Author: Ceets
Description: It's a very special day for Princess Luna, but it seems nopony remembered what day it is, leaving Luna feeling forgotten and betrayedA Lonely Night
A Lonely Night Part 2
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A Lonely Night
A Lonely Night Part 2
Additional Tags: Sad, heartbreaking, conflict, betrayal, birthday
47 comments:
hear that?
ReplyDeleteI think my heart just shattered
I almost never cry at fanfics but this is an exeption luna sad fics are just way too sad to read
ReplyDeleteI read these chapters when they first appeared on Fanfiction.net, and they truly do a good job of getting across the crushing loneliness Luna is feeling.
ReplyDelete>post title says "A Lovely Night"
ReplyDelete>see that it's about Luna
>ignore [Sad] label, disregard title in links
>"Lovely Night" making me expect something happy
Confound these typos, they drive me to unexpected sadface.
I really hope this isn't all there will be. =/ Please let there be a happy ending for poor, abused Luna.
ReplyDelete@Ciroton:
ReplyDeleteThe half-cliffhanger at the end of Part 2 leads me to believe there will be, and more than likely a happy one.
"The guards told us to stay in our rooms because of some incident, so we ignored them and went to look for you. What happened?"
ReplyDeleteLOL, that sounds a lot more like RD than Twilight.
The first part seriously hurt me. That was the most saddest thing I have ever seen... My heart just blew up into a billion pieces especially since I love Luna so much =(
ReplyDeleteAnd the second part. Well damn, things got intense. I honestly cannot wait to see what happens next.
...I just now noticed this, but the "additional tags" made me chuckle.
ReplyDelete"Sad, heartbreaking, conflict, betrayal, birthday"
♫One of these things just doesn't beloooong...♪
I get the feeling that Derpy wished her happy birthday
ReplyDeleteI told myself I wasn't going to make any fan art for this series but this pushed me over the edge. I really like Luna's character and I need to make fan art of her.
ReplyDeleteGreat story so far, I can't wait to read the rest.
FOREVER ALUNA.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapter. Also LOTR reference with the evil side communicating through a reflection.
“Magic the pumpkin skin! Sunshine uncommon.”
ReplyDeleteThere seems to be more to that than you may notice at first...
Really great story. Second part is a tease, but the first part is nice and self-contained, and very well-paced, skillfully tugging at your heartstrings. Good to see that quality writing is still coming from this fandom.
ReplyDeletestupid Derpy, making me spit out my drink all over my keyboard.
ReplyDeleteThat was indeed sad.
ReplyDeleteEspecial the whole no heart put in the night bit...
Makes me feel really bad for her...
It also knocked her up on my list of favorites.
I feel so happy that everypony likes my story!
ReplyDeleteI'm going to start working on Part 3 in a few minutes!
@Ceets
ReplyDeleteyay
this better become an epic story
ReplyDelete@Ceets
ReplyDeletePlease finish part 3 soon! I really want to read the ending.
comon part 3! D:
ReplyDeleteA very wonderful story. I'm very much looking forward to part three, once it's finished.
ReplyDeleteI died a little inside at the end of part 1...
ReplyDeleteI had two of my converts read this, they cried, and then proceeded to try to hurt me.
ReplyDeleteI think it may have been a bad idea...
But all in all, a truly wonderful story! I would leave it the way it is, to let the audiences collective mind wander in how the solution could be fixed, or what would happen the next day.
I don't like that idea, I've seen too many great fan fictions die, this one could shape up to be the *so-awesome!*, and I want to see it get there. Please update this again!
ReplyDeleteI hear. Please, finish this one when possible. This is good, it can't die.
ReplyDeleteWe're rootin for you
comon man we need a part 3! this is seriously good! we're all counting on you :(
ReplyDeleteF5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5
ReplyDeleteCan someone PLEASE tell the writer we're all waiting for the next part?
ReplyDeleteFavorite story of all time! What happened to you Ceets? Where's the 3rd part? Did you go into a coma?
ReplyDelete*Still waiting for the next part* ;__;
ReplyDeleteWhat happened to this story???!?
ReplyDeleteI can't find part 3.
ReplyDeleteI swear the author said he had a draft of chapter 3. I guess he gave up on it.
ReplyDeleteHey! So uh...part 3...DON'T LET THE FLAME DIE OUT!
ReplyDeleteFinish please, I'm bawling my eyes out.
ReplyDeleteI HAVENT EATEN SINCE APRIL
ReplyDeletePost part 3! :D
ReplyDeleteMoar posts?
ReplyDeleteTHank f'ing Celestia there's a part 2. i would cry if it ended at part 1
ReplyDeletePART 3 PLEASE!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWHY DOES PART 2 NO LONGER WORK?!
ReplyDeleteyah... y u no make pt 2 work?
ReplyDeleteit's her b-day isn't it?
ReplyDeletesunuva... FIX PART 2 DAMN YOU
ReplyDeleteWhere is part 2? This isn't fair. I start crying and all that good shit, and I get rewarded with... nothing. Seriously, where is part 2?
ReplyDeleteWhen is Part 2 going to be fixed? I really want to finish this...
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