• Story: Overnight Mail

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    [Normal] Luna and Derpy hooves?! What kind of crazy combo is this!?
    Summary: Derpy and Luna swap jobs for a day.
    Overnight Mail
    Wednesday, February 9, 2011 op
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    16 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2011 at 1:29 PM

      Wow, that was really quite good.

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    2. Cereal VelocityFebruary 9, 2011 at 1:52 PM

      This is wonderfully well-written; I enjoyed the hell out of it. You have an exceptional narrative voice. I specifically liked Derpy's characterization (which we don't often get enough of in other stories) and the bit with the dog.

      Keep it up!

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    3. PacceFebruary 9, 2011 at 3:35 PM

      Wow.
      I laughed when Luna commandeered the couch and then was kinda moved by the end.
      Good work!

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    4. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2011 at 6:07 PM

      Very, very good!

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    5. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:07 AM

      Darn you, anon writer. You made me tear up. That's not supposed to happen.

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    6. Reading BronyFebruary 10, 2011 at 5:48 PM

      Good show sir that was very cute.

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    7. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 7:20 PM

      The prayers to Luna were very touching. C'mon, I shouldn't be sympathetic towards Diamond friggin-Tiara of all ponies!

      Derpy fics are awesome! Nice work.

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    8. ZarkanorfMarch 6, 2011 at 1:09 PM

      Now THIS personification of Derpy- Bright Eyes, I can live with. I wish we knew who this mystery author is; they did such a wonderful job with the story-telling and gave us moments to laugh and admire.

      Great job, Anon!

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    9. Heavy Weapons PonyApril 2, 2011 at 5:25 PM

      why is this not one of the most populer stories on this site? Its amazing :O

      I dont know why this had to be Derpy exactly, seeing as how she sounds and acts like any normal pony in this story. But its still good.

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    10. ZZZZZXXXXX77777April 11, 2011 at 5:09 PM

      I think It's great that you know the difference between autism and astigmatism. It annoys me to no end when derpy is portrayed as retarded. Good writing too. Imagery cold be touched up a little but other than that I thought it was a great story1

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    11. AnonymousApril 16, 2011 at 6:22 PM

      Great story, Moabite, whoever you are.

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    12. British Derpy HoovesMay 18, 2011 at 2:27 AM

      I really like this one...mainly for the points other people have brought up in comments above me. I talked about it on Episode 1b of my little podcast because it is the best Luna fic I have read so far.

      http://mylittlepodcast.blogspot.com/2011/05/episode-1b-cute-kick-to-face.html

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    13. AnonymousJune 1, 2011 at 1:01 AM

      This was actually my first pony-fic, and because of it, I have given so many others a chance. Thank you.

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    14. DarthVaderSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:12 AM

      I wish this fic was more well known. The Luna segment was very fun and enjoyable. But the 2nd half with Derpy was truly inspired. Bravo good sir bravo!

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    15. Ergo CogitoJanuary 15, 2012 at 11:17 AM

      This brought me to tears. Oh Luna.

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    16. LahirienNovember 28, 2021 at 1:44 PM

      This is also on Fimfiction: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/13772/overnight-mail

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