Author: Golden Dragon
Description: A mysterious pony with amnesia shows up in Ponyville in the middle of a winter night. Who is he, and why has he come?Snowfall Part 1
Snowfall Part 2
Snowfall Part 3
Snowfall Part 4
Spring Blossom Part 1
Spring Blossom Part 2
Spring Blossom Part 3 (New!)
Additional Tags: OC Pony, Amnesia, Drama
27 comments:
Ohh OC and AJ gonna chekc this out
ReplyDeleteHaven't seen this story idea before, very original of you.
ReplyDelete>MFW i clearly got owned by my speedreading of the description. (Still checking it out :P)
ReplyDelete*gulp* amnesia? LAWL, it's not in any way connected to... Please no?
ReplyDeleteLooks like somepony has a startling case of...AMNESIA!
ReplyDeleteThat is a good story, :)
ReplyDeleteWell, I feel sheepish.
ReplyDeleteI just wrote a 2 pt fanfic of my pony OC crashing into Rainbow and breaking her wing/hitting her head causing her to lose her memory except for a few things like her name. I was trying to find a post date of this because I just wrote mine about 2 days ago. Looks like we had the same idea bro. I just dont want someone to accuse me of copying. Although yours is waaay more well written than mine is.. xD If literature can have doodle forms, mine is doodle level. I've never written fanfiction before until now and then I stumble across this thinkin my idea was sooo original.
/feels very unnoriginal now.
Must have Act II
ReplyDeleteHey, could you at least post a source, to where you got the picture from? That'd be nice for the artist.
ReplyDeleteJust read part 1
ReplyDeleteI feel shipping between Rainbow Dash and Snowfall coming up...
That was a pretty nice read I look forward to part 2.
ReplyDeleteOn a semi related note, more stories need to be set during the winter. Seriously now, it makes for a great environment.
Needs part two now D:
ReplyDeletewait... end part 1? but huh... how do you do a part 2 from THIS?!?
ReplyDelete@EDracon mwahaha, there's a hint in the story . . .
ReplyDeleteHA HA! I know what the hint is!!!!!! >:)
ReplyDeleteI would be cool if someone made a elfen lied pony story
ReplyDeleteThat anime was so basass
Man, this fan-fic was dark. it was amazing
ReplyDeletethen again, it's the first fan-fic I have ever read so you know...
If someone's cold and hurt, they dont declare that they're cold and hurt
ReplyDeletethey'd probably make some sort of pathetic sounding whine and attempt to claw their way around.
i dont know how exactly to word that.
you get 3.5 stars rounded to 4
@woodledoodledoodle
ReplyDeleteI'm intending to do some work on the first four chapters soon.
Spring Blossom is really weak minded.
ReplyDelete@Timber
ReplyDeleteOr Mistress' magic is strong . . .
The second part is about Spring Blossom?
ReplyDeleteD'aw I wanted them to find a magical way to revive Snowfall and everything was happily ever after.
Then again almost nothing ever works that way and I am sadface.
Is the... Organization in this fix the same as the one in Past Sins?
ReplyDelete@PaperCamm
ReplyDeleteNo
reading part 2
ReplyDeleteso snowfall is alive?
ohhh its a flashback
but wait he is alive?
wait is spring blossom going back or is it a flashback?
is it both??
is it like a re run or something?
dammit this is the most confusing shit ever!
@jimmynator
ReplyDeleteYes, there's a flashback
Yes, he's alive now, too
Great job golden,I will for sure enjoy reading the end
ReplyDelete<3 NIBBLES <3