Author: Digi
Description: After developing odd feelings for a certain pony, Fluttershy confronts her friends in an attempt to come to terms with the new emotions.What is a Fluttershy?
What is a Fluttershy? Part 2
What is a Fluttershy? Part 3
What is a Fluttershy? Part 4
What is a Fluttershy? Part 5 (New!)
What is a Fluttershy? Epilogue (New!)
Additional Tags: Fluttershy confusion love Rainbow Dash
51 comments:
Looks good, and seems cute. :P
ReplyDeleteHeehee, dat title
ReplyDeleteWHAT IS A FLUTTERSHY?!?
*crash*
A misserable pile of kindness!
But enough talk, have at you!
Part 1 is old btw, first few paragraphs I isntantly knew I read it like a month ago, on this site no less.
ReplyDeleteI d'awww...
ReplyDeleteThe writing was a bit stilted but it worked well for the characters. I get the feeling there was more focus on dialogue than scene description. I enjoyed it.
@Anathemic One
ReplyDeleteThat should not be possible. I have been trying to get this story up for about a month or so. First time, they said the first chapter was too short, so I had to make chapter 2 before chapter 1 could ever be put up on the site. I did post it over on Ponychan to get feedback perhaps you saw it there?
That picture...invisible rainbow dash
ReplyDelete@necron_destroyer_lord
ReplyDeleteMaybe, though I doubt it, only been on Ponychan like 5 times.
But anyways, it's a good story, I look forward to more.
24 hours since a Rainbow Dash ship.
ReplyDeleteXX days/weeks since a Pinkie Dash ship.
>enters to make a Castlevania reference
ReplyDelete>sees post #2
Good work, internet.
Like it so far, slow paced, but it suit the story so far and make the dialog flew without effort, making them "real". Also, my duo of Waifu Ponies (Rarity and Twilight) reacted just as planned, so I am full of joy here ;) Can't wait for AJ reaction - she should be the one with something bittersweet to say to poor Flutty ;)
ReplyDeleteI love Twilight so much, "It would be a good learning experience".
ReplyDeleteYour spot on with the characters Mr Author, looking forward to the next chapter(s).
Stories like this lead me to think the author is going through a period of self discovery. Even if that's not the case, it's still nice to think about.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait for chapter 3
loved it. Stories like this give me a serious case of the warm fuzzies.
ReplyDeleteMoar Boar wants moar.
ReplyDeletea miserable little pile of adorable
ReplyDeletewe need more.
ReplyDeletePlease Sir, can I have sum moar?
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff! Twilight's last little comment about love made me chuckle even before I read that Fluttershy chuckled too! I eagerly await Part 3!
ReplyDeleteAll of monies
ReplyDeleteOh, man, an update! Yesssssssss!
ReplyDeleteGood job overall. Watch grammar and sentence structure. I would go into detail except I should probably be sleeping right now.
ReplyDeleteI like the story. Can't wait for more.
ReplyDeleteMoar? This is my top fanfic atm.
ReplyDeleteSO FLANKING CUTE
ReplyDeleteI really like this. It's pretty well written. And I've always approved of Flutter Dash so it's even better for me.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next one to come out.
I thought this was going to be a castlevania crossover.... my bad
ReplyDeleteWow i never figured myself to be a fan of stories like this . . . i have almost 200mb of storied on my phone, all downloaded from this site. I visit the shipping folder more than any of them . . . O.O
ReplyDeleteI have some serious love for a few Normal stories that i have read . . but i keep coming back to stories like these >.< Uhm . . . . yeah, 26, male . . . . now im really buckin confused <._.> *sigh* i sure hope chapter 4 comes soon. I really like the experiences Fs has in this. O.O Im more partial to Twilight Sparkle myself, i still love reading about them all. And this story is no exception.
sir i congradulate you on a job well done, a story about a bicurious pony that dosn't revolve around sex if you get this, know that you have five stars from me for giving fluttershy the best personality i could ask for my favorite of the maine six
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing :o
ReplyDeleteCould we get an update, or is this dead already?
I really enjoyed it. You captured each of their personas well, and it was undoubtedly adorable and cute as hell.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed it. Especially Twilight's "It could be a good learning experience". I had a good laugh there.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to the next update.
If this is dead, I would be SORELY disappointed.
ReplyDeleteThis has the makings of a great story.
Well, looking forward to an update. It's interesting :)
ReplyDeleteFluttershy is moe moe tree
ReplyDeleteNeed update NAO
ReplyDelete@Anonymous really symphony of the night joke... well if were going there avgn The F&&king load screen
ReplyDeleteI WANT PART 4 NOOOAAAW!!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Casper.
ReplyDeleteWHERE IS PART 4!
You totally need to continue this man.
Also..."For the greater good!"
We need this series continued!
ReplyDeleteMoar? Pleaaase?
ReplyDeleteOh, please tell me this one isn't dead...
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI thought that too!
HUMINAHUMINAWHAT'STHIS?
ReplyDeleteA FLUTTERDASH FIC?
Perhaps I shall have a look.
HUMINAHUMINAWHAT'STHIS?
ReplyDeleteA FLUTTERDASH FIC?
Perhaps I shall have a look.
Finished the story and now I will go to bed, disappointed and sad. You will see why, when you read the end...*sigh*
ReplyDeleteThat epilogue killed this story.
ReplyDeleteWhat is a fluttershy? Not a miserable pile of secrets.
ReplyDeleteWhat is a Fluttershy? A Fluttershy; that what it is; well, buck if I know. What is a Fluttershy? I don't know, but I'm down with the pony and I'm down for life, yo.
ReplyDeleteI was really upset at the end
ReplyDeleteBut seeing as I can relate to this story oh so well, I'm in tears I can't even...
I was really upset at the end
ReplyDeleteBut seeing as I can relate to this story oh so well, I'm in tears I can't even...
Really lame end.
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