Story Updates December 6th (Evening)

Steampunk is awesome

So are ponies

Have some story updates.

Story: Upheaval: Breaking Point (Update Part 33!)

4 Star

[Grimdark] [Adventure]

Author: Visiden Visidane

Description: A coincidence and a magical accident leads Twilight Sparkle to a grim world hidden by Equestria's peaceful existence.

Upheaval: The Breaking Point

Labels: Adventure, Author: Visiden Visidane, Celestia, Grimdark, Incomplete, OC Ponies, Star-4, Story, Twilight Sparkle

Story: Unstable Ground (Update Chapter 3!)

4 Star

[Adventure][Light Grimdark]

Author: Inky Notebook

Description: Five ponies find themselves in deeper trouble then they ever could have imagined. Through hardships they must fight to return to the home that they once knew. Together they will learn the true meanings of not only friendship but their cutie marks.

Unstable Ground

Labels: Adventure, Author: Inky N., Grimdark, Incomplete, OC Ponies, Star-4, Story

Story: My Little Airship (Update Part 3!)

5 Star

[Adventure] [Sci-Fi]

Author: Firmly_Grasp_It

Description: It's Canterlot's fabricated Beastie's versus Trottingham's steam-powered Clankers. Twilight Sparkle is a Princess without a throne. On the run from her own country, she has only a fighting machine and a small band of soldiers by her side. Applejack is an aspiring pilot in Canterlot's Royal Air Force. Being a mare, she must fight for her cause and fight off
the prejudice of her peers at all cost. They are enemies with everything to lose, yet somehow their paths were destined to cross.

Inspired by Scott Westerfeld's "Leviathan".

My Little Airship

Labels: Adventure, Author: Big Mackintosh, Author: Firmly_Grasp_It, Braeburn, Everypony, Incomplete, Sci-Fi, Scootaloo, Star-Needed, Story

43 comments:

BombedrumbumDecember 6, 2011 at 5:30 PM
I like that steampunk airship thing picture
HanselDecember 6, 2011 at 5:30 PM
My Little Airship sounds interesting, I may have to give that one a read some day.
UnknownDecember 6, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Nothing I'm reading... Short again dangit
GaarathedancingpandaDecember 6, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Needs more transcendence
CloudhammerDecember 6, 2011 at 5:34 PM
Needs more Article 2
Rodrigo OsorioDecember 6, 2011 at 5:35 PM
More stuff to drag me away from my to-do list it would appear. Oh well.
AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 5:36 PM
nope =/
AshfireDecember 6, 2011 at 5:36 PM
needs more 'through the eyes'
AshtonDecember 6, 2011 at 5:38 PM
One day I plan to read My Little Airship, but not untill it's finished, it sounds too good to have to wait for...
AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Needs a LOT more Transcendence.
Omega_codeDecember 6, 2011 at 5:40 PM
Doesn't the airship look like the one from the new episode?
Zaiker42December 6, 2011 at 5:48 PM
Man, nothing I'm reading this time around.

Probably for the best,i should be doing homework anyway.
TyranomanDecember 6, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Damn still no Transcendence or My little Hangover yet, ah well im sure people will have a lot more writing time during the holidays. *Crosses fingers*
Aerobrony768December 6, 2011 at 5:53 PM
@Cloudhammer
I'm so addicted to that story! Moar!
AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 5:55 PM
A Leviathan based story?! Oh my god, definitely reading!
UnknownDecember 6, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Part of me is glad that none of my stories updated, so I can get this final assignment done. The other half of me is screaming for ponies.
MasterLuigi452December 6, 2011 at 6:00 PM
What happened to End of Ponies?
It's almost been a month and no updates whatsoever...
RaefireDecember 6, 2011 at 6:01 PM
My First Party by ScyStorm? C'mon, Seth, it's had a second chapter for like two weeks...
RaefireDecember 6, 2011 at 6:04 PM
And End of Ponies takes a while. Author seems to like releasing 5 chapters at once.
SnowflakeDecember 6, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Some day...
JolttixDecember 6, 2011 at 6:21 PM
More Though the eyes please!
Dusk StarDecember 6, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Needs more "Growing Pains". And more "Paradise" (but I think that one died- haven't seen an update in months)
Wolfy1328December 6, 2011 at 6:32 PM
My little hangover, when will you return? :(
AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 6:54 PM
@Gaarathedancingpanda

Transcendence author has been on hiatus forever now.
JoeDecember 6, 2011 at 6:57 PM
Lol at the authors name of the last story.
SatRockDecember 6, 2011 at 7:31 PM
@Cloudhammer
Your comment has won a cookie...
BroznikDecember 6, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Oh my Celestia... LEVIATHAN CROSSOVER. I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW! ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE ABOUNDS!
toothlessbronyDecember 6, 2011 at 8:14 PM
I made my first fanfic. I don't know if this link will work but: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hqwwt-mNlmk6CgZ2XuZoOMOy3MT-vT2w6DiW3hJ4Nr0/mobilebasic?hl=en_GB
WARNING. Chapter 1 is realllllllllly short and I'm working on a much longer chapter 2 right now.
Matt NeighborsDecember 6, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Pony sages tell that on the night that Transcendence, Fallout:Equestria, and Through The Eyes Of Another Pony all update at once, this world will end, and Celestia will come to reign for 1000 years.

At least, I think that's what they said. There was a LOT of whinnying.
Renegade the Last ShadowboltDecember 6, 2011 at 8:25 PM
Wow Airship updated? Now I have something to do while in bed with a broken leg.
DPV111December 6, 2011 at 8:34 PM
I think Upheaval: Breaking Point updates should be a drinking game. I'm pretty sure it updates often enough to get a good buzz goin.
DeibronDecember 6, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Haven't seen anything I've been reading in a while...
It will probably all hit me in one update
toothlessbronyDecember 6, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Okay here's the right link for my fanfic. The first chapter Is reallllllyyyyyyyyy short but chapter 2 (which I'm working on right now, will be really long)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hqwwt-mNlmk6CgZ2XuZoOMOy3MT-vT2w6DiW3hJ4Nr0/edit
ManajixDecember 6, 2011 at 9:28 PM
I have read Leviathan. It was very enjoyable. Maybe a pony version will be 20% cooler.
ManajixDecember 6, 2011 at 9:37 PM
@toothlessbrony
Dude, please work on your grammar. It subtracts from the story if it is poorly punctuated. Also, set the mood, explain characters, and describe the setting. Imagine you are telling the story to someone who knows nothing about mlp: fim. I'm trying to help. :)
Specter Von BarenDecember 6, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Seriously? Over 33 chapters?
AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 10:38 PM
@DPV111

Two Words: Alcohol poisoning.

@Specter Von Baren

....IN TWO FUCKING MONTHS.

@toothlessbrony

um,

cool story bro!

*feels really bad*
toothlessbronyDecember 6, 2011 at 11:10 PM
@Manajix
Thanks man I need feedback. I'll edit it now and btw I'm a quarter through chapter 2.
toothlessbronyDecember 6, 2011 at 11:16 PM
@mycutiemarkisagun
Well this is my first fanfic with ponies ^^. So yah I suck. Like I said this is just a sort of test to see if I can actually write with their personalities. I've done an actually cool and awesome story about slenderman, I'm better at writing with different personalities. This is v. 0.5 (consider it) I'm going to edit everytime I get feedback like this. And it was reallllyyyyyyyyy short and had bad punctuation I know! But I was so excited :P. So now I'll edit it.
toothlessbronyDecember 6, 2011 at 11:23 PM
@Manajix
How exactly do you punctuate pony when showing possession. Like this?: pony's.
Blaze_FyreDecember 7, 2011 at 12:59 AM
Transcendence?
Blood is thicker than friendship?
tear drops and snowflakes?
Brotherhood of the moon?
Lost in time?

ANYTHING?
toothlessbronyDecember 7, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Does anypony know if there's a mlp forums?
DPV111December 8, 2011 at 8:13 PM
@toothlessbrony

If you are writing regular fiction try ponychan.
For Grimdark and Clop use fimchan.
There's also tome pony threads on 4chan.