Author: Phoenix Quill
Description: Ditzellia Esmerelda Doo is an average mare with a long name, and typical job.Through Storm and Snow (New Part 5!)
She also has a not so average eye condition, that brings pain in the form of a name given by other ponies. But
when unusual things start to happen, a stranger makes an offer that can turn the tables for our favorite mail mare.
Events take place before, during and after "The Return of Harmony" Episodes.
Additional Tags: Ditzy Doo, Discord, Hope,
46 comments:
Sad random comedy
ReplyDeleteSounds like my kinda fic
notfirst
ReplyDeleteI lol'd at Pheonix Quill's full name for Derpy Hooves.
ReplyDeleteSad Random Comedy... I did not know such a combination was possible.
ReplyDelete@Jelfes Dark humor, anypony?
ReplyDeleteI just may read a fic for once.
ReplyDelete*Bookmarked*
Sad Random and Comedy, this is worth a read
ReplyDeleteHey, I think I know that picture!! It was part of a very well-drawn comic if I remember correctly
ReplyDeleteI am interested to see how you turn this out. BUT FIRST I must sleep!
ReplyDeleteRead now.
ReplyDeleteRead comic picture. NOO Derpy is suicidal!
ReplyDeleteI read tommarow
ReplyDeleteI drunk NOW
I LIKE STRAWBERRY MUFFINs!
Strangely, I feel more respect for Derpy but in still just not a big fan
ReplyDelete*Gasp of a magnitude befitting Pinkie Pie*
ReplyDeleteAnother Ditzy story! I love it!
(Obviously, considering I'm writing a Ditzy story now.)
I shall read immediately, good sir.
"Ditzellia Esmerelda Doo"
ReplyDeletelolz.
Will read this later tonight.
I don't see how anyone could not like this pony. She's the embodiment of the fandoms influence.
ReplyDeleteMeh. I'm kinda busy reading Shipping and Handling, and I would prefer not to confuse myself.
ReplyDeleteSad random comedy?
ReplyDeleteA man walks into a bar, "OUCH!"
Finally it made it here!
ReplyDeleteWell, now I only have one thing to do!
Start Chapter Two...
@Pheonix Quill
ReplyDeleteI'm writing a fanfic as well. And i still haven't gotten even a tenth of a chapter done, lol. Good job and good luck, bro!!
i'm in it NOW EVERYPONY MUST READ IT!
ReplyDeleteDitzella Ezmerelda Doo? oh my...
ReplyDelete@Discord
ReplyDelete@Fluttershy
How about you two?
@Bombedrum Hey, you're writing one too? No way! Me too! It's like a large majority of this fanbase tries it out at some point or another or something!
ReplyDelete@Bombedrumbum
ReplyDeleteI have more important things to do than write story's like... OK i suck at story writing i do have ideas tho... OH THE IDEAS
@Discord Write about squirrels "OH THE SQUIRRELS"
ReplyDelete@Discord
ReplyDeleteWtote for my amusement you crazy dragon goat pony bird thing.
@Shadow Heart oh, the irony.....
ReplyDeleteSkills
ReplyDeleteChaos✓
punctuation X
grammar X
Trolling✓
took an Arrow in the knee✓
@Discord *aims*
ReplyDeleteThe tags alone arise my interest in this one. One more thing to pile onto my to do list.
ReplyDelete@Bombedrumbum
ReplyDeleteBombeeee that kills people
I figured Ditzy was short for "Ditsiana", but I guess that's just from reading another powerful fan fiction about our favorite mail mare.
ReplyDeleteSo far, Phoenix Quill, your story seems to be taking the right direction: good setting, good story line, and character actions that make sense.
I look forward to where you'll take this next.
@Tundra
ReplyDeleteI definitely agree with Tundra on this; so far the story is looking pretty darn good. Granted not much has happened just yet, but I will most certainly be keeping an eye on this one for when it updates.
Also, love the full name the author made up for Ditzy, very snazzy! ^_^
@Discord
ReplyDeleteYeah, well, you're not a "people". I think you'll be fine.
@a47a3bba-2051-11e1-af6b-000f20980440
ReplyDeleteIts funny, but I did not come up with that name for her, I found it on My Little Brony. Apparently it came from a Tumblr, but I have yet to find the original post.
Oh... I Just found it...
ReplyDeleteLink
http://askditzydoo.tumblr.com/post/10502360514/what-surprises-me-the-most-is-how-you-even-manage
Gilda Radner would be proud. That classic SNL joke never gets old. Going into the "read" list to watch for updates!
ReplyDeleteI'm a little apprehensive of the combination of the Sad and Random tags. I read that COPS fic here at EqD that was tagged "Comedy" and it really wasn't at all.
ReplyDeleteNice opening chapter, Derpy reacted very understandably and it was nice to see ponies standing up for her for once, in most of this type of story no-one seems to, looking forward to seeing the next chapter
ReplyDeleteHow To See FanFic :/
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read more of this one. I just hope that it's not too sad. Celestia knows that I don't need to cry over ponies anymore. But, it's really a great story.
ReplyDeleteHey for anyone out there that reads comments, My internet is shut down, and Its going to be a while until I have it back, Until then I am writing the second Chapter (have been since Dec 5th) When my internet comes back, I promise you shall have at least one new chapter.
ReplyDeleteHHHmmmmmpppphhhhh. Might have known that somepony wouldn't make the connection between "explosion of color out of nowhere" and the accident that left Ditzy's eyes messed up. Too bad for everyone that said idiot tends to go overboard when she does realize she's done something wrong. If things work out the way I think they will, Rainbow Dash isn't the first one using the phrase "Stop helping!!"
ReplyDeleteDoes anyone else have problems with Google Docs or is it just me?
ReplyDelete@KS
ReplyDeleteThere is supposed to be a fimfic link in there too, but for some reason, they derped and didn't put it in.