Author: Kenai
Description: Many years after the series, Equestria finds itself on the brink of war. When a routine patrol goes wrong, Sky Marshal of the Equestrian Royal Airforce Rainbow Dash finds herself holding the pieces.Google Documents
The Twilight War
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The Twilight War Part 3
The Twilight War Part 4
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Additional Tags: War, Sci-fi, Griffons
42 kommentaari:
I'm intrigued.
VastaKustutaMissiles and jetpack make her about 20% more badass.
VastaKustutai agree 20% more badass
VastaKustuta...missiles? AND a jetpack?
VastaKustutaNow I just have to read this...
*reads*
VastaKustutaPower-armored Rainbow Dash? Win potential in this story is high...
By Celestia, we need some pictures ASAP...
VastaKustutaThis is epic!
VastaKustutaI cant wait for more chapters.
Be sure not to make it short!
This seems a little bit too much like that one fic, the fires of war.
VastaKustutaYou must construct additional (armor) pylons.
VastaKustutaThis sounds as though it could be good...very good..
VastaKustutaAm eagerly awaiting more
I've gotta say, while there isn't much here yet, so far this is looking pretty impressive. And I'm not usually one for warfics. I think the fact that you set it several years in the future helped. The other thing that usually steers me away from warfics is the whole "So you're going to attack the country whose rulers are the immortal goddesses of the sun and moon. Wow, great plan there, guys." You, however, managed to wrap that up pretty neatly at the end of this chapter.
VastaKustutaKeep it up, dude; let's see where this goes.
This is about 20% than any other Grimdark Pony Fanfics on Equestria Daily.
VastaKustutaA Tom Clancy style fiction,with pony?
VastaKustutaWell...it's good :D
Good stuff here. Am I the only one getting an Ace Combat vibe off it?
VastaKustutaHightech ponies in war may sound unfitting at first.
VastaKustutaIt's not.
I love this.
@ a href #c706827618005640205 >Anonymous /a>
VastaKustutaOh yes, most definitely!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_RrKxXuZXY
HOLYHORSEDICKS!
VastaKustutaWhy would the formatting in the reply button be wrong?!
Well, that certainly explains why Blueblood hasn't taken over the government.
VastaKustutaI'm liking this story more and more as I read it. Get a lot of Tom Clancy-ish vibes from it.
@ Anonymous
For some reason its been borked for a couple of days now. I've just been typing it up by hand.
You have a pretty neat progression going here.
VastaKustutaCheers mate. Keep up the good work.
Very nice. Can't wait to see what happens and especially what Applejack and background ponies like Trixie do in the future.
VastaKustutaAwesome story so far! Like the small introduction of badass Fluttershy at the end! :D keep getting these out man they rock!
VastaKustutaI'd just like to thank all of those who have provided feedback so far. It's what keeps me going :D
VastaKustutaI'm liking the way this is working out. For some reason, I like the technicality of warfics.
VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaPersonally, I would have gone with Assault Horizon.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bnd7xsHbg4A
Fluttershy portrayed as a... well, to prevent spoilers I won't put it here, but Fluttershy in this story is pretty damn scary. And yet, it somehow seems to work.
VastaKustutaEXCELLENT.
VastaKustutaPatton reference. Yes!
VastaKustutaEvery time a chapter of this story comes out I have convinced myself that this should not work. And yet, by the end of every chapter I find that it does. Amazing.
And I was just thinking to myself about worldwide wars that would affect Equestria. This one is pretty close to what I've been playing in my own head.
VastaKustutaSpec Ops Fluttershy is best Fluttershy.
VastaKustutaDam! Love me a good warfic!
VastaKustutaChapter 4 was just.. awesome. A plan that crazy could never work twice, but when it works, hell you get results.
VastaKustuta"Dumb fabric"
VastaKustutaLOL
This is getting better and better!
VastaKustutahttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brevity_code
VastaKustutaThis may help.
Great Warfic here, but personaly my first thought was: "woow, author must have played LOMAC a lot"
Don't He ?
So Freaking AWESOME!!!
VastaKustutamissiles, bombs, armor, war, PONIES, holy shit, this is good...
Someone here played LOMAC a lot.
VastaKustutaActually, not really. I have the game but I was never able to get it to run at a playable framerate. XD
VastaKustuta...Ace Combat 5? The Unsung War?
VastaKustutaThe Twilight War?
Am I right on the money here?
I'm getting a distinct Ace Combat vibe, too.
VastaKustutaAnyway, this is great read, and I've been watching it since part 3 came up. I was hoping this would pop up again.
I fucking love this story. What more can be said?
VastaKustutaI agree on the AC stuff. Archer, and all the other things, it can't be an accident.
VastaKustutaMother of God where's an update?!
VastaKustuta