tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post5188424770317974645..comments2024-03-28T13:36:33.816-06:00Comments on Equestria Daily - MLP Stuff!: Story: Imposition (Update Complete!)Sethistohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03362851157623052522noreply@blogger.comBlogger116125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-91690786506975250822012-01-19T19:30:42.814-07:002012-01-19T19:30:42.814-07:00Good Humbert, if that is not an oxymoron. I disag...Good Humbert, if that is not an oxymoron. I disagree with the people who were upset at the final chapter; I thought it was a fine ending, and some long adventure enclosing a rational explanation would not be an improvement. Nabokov would like to talk to you about using "it's" as a possessive.shagbarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07759080646499030919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-77144820501107869542011-10-02T18:03:10.390-06:002011-10-02T18:03:10.390-06:00You know, I would've liked this to become an a...You know, I would've liked this to become an adventure through time and space, but whatevs.tectobothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11943116891568118540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-7153014203756814072011-09-23T09:12:03.585-06:002011-09-23T09:12:03.585-06:00That was a good read.That was a good read.Jacopohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04867392658553489903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-82352931524549454862011-08-15T20:25:18.947-06:002011-08-15T20:25:18.947-06:00Wow this is quite possible one of the best pieces ...Wow this is quite possible one of the best pieces of parody I've ever read.Ryexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10868001061893478869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-63095325966467160872011-08-07T08:27:26.393-06:002011-08-07T08:27:26.393-06:00Why is there still an Incomplete tag? It seems har...Why is there still an Incomplete tag? It seems hard to continue the story after this ending... I nearly didn't read it because I though it was incomplete and would have missed out a lot. But the list of jokes in the end was unnecessary, the joke is just not funny if you have to explain it.Lucas Brönnimannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18274286980771764120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-34222024012551696932011-08-01T14:20:17.275-06:002011-08-01T14:20:17.275-06:00Haha, this was so crazy! As others have said, the...Haha, this was so crazy! As others have said, the self-referential humor is hilarious; I love all of the ways you paint the fourth wall. Furthermore, Brony Celestia is my favorite variant now, I think.The Lovely Penguinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07618515221534658969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-80478038239556189182011-08-01T12:19:27.480-06:002011-08-01T12:19:27.480-06:00This was totally hilarious. I loved the style; the...This was totally hilarious. I loved the style; the wording and self-aware humor was fantastic. I'm going to keep an eye open for more of your stories.ItsTheWhinyGuyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02265234390061793333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-65708705063089094292011-07-29T21:12:07.894-06:002011-07-29T21:12:07.894-06:00Holy balls, the ending caught me off-guard.
Yes, ...Holy balls, the ending caught me off-guard.<br /><br />Yes, it was hilarious and unexpected, but it was EXTREMELY abrupt, and killed my high hopes for a long and epic quest. Instead, I got a quick (albeit laugh out loud hilarious) joke, and a "The End".<br /><br />Good work, overall, though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-58396053480062089972011-07-29T21:05:12.462-06:002011-07-29T21:05:12.462-06:00Aaaw, apparently I was one of the few who actually...Aaaw, apparently I was one of the few who actually got the humor.<br /><br />It's funny precisely because of the self-referential style. Actually, for some reason, I thought it was absolutely hilarious when you called yourself funny. I think it's because if comedians remark on their jokes people expect them to insult their jokes, but you instead give them over-powered praise.<br /><br />When I saw that you had compiled every joke into a list I promptly read it all and snortled the entire way through.<br /><br />I absolutely love your style of writing. It's intelligent, parodical, and yet still funny. Storywise, yes, I believe that you cut off the story way to short; however, I never felt like my time was ever wasted.<br /><br />Please write something again in this style, it's absolutely hilarious. (Did you see that comma right there in the middle of that sentence? Yeah, that was a reference to when there was a comma in Lolita.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-46198021710838579192011-07-26T13:10:52.360-06:002011-07-26T13:10:52.360-06:00I didn't like the ending... =/
Getting abducte...I didn't like the ending... =/<br />Getting abducted by a brony Trollestia? No. I don't like that, especially if it abruptly ends a really interesting story full of hilarious self-aware humor.Rosethorn Larana'Khashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06897611653815684145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-54572602663147186692011-07-25T16:19:46.357-06:002011-07-25T16:19:46.357-06:00>Also, I thought that "Imposition" wa...>Also, I thought that "Imposition" was poking fun at the fanfic "Stuck", by using a synonym that was more fitting into the purple prose of the passage.<br /><br />Dammit, I should have thought of that.<br />Anyway, yeah, I was just messing with you guys. Part seven is incoming. Unless, of course I'm messing with you right now. Hehe.tinwhistlenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-17373136347419137982011-07-24T16:06:22.410-06:002011-07-24T16:06:22.410-06:00I feel kind of let down by the ending. I got all e...I feel kind of let down by the ending. I got all excited when I saw that the fic updated, then I found out that >nope.avi it's just a list of jokes.<br /><br />The tag under the story still says "incomplete" though, so I'm going to pretend it was a joke final chapter, and that the story will continue in a chapter 7 to be released in the future.<br /><br />(Also, I thought that "Imposition" was poking fun at the fanfic "Stuck", by using a synonym that was more fitting into the purple prose of the passage.)Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428042751865321563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-13868543494930961182011-07-23T10:08:31.949-06:002011-07-23T10:08:31.949-06:00Fair enough the author admitted it was experimenta...Fair enough the author admitted it was experimental so to hell with 'proper' story writing. Also the first five parts deserved their five stars.<br /><br />As for this final part, still, WTF? <br /><br />The main core of the sixth part was the joke list. Had I the time to be a pre-reader, I would have said, "the joke's list made my eyes glaze over even before I finished it".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-22433079515882619252011-07-23T06:29:51.443-06:002011-07-23T06:29:51.443-06:00This was amazing until the last chapter ruined it ...This was amazing until the last chapter ruined it forever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-47105668408461939042011-07-23T02:39:16.942-06:002011-07-23T02:39:16.942-06:00OMFG!!! BEST THING EVER!!!! Soooooo well written t...OMFG!!! BEST THING EVER!!!! Soooooo well written too! Are you like an English major or something?<br /><br />It could have been even funnier to have you freak out all the ponies with all that you already know about them.<br /><br />Also: thanks for so much Fluttershy! She's the best!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-72195631094548468582011-07-23T01:18:47.098-06:002011-07-23T01:18:47.098-06:00You're all more than welcome to write your own...You're all more than welcome to write your own, because that's all I got for this one. Ah well.<br />Gonna keep writing other fics, you may see them.tinwhistlenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-9377093950378078772011-07-22T23:06:47.632-06:002011-07-22T23:06:47.632-06:00I was REALLY hoping this story was going to lead i...I was REALLY hoping this story was going to lead into a larger story arc. I really enjoyed what you had going here. Sad to see it end so soon.Maxaminusnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-59546289081723870422011-07-22T22:32:48.210-06:002011-07-22T22:32:48.210-06:00When I first started reading this fanfic I like ho...When I first started reading this fanfic I like how the character interacted with the world and I also liked how you handled the characters first interactions with the mane cast. However, after the character was taken prisoner and brought in front of Celestia I lost faith in this fanfic. You had so much potential with this and you ruined it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-14590094164413736082011-07-22T22:12:19.709-06:002011-07-22T22:12:19.709-06:00Great meta-writing, pretty good 4th wall breaking,...Great meta-writing, pretty good 4th wall breaking, and my favorite version of Celestia yet. I tip my hat to you, sir.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-57734970086399300702011-07-22T22:08:47.802-06:002011-07-22T22:08:47.802-06:00Haha, the ending was a bit underwhelming. I bet th...Haha, the ending was a bit underwhelming. I bet this was a bit tiring to write. And you seem to have been very inspired by LolitaHio590https://www.blogger.com/profile/04041832799679479121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-13682509022484163992011-07-22T21:04:20.199-06:002011-07-22T21:04:20.199-06:00Huh... well that ended... oddly.
I mean, talk abo...Huh... well that ended... oddly.<br /><br />I mean, talk about out of left field. I can't say it was BAD it was just... Odd... and Meta as all holy hell... SO much so I think my eyes went full derp for a sec...<br /><br />I'm really not sure how to respond... I think I would have preferred something slightly different but I'm not sure how to complain about this ending either...<br /><br />...<br /><br />OHGODIMSOCONFUSED<br /><br />But nice work<br />I think?<br />Yes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-66309494481141736232011-07-22T20:26:15.641-06:002011-07-22T20:26:15.641-06:00The fourth wall is there for a reason. That reason...The fourth wall is there for a reason. That reason is not target practice.<br />Self-referential solipsism is not clever.<br />Your fic is bad and you should feel very bad for doing it.<br />two thumbs down.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-21487916170549253932011-07-22T18:32:22.246-06:002011-07-22T18:32:22.246-06:00@Part 4 "Leave the tea."
Take the canol...@Part 4 "Leave the tea."<br /><br />Take the canoli?<br /><br />XD Oh Celestia this fic would be so much fun to riff. Self-Parody Writer VS. Riffer; a classic battle of wits and humor...Not A Good Username 360https://www.blogger.com/profile/12875105656885649770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-49206807882445994672011-07-22T18:11:54.120-06:002011-07-22T18:11:54.120-06:00Welp, there it goes and ends itself. I was enjoyin...Welp, there it goes and ends itself. I was enjoying the interactions with the regular ponies as well... It seemed very believable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-3764579495822593832011-07-22T17:57:11.477-06:002011-07-22T17:57:11.477-06:00*reads part 1*
"Ceci n'est pas une cloud...*reads part 1*<br /><br />"Ceci n'est pas une cloud."<br /><br />Making a reference to my one of my most favorite paintings?<br /><br />You have my interest.Not A Good Username 360https://www.blogger.com/profile/12875105656885649770noreply@blogger.com