[Comedy][Light-Shipping]
Author: Soul Punisher
Description: Against Spike's wishes, Soarin tests his luck with the ladies.A Mare's Stallion (A Lady's Man)
Additional Tags: Hopeless-Romantic, Soarin, Spike, Fillies, Pies!
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Dat description.
ReplyDelete"Against Spike's wishes, Soarin tests his luck with the ladies."
ReplyDeleteSo, RarityxSoarin?
*reads description and tags*
ReplyDelete*quickly clicks link to fic*
*desciption and categories even
ReplyDeleteNeeds a better description :I
ReplyDeleteI only read a little bit, but what I've read so far is good.
ReplyDelete"Hey there unicornalicious."
ReplyDeleteThat one knocked me. The story is very funny so far.
I think Soarin needs some help. poor pony. lol
ReplyDeleteOh boy, lookin' forward to reading this one.
ReplyDeleteOkay the ending was a little weird (Spike is just a baby!) but this deserves six stars for all the amazingly over-the-top pickup lines. It's hard to pick a favorite, but "I have a Ph.D in smooch-anomics" had me in stitches. Vinyl Scratch's method of getting rid of Soarin was PERFECT, lol. I was expecting the fic to be about Soarin hitting on the mane six, but I think this worked out even better with the background ponies. Great job --I was laughing from start to end.
ReplyDeleteIs there going to be a part 2 or is that it
ReplyDelete@Most interesting brony
ReplyDeleteI don't think it should have. It would become pretty pointless.
The ending brightened my day lol. Poor Soarin though, he shoulda just gone to RD and pulled the Wonderbolt card. Also inb4 "RD is a lesbain..."
ReplyDeleteThis Reminds me of Kip and Zap from futureama
ReplyDeleteThis totally needs a "Scumbag Soarin" Picture at the top. How hard would it be to add the hat?
ReplyDeleteFun read, made me laugh. Pacing was a little choppy at times, but not overly so.
"I'll have what he's having!"
ReplyDeleteI can't get this goofy smile off of my face. You could've set up the scene a bit more like 'When Harry Met Sally', but still, I've got the goofy smile to prove that it was funny.
Funny stuff, I read it like Soarin had Johnny Bravo's voice mostly.
ReplyDeleteOh for- I don't care if Soarin' walked up to me hitting on me and playing te Wonderbolt card!! He'd STILL get smacked for being a player/jerk!!
ReplyDeleteGood fic, that aside.
I'm sorry, but the spelling and grammar was killing me.
ReplyDeletePretty nice and passable read here. The whole Rarity going out with Spike (spoiler there) event was completely out of nowhere, but the comedy sure does make up for it.
ReplyDeleteLol if anypony Soarin' should have hit on, it should have been Rainbow Dash, and we all know what the result would be. XP
this has Johnny Bravo written all over it.
ReplyDeleteSo many johnny bravo references.
ReplyDeleteAlso Cheerilees part cracked me up the most, the "Stranger danger" line made me lose my shit.
Just because Rainbow Dash is obsessed with becoming a Wonderbolt doesn't meant Soarin would automatically succeed with her. She would refuse his advances just like all the others, though she might spare him the violence.
ReplyDeleteAs for the sotry, I enjoyed it. It was a fun read.
@Sonic Rainblast & megantron
ReplyDeleteI had simply assumed that Rarity had figured out what was going on and did it to spite Soarin.
This was hilarious, I must say.
Soarin? Gonna check this one out.
ReplyDeleteToo much slapstick and violence, not much of an original story or progress and the ending-that is how Spike defeated Soarin'-was kinda...not in-character.
ReplyDeleteDespite being not...good I did enjoy it very much, even laughed a couple of times.
@megantron
ReplyDeleteYou're comment has just convinced me to read this.
@LordZephyr
ReplyDelete*YOUR comment.
And I'm usually so good about that.
This might not be the place for it, but I've noticed that a few older stories have disappeared from the blog archives. A Shower of Stars, for example, which is sad, since it was one of my favourites that I forgot to save to my hard drive. Why is this?
ReplyDeleteYeah... I got this odd sense of Deja Vu when I read this...
ReplyDeleteOr maybe that tends to be how my current RP character gets along with the women, and he doesn't even try to get them to kiss him! Tis weird tbh.
Fun read, and now that it's mentioned, I do see the Johnny Bravo in it. (Didn't grow up with CN)
I love almost everything in this fic. I am not a fan of SpikeXRarity, so that part bugged me a little, also it seemed so forced and quick to appear. But I loved it in general!
ReplyDelete@Solarn
ReplyDeleteHmm, you're right, it doesn't appear to be on ED anymore! I think I did find it on DeviantArt, though:
A Shower of Stars
(Either that or its a fic by the same name.)
Soarin' isn't kidding about the male-female ratio. For a while I thought Big Macintosh and Spike might've been the only males in the show
ReplyDeleteI started to read this, but some of the phrasing is so awkward I'm having trouble with it. " Smirks were plastered on each other.", for example.
ReplyDeleteThat was legen..... wait for it.....DARY!!!
ReplyDeleteHeh. That was funny.
ReplyDeleteI think the description's a bit inaccurate, as Spike really seems to be enjoying Soarin's attempts to pick up fillies, but nevertheless, it was funny.
Nice light fic :)
@ladymoondancer
ReplyDeleteThat is it, thank you.
Ditsy as a bouncer? But yet she still is all muffinish....hmmm.
ReplyDeleteHow is that 'against Spike's wishes' anyway? That summary could use some tuning.
This was so formulaic and repetitive that it somehow turned inside out and became HILARIOUS. 5 stars.
ReplyDeleteHeheh, very amusing; good job.
ReplyDeleteI feel happy for Spike..... :fapfapfap:
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