Transcendence).
VastaKustuta:)
I feel not unlike Filly Pinkie upon first seeing a Sonic Rainboom. Time to read! 8D
VastaKustutaOMIGOSH!!!!!!!!!! A SEQUEL TO "ON A CROSS AND ARROW" *jumps up and down!*
VastaKustutaOh look now it's on E:D good day... good day.
VastaKustuta*finishes reading the chapter... and the preview for the next chapter*
VastaKustutaI have this huge grin on my face, and I doubt that I could remove it, even if I wanted to.
This has made my day. ^_^
Dangit! CLIFFFHANGEEEERRRR!!! Well, shoot. How long until next update? Estimates?
VastaKustutaVery good !
VastaKustutaI will read !
As a fan of On A Cross and Arrow I must read this!
VastaKustutaSequel to On a Cross and Arrow? ME GUSTA.
VastaKustutaOH. MY. GOD.
VastaKustutaIt has interrupted my seventh rereading of On a Cross and Arrow.
I AM TOTALLY OKAY WITH THAT.
AND SO IT CONTINUES, PRAISE CELESTIA!
VastaKustutaONWARD HO!
Holy- it's out.
VastaKustuta...
-drops everything and reads-
yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes
VastaKustutaYou've got my undivided attention, "wow" us again if you can.
VastaKustutaCereal, could you link back to the original story page as part of the post? Thank you!
VastaKustutaYES YES YES!
VastaKustutaOMG!!!
VastaKustutaI don't normally post comments before even reading a fic, but I have been waiting for this for so long, well only like two or three months, still a newish fan and all, but still this is going straight to the top of my reading list.
http://www.myfacewhen.com/98/
VastaKustutaHRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
VastaKustutaThis has forced my metaphorical hand. Time to reread On a Cross and Arrow, which I've been delaying doing for the past couple days (specifically hoping to do it before this came out actually, lol).
VastaKustutaIT BEGIIIIIIIIIIIIIINS
VastaKustutaHA HA YES YES YES YES IT BEGINS
VastaKustutaAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VastaKustutaMy day has officially been made!
VastaKustutaThanks!!
I thought this sequel would never happen.
VastaKustutaOHMYGODFINALLY!!!!!
VastaKustutaOn A Cross and Arrow was the second fanfic I've ever read ( and my first long one!), so I have extremely fond memories of it. I've been waiting about 3-4 months for this.
I have a book report due yesterday that I have yet to start, but it can wait. I have priorities.
So, how many hours do you think it'll take for this to reach 6 star?
HHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
VastaKustutaTook you long enough -.-
When I saw the picture I knew it looked familiar; when I saw the title, I nearly lost control of my bladder. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS
VastaKustuta*rainbowdashsoawesome* *fluttershyyay* *twilightyes* *pinkiesparklyeyes* *applejackhappy* *derpywoohoo* *squee*
Hasn't this been out since like September? I've already read it....
VastaKustutaMRGRFRRRR
VastaKustutaIT'S ONLY A SEQUEL TO ONE OF MY TOP 3 FAVORITE FAN FICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is my Valentine.
with any luck this will also be posted to FIMFiction.net so can track it there and read from my tablet.. googledocs is such a pain to read on my tablet..
VastaKustutaohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh! A sequal!
VastaKustuta@Marshal
VastaKustutaThere's more after the part where Applebuck meets the CMC.
I just finished this while listening to the LOTR soundtrack
VastaKustutaIt was amazing.
To be honest, this chapter seemed a bit short. Hopefully future chapters will be longer than this, but that's really all I can criticize. Your writing is still phenomenal, the characters are believable, and the cliff-hanger you ended on is killing me. I can guess where this story is going, and I quite like it. But I know you will completely blow away my expectations next chapter, because you are an alicorn among bronies.
In conclusion...
POSSIBLE FORESHADOWED SWEETIEBUCK SHIPPING FTW!!!!!!!!
Oh. My. GOD! It actually came out! You had me worried there Cogwork.
VastaKustutaJeez. You lot have been waiting impatiently, haven't you? Only the first chapter and already it's got 55 comments. 56, now, actually.
VastaKustutaOops, sorry, 58.
VastaKustutaWoohoo, yes! I will enjoy reading this.
VastaKustutaYEEESSSSSS
VastaKustutaWhat the carp? Another story I HAVE to read, lol. :P
VastaKustutaMy gosh i'll be looking forward to updates on this as much as actual episodes i reckon
VastaKustutaFINALLY!!!!!!
VastaKustutareading now!
FINALLY
VastaKustutaSteel and Thunder!
VastaKustuta"Hell, it's about time!"
VastaKustutaMy first thought when I saw the description.
YYYYAAAAAAA ....... SOMEONE DRAW A GENDER SWAPPED LUNA
VastaKustutaUpdate this once a day or I will kill you, you should have saved up 3 or 4 chapters.
VastaKustutaOmigoshomigoshomigooooooosh. *read*
VastaKustutaALL HELL IS ABOUT TO BREAK LOOSE!!!
VastaKustutaAWWWW YEAAAAAHHHH
VastaKustutaIts about time this showed up.
Hinting at sequels and then not following up would make me a sad pony.
By Solaris's mighty windswept beard!
VastaKustutaI must read!
The journey I thought would not continue...
VastaKustutaAw yeah, I've been waiting for this. I'll be especially interested in seeing how you make Trixie x Presto happen, given the setup you've got here.
VastaKustutaI'm so glad this is here. major props, Conner, for getting this up within days of the date you gave. ^.^
VastaKustutaFinally, YEAH!
VastaKustutaWoo-hoo! Months of waiting, and it's finally here! The long-anticipated sequel to one of the best fics ever written!
VastaKustutaLove the teaser at the end of the fic. Connor Cogwork, you have made my day! I shall look forward to this being continued eagerly!
Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.
VastaKustutait looks like a conversion beaur story imnot complaining though i love them i hope it is
VastaKustutaYay! I hope it updates as fast as OACAA did!
VastaKustutaWoohoo, the sequel!! And already off to a good start!! Man, can't wait for the next chapter, I hope poor Pinkie won't be too disappointed to know Berry didn't come along. But I think, it would probably be best, for the good of Equestria and everyponies sanity!
VastaKustutaoh my cod, YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!
VastaKustutahttp://www.myfacewhen.net/uploads/71-oh-lawdy.jpg
VastaKustutaI am going to read the crap out of this.
"Alright, let's just give EQD one last check before I start my homework for the evening. I got a ton of work though, so I'll just save anything I find for later..."
VastaKustuta*checks the last few posts of the day... and notices a rather familiar drawing on one of the posts, and then notices the name which was mentioned in a previous story she'd read that was supposed to be the sequel of said story*
"... I-it updated!? It actually ACTUALLY updated!? OHMIGOSH YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES-YESSSSSSSS~~~! I gotta read it- No! I have homework, and when I say I have homework I mean I have a LOT of homework! But this is my favorite story, and I can't go another hour without getting my fix of this awesome super-duper story! Oooooh, but my homework.... I'll just read this story and then stay up late to get all my work done. I gotta get up real early in the morning though... I'll need an energy drink though- wait, I have an energy drink!!! Ponies, here I come~!"
Confound these ponies, they drive me to insomnia!!!
The cutie mark expert would be "drowning in blank flanks"? I'm not sure if that was intentional or not.
VastaKustutaAHHH!!! AFTER ONE THOUSAND YEARS IT'S WRITTEN!
VastaKustutaIT'S TIME TO READ THE HELL OUT OF THIS STORY
/Rita Repulsa
Dear sir,
VastaKustutaI love you
-ME
Oh...My....Gosh...
VastaKustuta...
*anime faint*
Dear sir,
VastaKustutaI love you
-ME
This is the best possible thing!! I'm so excited and reading that ending and the preview of the next chapter was so incredibly nostalgic. Even though it wasn't that long ago On a Cross and Arrow finished
VastaKustutawill read
VastaKustutaOMG, You put out the sequel! Hijinks ahoy! <3
VastaKustutaYay, the sequel is finally ready for consumption! Cross and Arrow is one of the best MLP fanfics I've ever read, and I have faith that this will fully measure up to it!
VastaKustutaBEST WAY TO END VALENTINE'S DAY EVER!!! I've been waiting so long for this fic! On a Cross and Arrow is what got me into the fandom and when i decided that i truely was a brony. This was the best valentine i got all day. /)^3^(\
VastaKustuta...Well, when I saw this, I took a step back from the computer and did an actual backflip in excitement. I may or may not have shrieked in joy. <_< >_> ... I'm looking very forward to the next chapter.
VastaKustutaWhat a time of day to discover the Epicness :/
VastaKustutaherewego.jpg
VastaKustutaBut seriously, really looking forward to reading through this one. Cogwork's previous work 'On a Cross and Arrow' was fantastic and had me checking fimfiction and ponychan on a regular basis for his updates. I expect great things from this story.
Best part is, its all (by proxy) Trixie's fault.
I have all the stories from the Cross and arrow saga on my computer, so happy that there are some new stuff on the way
VastaKustutaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
VastaKustutaDoesn't BEGIN to cover it!
WAAAAAAAAAHH!!! WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! WAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! AT LAAAAAAST!!! IT'S HEEEEEEEERE!!! THE SEQUEL TO THE FIRST FANFIC I EVER READ!!!
VastaKustuta(adds to a list I keep of fanfics I have to read with a "Must Read" tag and begins to wait impatiently for the chance to read it, which will be probably tommorrow at night :D)
On the next chapter: Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiet
VastaKustutaI WAITED FOR SOOOO LONG TO READ AND I READ IT!
VastaKustutaI WAITED FOR SOOOO LONG TO READ AND I READ IT!
VastaKustutaAT LAST!!!!
VastaKustutaOMG!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!
VastaKustutaI hope it's like the last story where it changed POV :D
VastaKustutaThis is the greatest day of my life since Derpy spoke.
VastaKustutaPsst. It's "half-pipe", not "half-pike".
VastaKustutaExistential crisis? I'm only 2 chapters into Cross and Arrow and now I'm planning to read this one.
VastaKustutaI love the rainbowdashxrainbowblitz!! We better see this! Lol
VastaKustutaSequel YEAH! :D and looking good so far
VastaKustutaWhen are we getting the next chapter!? It's been two months now.
VastaKustutaI seriously apologize for the lack of updates. It's been slow writing for me. Not a whole lot of inspiration going on, I'm afraid.
VastaKustutaI'm hoping that'll change pretty soon though. It may not be very big, but there IS a chapter coming. I'll make an effort to not let updates be so sparse from now on.
Take your time Conner, I just want to see what you finish what you started. Also Suddenly Trixie.
VastaKustutaOH SWEET ZOMBIE JESUS IT'S HERE
VastaKustutaAaaand UPDATE! And Trixie seems to suspect something...This ought to be good.
VastaKustutaAnd poor Applebuck can't catch a break...I'm looking forward to the filly CMC's reactions when they find out just who he really is.
Please, try to update a little faster. This work deserves to be finished!
I love Pinkie Pie, I really do.
VastaKustutaA shame the chapters are so small so far, but what's there is gold. Quality over quantity and all that...
So want to read more, of course.
I'm hoping for a guest appearance by Mrs. Turnip, Roxie, Monsieur LeFlour and Lady Lintsalot.
VastaKustutaOkay, I've figured it out thanks to this new chapter and the Sweetie Chronicles update: dimension-hopping turns anypony and everypony into massive bags of hormones, regardless of age. Keep it up, 'cause that's awesome XD.
VastaKustutaI really like the "coupling" you did with the Sweetie Chronicals in this update - you are the first author who does this AFAIK :-)
VastaKustutaMinor complaint. Mr. Cake's cutie mark is a trio of Carrot cakes. Not Brownies. He's Carrot Cake. His wife being Cup Cake.
VastaKustutaWill this piece ever be continued? I really loved the last one and i am super excited about this colt version of Trixie! On cross and arrow was wonderful and has introduced me to fan-fiction. I understand if it were to be discontinued but I would be eternally grateful if it were to be continued.
VastaKustutathere has been an update, chapter 3 is out http://www.fimfiction.net/story/10851/3/On-a-Whisper-of-Wind/Part-3%3A-Through-Eyes-Unused. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026934/3/On_a_Whisper_of_Wind
VastaKustutaOh boy. Cutie Mark Crusaders Petty Theives Yay!
VastaKustutaAnyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
Thou has updated it, huzzah!
VastaKustutaDamn it Connor, update it!
VastaKustuta