[Grimdark] [Adventure] [Sad]
Author: Pish
Description: Unfathomable destruction and chaotic reckoning has driven every remaining living thing of Equestria underground. For years, they have endured and rebuilt their homes deep within the earth and soil, but are they really safe from the fires above?
Fires Above: Part 1
Fires Above: Part 2
Fires Above: Part 3
Fires Above: Part 4
Fires Above: Part 5 (New!)
Additional Tags: Underground, Revolution, Fighting, Corrupted, Royalty
27 kommentaari:
Le first
VastaKustutaCereal posting an underground story. Seems like it's legit because of that
VastaKustutaWoo, Grimdarks, must read!
VastaKustutaHungry Morlocks
VastaKustuta@Travis Smith
VastaKustutaUmm
The thing from that movie where the guy has the odd time machine?
VastaKustutaAh, I stick to ponies
VastaKustutaI just know it from Big Bang. Maybe someone else will know.
VastaKustutaI read this story when it was... still... -wait. Never mind.
VastaKustutaThe description reminds me of Minecraft...
VastaKustutaAnyone else?
After reading part l, nice job with it
VastaKustutastar needed?
VastaKustutaMurlocks are from "The Time Machine" novel written by H.G. Wells, published in 1895
VastaKustuta*Morlocks
VastaKustutaSee I knew someone knew it! Thanks Flutterguy
VastaKustutaHad to read it for a report
VastaKustutaHm, people read good books and all I get is, Great Expectations. I know it's a classic but, boring. Animal Farm was great, the only person in my class to know it wasn't just about talking animals.
VastaKustutaI know the name, but I have yet to read that particular novel. Might pick it up and try it.
VastaKustutaAs for me, I've set my sights on pieces by Jules Verne. I mean c'mon! Journey to the Center of the Earth? Around the World in 80 Days? Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea? Where are our Pony crossovers of those?!
Let's go Community. Make it happen! :D
Awww... Another incomplete story :/ I'm already reading too so many incompletes that I get confused sometimes. But I will read it for sure when it's finished.
VastaKustuta@Travis Smith
VastaKustutaAnimal Farm wasn't great. It's alright, but hardly literature.
Maquabra said...
VastaKustuta"Awww... Another incomplete story :/ I'm already reading too so many incompletes that I get confused sometimes."
+1 on that
I found the intro a bit of a confusing info-dump. But it's pretty hard NOT to info-dump when you're writing on a different context. Maybe... write only about bits that you're gonna use later in your story?
VastaKustutaAutor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.
VastaKustuta@cheezesauce
VastaKustutaa different context?
please let me know when next part comes out
VastaKustutaBlessed Faust, Mother of Luna...
VastaKustutaPoor Dinky...
Poor Luna...
...and Twi as well, if she's alive...
Heck, poor EVERYPONY...
*Five Stars*
Haha! Yes! Morlocks! Bloody briliant! Not to sound too cruel...but I'm secretly hoping no-one survived.
VastaKustuta-Bloodpool (Resistentia est inutilis)