[Crossover] A TF2 Fic! It's about time!
Author: Axle and Wheel
Description: After a mishap in a magic duel, the ponies are transported to the Team Fortress universe. They'll take the classes places while The Engineer tries to find a way to get them home.My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 1
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 2
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 3
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 4
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 5
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 6
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 7
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 8
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 9
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 10
Changing Worlds (New Part 10-2!)
My Little Fortress Audio Book Series
Additional Tags: 2Fort, Team Fortress 2, Hats.
78 kommentaari:
Oh, God. There goes my afternoon.
VastaKustutaBetter than having human female classes ('cept for soldier, his case, just human) as an option.
VastaKustutaWANT NAO VALVE
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VastaKustutaSorry for repeating and for being off topic here, but which was the fanfic that began with Equestria in the middle of a drought and Rainbow Dash struggling to send scarce rain to some areas?
VastaKustutaYes. This pleases me greatly.
VastaKustutaOh, that made me remember that video
VastaKustutahttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hinqInEjjJw
I don't think it was posted on ED but it's Pony/TF2 related and really good and should be posted but that's like my opinion.
Any bets on how long until there is the first hat drop. And who obsesses over them?
VastaKustuta@Kill me, I'm a PONY
VastaKustutaFancy Fedora and Rarity.
Also shout out to my Pony Brigade bros on TF2.
So this is what happens if you cross the streams! :D
VastaKustutaSpelling needs a bit of improvement.
VastaKustutaThis is an interesting idea, but it could definitely use a proof reader. The punctuation in particular could use some improvement. It also relies a little too much on the reader already knowing who and what everyone is (but that's normal for fanfiction).
VastaKustutaThat's surprisingly entertaining. :)
VastaKustutaIt's simple, interesting, and involve video games. :D
A good mix, though maybe a little short... but maybe it's better that way, as a style.
I once drew Derpy as the Demoman before.
VastaKustutaOdd.
Well, I guess she'd like an eyepatch.
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VastaKustutathats it......noooo i need more.
VastaKustutaAlso by the way this is pure awesome!
There goes the rest of my day, Epic.
VastaKustutaStill wonderin' where the Enemy Heavy Uber Rush kicks in.
Epicness detected from this fanfic :)
VastaKustutahmmm...
VastaKustutaI'm wondering why "hats" is in the tags...
because the story doesn't say anything about hats...
No, i'm joking. I've got hats in TF2 too, hats are awesome, lol.
Freakin brilliant crossover!
VastaKustutaBookmarked.
VastaKustutaI just got off a 4 or 5 hour session on the Pony servers.
@Daffodil
VastaKustutaI think the author may have seen your choice of hat :O
Also: HATS AND PISS! YES!
THIS IS GONNA BE LEGEN-
VastaKustuta(Wait for it, and I hope you're not lactose intolerant cause the next part is...)
This is really good, looking forward to the next chapter.
VastaKustuta@Kill me, I'm a PONY
VastaKustutaYeah, he totally did
Why hasn't this updated in so long?!
VastaKustutawe need a tf2 mod which adds pony characters as well as human characters so your on the blu team you get killed you switch to engie and get a 50% chance of spawning as applejack or the engie. although red team gets no ponies =P
VastaKustuta(D4SHTH3R4INB0W)
Where can I download those icons?!
VastaKustutawow... didnt see this one coming!
VastaKustutaits good, yes, but still...
i just absolutyly did NOT expect to see this!
Give us more freaking chapters@!@!##$%@^#$%@#$%@#^@#%^%@^$#@^@#%^@%$%#$-er
VastaKustutaHaven't read it yet, but now I'm uber pumped.
VastaKustutaBeen waiting for something like this for a while. :DD
Oh god.
VastaKustuta"...5 ponies and a rabbit today!"
I love that line. A wonderful story so far.
I was hoping for this to update :D
VastaKustutaSPAH SAPPIN MAH PONIES
VastaKustutaApplejack=Engineer! Matches 99%... so it is 20% cooler!
VastaKustutaChapter 5 proves that AJ is best pony. Just like Engineer is best class.
VastaKustutaThis was the first fanfic I read, and I've been waiting for this update for what seems like a really long time.
VastaKustutaThanks for writing such a great piece of fiction.
Sweet, an update! I really enjoyed all chapters of it. Can't wait for Chapter 6!
VastaKustutaIf anyone wants those images for their HUD, here's the link of the download:
VastaKustutahttp://www.gamebanana.com/guis/25874
>Tomorrow's Sunday. Muffin night at home. Dinky loves those nights.
VastaKustuta-Yay for Dinky :D ...and the Sunday Muffins !
...It had been a while since the last Part, but it's still pretty good. :)
This needs more regular updates :(
VastaKustutaHmmm, i wonder when the next one will come out :D
VastaKustutaJust read the new update and yup ENJOYED IT :D
VastaKustutaPoor Trixie. Being a Medic can be a hard time, whether they never protect you or annoy the living hell out of you by spamming the 'MEDIC!' button.
VastaKustutaChapter 6 was not as enjoyable as other chapters, but still pretty good. Having played the Medic more than any class in TF2 it was strange to me, when I play TF2 people don't reject my heals. I did like the beginning where it turns out she has only killed 5 people in a week. When Trixie chose medic at the beginning I saw this coming, but it was a little different than what I thought. My favorite part of the entire story is the part where The Scout is revealed to be a Brony, and Rainbow Dash plays TF2.
VastaKustutaWhat is this I don't even
VastaKustuta*Looks at picture*
VastaKustutaThis is Scout, Rainbows make me cry
love pony's and tf2! but there is no Aussie brony server for me to play on :(
VastaKustutaHow long are you willing to put off Pinkie's ubercharge and the "I am bulletproof!" Line? I know you're going to use them.
VastaKustutaME GUSTA
VastaKustutaI liked it, but I think you've relied too heavily on readers having pre-existing familiarity with the source materials. Also, you've got persistent mechanical errors, most notably with you dialogue.
VastaKustutaCorrect: "It works like this," she said.
Incorrect: "It works like this" she said.
Also incorrect: "It works like this." She said.
A style guide or a good proofreader would greatly improve this story.
@Echo
VastaKustutaBleh, "your dialogue."
I read the first chapter and why do I get the feeling that the mane cast will return from this adventure obsessed with hats....
VastaKustutaI never thought i would see the day where Pinkie Pie was a heavy, always thought she was a scout cause she jumps around so much
VastaKustutaMore please!
VastaKustutaThis was awesome wtb more :D now I have to play some tf2
VastaKustutaTo be honest, it's kind of lacking. I think the only reason this has 5 stars is because it's the only TF2 crossover here. Well not for long. I'LL BE RIGHT BACK!
VastaKustutaThis is amazing, the story is awesome and you capture the characters very well. The only thing that I question is the Fluttershy killing people, yes she easily could have shot that sniper because it was about to shoot the BLU sniper, but then just going with it from there on is a little unbelievable, but that is just me nitpicking. I have one question though: Why BLU team? I'm not complaining, just wondering.
VastaKustutaI'll be honest... I feel that it's kinda lacking.
VastaKustutaCharacter and plot development seem very sparse and they don't really feel like they flow very naturally. A lot of things feel particularly forced and while I like the general idea behind a lot of the story, it feels like too many characters are just too easygoing given everything that's happening. The ponies are too calm in the face of being zapped to another universe and then shoved into some surreal, gory, confused, and yet horrifically comedic battle, while the TF2 characters are like "yeah. Talking ponies. 'Scool."
The story, I dunno, it just feels lacking. Granted that makes it sorta feel in a way like TF2 I guess. I've only played it a few times with friends but I still have no idea what the story really is... and believe me I've looked high and low for what the story might be. I'm not really sure there is one. That being said, while it might "fit" with the original article, remember that the point of a story, fanfiction in particular, is to give a narrative that expands upon an idea. And aside from throwing ponies into the mix, this really doesn't do a good job of that.
I'll admit, the humor is rather spot on. I believe the words "horrifyingly comedic" that I used earlier sum up TF2 rather well, and this certainly delivers on that feel. How well it mixes with ponies... I'm not really sure. The fact of the matter is the story is too flimsy and the characters too bland all of a sudden to really give all that much of an impact. I suspect what MrStevens said is right. The only reason this is so popular and has five stars is simply because it's a TF2 crossover.
In short, I really think this would do better as an actual mod for the game, rather than a fanfiction. The story is pretty much nonexistent and too full of character inconsistencies and plot holes to really make a good fanfic. Two stars.
Finished part 8. Now, the story needs to be proof read. Rather than that, it was funny reading how ponies and the mercs of TF2 interact with each other. Three stars
VastaKustutaI'm still wondering why Dr Hax hasn't shown up to throw a monitor at pinky pie for using her pinky senses to keep killing the spy
VastaKustutaAt first I was all like.. wat is dis i don evan?
VastaKustutaThen after reading I was all like.. I do not regret what I've just read.
A TF2 story crossover?
VastaKustutaBefore I start reading I just want to ask: Why do these two universes fit so well?
I'll read this when I get time. Promise.
I thought twilight might of been the sniper...also reminded me of a picture of twilight as the sniper yelling a comment along the lines of "pop your head around the corner wanker!"
VastaKustutaWHERE CAN I GET THOSE COOL ADDONS FOR TEAM FORTRESS 2???
VastaKustutaRight here.
VastaKustutahttp://www.mlptf2mods.com/
First off, let me congratulate the author on giving us a credible reason why someone as smart as the Derpy we see here is regarded as stupid...quite simply, she's more or less the Grimlock that appears in IDW's comics continuity: someone with a fine mind hampered by a faulty speech algorithm/stroke-riddled Broca's area.
VastaKustutaAlso, now that Saaaaxtooooon Haaaaalllllllle has taken over where Team BLU left off, RED's woes are just beginning.
woo! im liking this FanFic!
VastaKustutaMy Favorite class is sniper now....
VastaKustutaAnd so the story closes on a good note. . .
VastaKustutaI LOVE IT /)^3^(\
and then Saxton Hale was a Brony... and he likes Fluttershy...
VastaKustutaIm ok with this :3
SAXTON HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALE!!!!!
VastaKustutaPROTERTY DAMAGE!!!
Yes. A billion and 9 classes- er, times, yes.
VastaKustutaThis is one of the greatest stories I have ever read.
VastaKustutaNOOOOO ITS OVER
VastaKustutaShort. But awesome!!! 4/5. (just cause the spelling mistakes)
VastaKustutawhen is Changing Worlds going to be released into the wild?
VastaKustutahe said changing worlds would start on january 7th or 9th, i dont remember which but it may be pushec back =(
VastaKustutaI loves sandwiches! who doesn't love sandwiches? I love those almost more then CUPCAKES! :D
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