[Adventure] [Comedy]
Author: DJLowrider
Description: When the Cutie Mark Crusaders find a book telling of an ancient artifact with the power to grant one's heart's desire, it leads them on their biggest adventure ever - and quite possibly their last!Raiders of the Cutie Mark (New Chapter 5)
Additional Tags: CMC and the Last Crusade
45 comments:
Not sure if want, I think I'll read it anyways. Shouldn't this be labeled as a crossover though?
ReplyDeleteI would so pay to see a movie like that.
ReplyDeleteThis is probably better than the actual movie, lol!
ReplyDelete"Additional Tags: CMC and the Last Crusade"
ReplyDeleteI c wut u did thar
I shall add this to my read list :D
Dear god, no. Not Indy, too.
ReplyDeleteNazis stole Applebloom's cutie mark! Those bastards!
ReplyDeleteGood read!
ReplyDeleteCUTIE MARK CRUSADERS CRUSADERS!
YAH!
@keneticpest
ReplyDeleteWhat's worse is they slapped an unnecessary apostrophe onto her sign! Those bastards!
@Cesco Umm, maybe it was supposed to be somepony named Nazi and she meant to say Nazi's(Nazi has) stole(n) my cutie mark
ReplyDelete@Jelfes
ReplyDeleteWow. To name your kid that, your parents must have really hated you
Hah this promises to be a good read.
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ReplyDeleteReally funny stuff so far! The Holy Oat Pail . . .
ReplyDeleteKnew it was only a matter of time.
ReplyDeleteREADING!
I've got a bad feeling about this.
ReplyDeleteNazis, one group of antagonists that'll never be politically incorrect to kill in vast numbers. The next two are zombies and ninjas.
ReplyDeleteOh crap, Ninja Zombie Nazis! Grap my .30-06, baby, I'm going hunting!
@Cesco
ReplyDeleteDamn. So I guess they're not grammar nazis then.
@Idle Drifter
ReplyDeleteWhat about Ninja Zombie Nazis from space? That also look like giant insects?
...Also, interesting story.
@ToonNinja
ReplyDeleteJust more notches in the stock. Good thing I buy in bulk.
@keneticpest
ReplyDeleteNazis. I hate these guys...
'Nazi's? Why'd it have to be Nazi's?'
ReplyDeleteMr. Gram Marenatzi disapproves.
Quite interesting! And I have a hunch as to what's going on...
ReplyDeleteIv'e started way more fanfics then i probably should have over this weekend.
ReplyDeleteThere better not be any Nazis in this story. Although what a twist...
Hmmm.
ReplyDeleteHmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
@P. Pony Ponyson
ReplyDelete"Mr. Gram Marenatzi." HA! I love this fandom.
Dammit. I'm hoping they get their marks in Season 2 but with season 3 confirmed...
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ReplyDeleteHey folks, author of the story here. I just updated with the fourth chapter and I wanted to mention something here that I added in a note at the end of the chapter.
ReplyDeleteThere are going to be two separate and different endings and epilogues to the story. I'll be posting one ending and its epilogue first in their entirety and then the other. I wanted to give the readers the chance to decide which ending they prefer.
Thank you for all the comments and support so far. I'm thrilled so many people have enjoyed the story so far and I do hope you find both endings enjoyable in their own way.
Oh man. This story is just happy in a bottle. Too bad you needed to make Scoots an orphan for it to work though. But it does work.
ReplyDeleteHopefully we'll see something of Scoot's family sometime soon....
ReplyDeleteI like the fic. It was pretty obvious it was a setup right from the start, of course, but the idea of more than on ending intrigues me, at least....
Sorry if this is obvious or something, but Trevor is putting a spoiler's warning just in case.
ReplyDelete*SPOILER* It's fairly obvious that EVERYTHING is made up. The pieces of the puzzle, the holy oat pail, everything. The puzzles were WAY too simple, the pieces not very well hidden, ect.
Still, it's VERY fun to read anyhoof! XD Trevor is liking how everypony is agreeing that Scoots talent is dancing! She's awesome like that!
Also, props for doing multiple endings! Trevor loves those kind of stories! Please keep writing! Trevor has to know how it ends!
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Now THATS what I call a theatrical poster
ReplyDeleteIt's done?! Omigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigoshmigoshomigosh!!!!!
ReplyDelete*Reads avidly*
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
First ending was awesome! Well written and everything! On to the second ending! 8D
ReplyDelete~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
... CONFOUND THESE PONIES! THEY DRIVE ONE TO FEEL! ;a;
ReplyDeleteThat song was just... /cryforever.jpg
A truly wonderful story... Thank you so much for sharing this with us, DJ-Low. Trevor hopes that you keep on writing, and never look back!
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
CMC happyfic. Enjoy it while it's still not on the list of controlled substances. I'll be over here in a coma for the next 10 mins.
ReplyDeleteWhile I prefer the second ending, the first ending is more in-line of their known canon personalities.
ReplyDeleteHeh. Two endings, nice touch. Second ending is of course the feel good ending. Its how their adventures should end, kinda. I don't care for the idea that they need help to find their cutie marks, and to be honest, to me me it would make much more sense for each of them to have gotten their mark when they were getting the fragments from their sisters/idol. Still, the epilogue makes a lot of sense. Yet, it feels to soon.
ReplyDeleteTherefore, I'll stick with the first ending I reckon'.
Can we get a poster?
ReplyDeleteOhey this thing qualifies for 6-star
ReplyDeleteThe second ending would make a great episode if Hasbro was letting the show wrap up dangling plot threads in a final season.
ReplyDeleteThough I'm not certain Scootaloo will ever get a cutie mark even then, unless the universe figures out how to graphically represent Completely Missing the Point. ;-)
I really had no idea this story would be this well-liked. Thanks to everyone who's read and commented so far, I'm thrilled that you've all enjoyed this story.
ReplyDeleteI do indeed have more story ideas I intend to write and I even have one new story close to being finished. I'm also very tempted to do some more stories about Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo that would follow the second ending of Raiders of the Cutie Mark here. I have to admit I intrigued myself with some of the back story elements I created for the girls in this story. I'll have to see if any solid ideas come to me from this.
Again, my deepest thanks for your encouragement and all your comments. I also welcome you to check out my other FiM stories at FiMFiction, fanfiction.net or deviantART. I look forward to entertaining you all again in the future. ^_^
I see this becoming a future episode :)
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ReplyDeleteThis one goes into my personal headcanon list faster than you can say "cuteceanera".
ReplyDeleteYou're right there with 'Fallout:Equestria', man, you should feel proud. ;)