tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post3458029104351219160..comments2024-03-28T13:36:33.816-06:00Comments on Equestria Daily - MLP Stuff!: Story: The Three Hooves (Update Sequel Part 4!)Sethistohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03362851157623052522noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-16658373755272561772012-04-16T21:04:55.604-06:002012-04-16T21:04:55.604-06:00I love stories about Whooves and Derpy and the gir...I love stories about Whooves and Derpy and the girls, but that sad tag worries me. Oh well, time to buck up and read!Millennial Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02156353024049811684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-58561773835199121192012-04-16T19:32:58.074-06:002012-04-16T19:32:58.074-06:00I only see 4 parts.I only see 4 parts.Nulonohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00696072610155482618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-13509913249542472232012-04-16T17:40:04.031-06:002012-04-16T17:40:04.031-06:00@Starfall Is Fimfiction having issues again, or i...@<a href="#c4131407995835862357" rel="nofollow">Starfall</a> Is Fimfiction having issues again, or is my firewall just being stupid?Alondrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03723139379439204852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-41314079958358623572012-04-16T17:10:16.655-06:002012-04-16T17:10:16.655-06:00Those are some odd tags to be seen together.Those are some odd tags to be seen together.Erichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06407511016943962164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-70530381919650788622012-04-16T16:45:48.807-06:002012-04-16T16:45:48.807-06:00"Not necessary an error, but did you really m..."Not necessary an error, but did you really mean to use "fiancée" or was it "fiancé"? It certainly makes things more interesting, don't change it. :)"<br /><br />Wow. That use of spellcheck slipped past me completely. You know what? I'm leaving it. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-71128809413423422362012-04-16T06:24:23.935-06:002012-04-16T06:24:23.935-06:00I've been rereading this chapter. Dinky, Pip a...I've been rereading this chapter. Dinky, Pip and Sweetie... How did I manage to miss them the first time?Shantarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09291124101001423560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-38818014526014574342012-04-16T05:52:20.639-06:002012-04-16T05:52:20.639-06:00Great ending to a brilliant story! I'll try to...Great ending to a brilliant story! I'll try to keep this comment spoiler-free as much as I can.<br /><br />Dinky shows whose daughter she is. Simply amazing! <br /><br />Fluttershy's coup. I see what you did there. :) <br /><br />Gala scene. So sweet and sad at the same time. I had tears in my eyes when I read about it. Just like after the revelation of who does the statue in the opening belong to. ;_;<br /><br />Savory. I though that her advice to Dinky was suspiciously familiar. :) <br /><br />Ditzy whispering directions to TARDIS to Doctor to let him have his victorious moment made me smile. It shows how good do they compliment each other and how do they understand each other. Both as battle couple, and as a husband and wife. <br /><br />I hope you would write a sequel some day. Cannot have enough of Doctor and his family.<br /><br />There was a couple of minor errors in this chapter:<br />"Ditzy and Dinky" in the scene with Top Hat - should be "Ditzy and Sparkler"<br />"fillyplaced" - two words<br />"I remember as a young filly" - should be "colt"<br />Not necessary an error, but did you really mean to use "fiancée" or was it "fiancé"? It certainly makes things more interesting, don't change it. :)Shantarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09291124101001423560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-60238282168189965552012-03-28T03:51:32.869-06:002012-03-28T03:51:32.869-06:00This work needs more love! Definitely one to read....This work needs more love! Definitely one to read.MedicShyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09071710341113795974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-53918155781141465992012-03-25T19:39:20.932-06:002012-03-25T19:39:20.932-06:00I remember this! I watched for a while, but forgot...I remember this! I watched for a while, but forgot about it because it wasn't updated for so long. But now it's back!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-24330475708353018352012-03-25T18:18:14.840-06:002012-03-25T18:18:14.840-06:00I'm very surprised this fic receives so little...I'm very surprised this fic receives so little attention. IMO it's easily the best Doctor & family story I've read.<br /><br />Keep up good work!Shantarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09291124101001423560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-37097298452189579762012-02-23T21:53:30.040-07:002012-02-23T21:53:30.040-07:00@Shantara
I'm hoping to have the girls all pl...@<a href="#c8744438015878045282" rel="nofollow">Shantara</a><br /><br />I'm hoping to have the girls all play off each other in the next two chapters, giving them some time to distinguish themselves. I do see Ditzy as the main female lead, with the other being supporting characters meant to highlight aspects of her life.<br /><br /><br />I'll give them a shot, though. After all, Lyra in School Daze was supposed to be a walk-on but I couldn't stop writing her.<br /><br />I'm finishing the last chapter of School Daze, then I'll be polishing off chapter 3. It's already a nice way in, and I just have to construct a few scene bridges. Wait until you get a load of THIS cliffhanger...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-87444380158780452822012-02-06T08:38:43.173-07:002012-02-06T08:38:43.173-07:00“Let me tell you, monsters across the length and b...“Let me tell you, monsters across the length and breadth of the universe are afraid of these eyes. The biggest and nastiest ran in fear. That was back when I was alone. Now I’ve got my family with me to think about. Just try to imagine what I’m capable of doing."<br />And this is exactly why this story is so awesome! Your portrayal of Whooves/Doo/Smith family is very close to my headcanon and this fact only amplified my enjoyment from second chapter. And combining them with two other Doctors has tripled the fun. <br /><br />The revelation and cliffhanger at the end make the waiting for chapter 3 even more difficult. <br /><br />Also, I hope you have something in mind for other Doctors' companions, because for now their presence feels unnecessary.Shantarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09291124101001423560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-60684727990622153492012-01-04T20:52:40.484-07:002012-01-04T20:52:40.484-07:00@Remy
Ponies vanishing, a village of ponies that ...@<a href="#c7272950788844377096" rel="nofollow">Remy</a><br /><br />Ponies vanishing, a village of ponies that may not be ponies killing other ponies, 3 Doctors, the past-present-future of Equestria erased, and daisies.<br /><br />What more could a story need! :DAlondrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03723139379439204852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-32968003703078816592012-01-04T12:14:08.379-07:002012-01-04T12:14:08.379-07:00@Multiversity I did. Miss Prefect. :P
This was aw...@<a href="#c4590379330684086520" rel="nofollow">Multiversity</a> I did. Miss Prefect. :P<br /><br />This was awesome, and I hope the rest of the fic stays high-quality. Looking forward to more.Tirothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14995303991814194120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-76085585976966766952012-01-03T18:59:52.383-07:002012-01-03T18:59:52.383-07:00A lot of Doctor Whoof this month!A lot of Doctor Whoof this month!rmplstlskn101104ehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02190857507900653721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-89871998796307315972012-01-03T17:45:43.640-07:002012-01-03T17:45:43.640-07:00Enjoying it so far. I look forward to future (pas...Enjoying it so far. I look forward to future (past?) chapters.GBscientisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03619300079578011179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-8150882211237576422012-01-03T16:07:29.550-07:002012-01-03T16:07:29.550-07:00This has some serious potential! I'm going to...This has some serious potential! I'm going to keep an eye on it.<br /><br />Also, Third Doctor? Woot!fizzlefisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16546243290802065800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-72729507888443770962012-01-03T15:53:21.006-07:002012-01-03T15:53:21.006-07:00Never thought I'd see a Pertwee Doctor Pony. :...Never thought I'd see a Pertwee Doctor Pony. :DRemyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04330631897941722392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-45903793306840865202012-01-03T13:46:07.404-07:002012-01-03T13:46:07.404-07:00I spotted a Hitchhiker's Guide reference! Anyo...I spotted a Hitchhiker's Guide reference! Anyone else see it?Multiversityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12601519502300819874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-3794262785173698172012-01-03T13:42:16.019-07:002012-01-03T13:42:16.019-07:00As a sci-fi nerd, no kind of fan work makes me hap...As a sci-fi nerd, no kind of fan work makes me happier than a well done Doctor Whoof fic. I feel that this is one of them. Not quite Traveller or Mines of Dragon Mountain just yet, but I can see it in the writing style; the potential is definitely there. Especially since is the first fic I've seen that does a Whoof take on Eleventh, who is actually my favourite doctor. I can tell I'm going to get really into this one.DannyJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273313206696087395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-44792631586336514232012-01-03T12:52:20.069-07:002012-01-03T12:52:20.069-07:00I was prepared to dislike this as just another Who...I was prepared to dislike this as just another Whooves fic among the masses and masses of Whooves fics, but this one is fresh, original and fun. Bravo good sir.Blueshifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09169550428565750949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-43961671968798513302012-01-03T12:22:02.257-07:002012-01-03T12:22:02.257-07:00Whooves family goes to a family trip! It was a pro...Whooves family goes to a family trip! It was a promising first chapter, looking out for next. <br /><br />You've mixed Dinky and Ditzy names once or twice.Shantarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09291124101001423560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-62487140126108121502012-01-03T11:59:29.179-07:002012-01-03T11:59:29.179-07:00Awesome
It had some noticable errors here and the...Awesome <br />It had some noticable errors here and there but nothing too distracting.<br />I dont think Ive read a Doctor fic that included sparkler as well so I thought that was neat. Cant wait for more-TheSignPainterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11021071755954835153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-13078015837533957592012-01-03T11:38:01.063-07:002012-01-03T11:38:01.063-07:00And I was right! This is a wonderful start! Can...And I was right! This is a wonderful start! Can't wait to see how you write the other two doctors, though your Tennant writing seems spot on.<br /><br />Also, somehow, you might want to explain how they don't remember what happened. They are the same person after all.<br /><br />If I recall, in one of the multi-doctor specials, one of them purposefully erased his memory of that event so he could experience it again. Just a suggestion to add a bit of realism.<br /><br />Can't wait to see what you do with Smith doctor not having Derpy around.<br /><br />Also, couple notes I saw:<br /><br />"He’s been waiting years to hear her say that, hasn’t her?"<br />- Should be "hasn't he"<br /><br />"Dinky’s husband raised an eyebrow."<br />- Should be "Derpy's (or Ditzy's) husband"<br /><br />Anyhoof, this is a great start! I truly hope that you can delivier and will be watching for updates with great interest!BeatleBronyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17148563150634951483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-74421950673720540492012-01-03T11:35:23.043-07:002012-01-03T11:35:23.043-07:00*reads fic*
This has the potential to be really go...*reads fic*<br />This has the potential to be really good, and really, really depressing. I like it.shavedjudomonkeyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04626428627156553583noreply@blogger.com