tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post2229124869538397222..comments2024-03-25T01:23:13.554-06:00Comments on Equestria Daily - MLP Stuff!: Story: Going Home (Update Complete!)Sethistohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03362851157623052522noreply@blogger.comBlogger55125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-20595614987115178892012-03-23T17:53:11.766-06:002012-03-23T17:53:11.766-06:00Woah, that was very emotionally wrenching to read,...Woah, that was very emotionally wrenching to read, but a good story nonetheless.djthomphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05755045102016591398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-43285586041167860942012-03-08T22:11:00.120-07:002012-03-08T22:11:00.120-07:00I thought My Little Dashie was overdramatic and pl...I thought My Little Dashie was overdramatic and played out. This had me crying bawling. Hit me right in the heartstrings. Thanks for that.<br />Slap a sad tag on this though, please?Jocelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349470450290082856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-20368275366947657472012-02-29T20:07:26.913-07:002012-02-29T20:07:26.913-07:00Wow, dramatic without hitting over the head. Very ...Wow, dramatic without hitting over the head. Very enjoyable through and through.Melodiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06468168804024784370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-58492678106250698542012-02-29T12:38:28.964-07:002012-02-29T12:38:28.964-07:00Great story. depressing right at the end there wit...Great story. depressing right at the end there with Pinkie alone in her fathers room (made that as spoiler free as possible. ppl shouldn't read comments before reading or watching stuff, it just spoils things. Oops, bit offtopic) 4.5 stars for a great story. keep it up :)Nevel7https://www.blogger.com/profile/04886392453017940536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-48598315198708889252012-02-29T08:52:10.009-07:002012-02-29T08:52:10.009-07:00Aside from the two mentioned earlier, the story Pi...Aside from the two mentioned earlier, the story Pinkiemania which you featured on here also had Pinkie's parents in. :3The Dusty Foresthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007052431925988668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-71576999927363441022012-02-29T01:16:41.651-07:002012-02-29T01:16:41.651-07:00You deserve 5 starsYou deserve 5 starsUlrikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06323820383742242951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-70715032340197575012012-02-28T20:55:33.696-07:002012-02-28T20:55:33.696-07:00SO MANY TEARS. I guess it, and yet...
THE TEARS.SO MANY TEARS. I guess it, and yet...<br /><br />THE TEARS.Peanuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06197930246905864344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-92169926692111156522012-02-28T20:13:00.849-07:002012-02-28T20:13:00.849-07:00I'm still reading this one and I'm liking ...I'm still reading this one and I'm liking it so far (Pinkie is VERY well written), but it could use some proofreading. The tense is inconsistent, commas are underused, and the constant typing of "Zecura" and "Scoot-a-loo" is distracting.Peanuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06197930246905864344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-67246609891852450652012-02-28T18:29:38.893-07:002012-02-28T18:29:38.893-07:00Oh wow, how long has THIS one been? I think I'...Oh wow, how long has THIS one been? I think I'll have to give it a full reread.Melodiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06468168804024784370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-44568192622444611972012-02-28T17:55:53.168-07:002012-02-28T17:55:53.168-07:00Wow this sounds really sad but it's a great id...Wow this sounds really sad but it's a great idea for a story. I'll have to read this after I study!JDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02401961828535484748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-68802515478249609472011-07-31T14:16:52.093-06:002011-07-31T14:16:52.093-06:00Part 1 & 2: Nice little story. Could use some ...Part 1 & 2: Nice little story. Could use some work with the tenses, but overall really good and I liked it.<br /><br />Part 3: I... I... Good Lord, I cried. I actually cried. There is just something so f'cking heart breaking about PINKIE PIE clinging onto another pony crying. It's just so much sadder than imagining any of the other mane 6 cry. Don't get me wrong, if anyone ever makes Fluttershy cry I'll put a dent in their skull, but for Pinkie Pie to cry... man, it just crushes my heart.<br /><br />I REALLY look forward to part 4.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-9020026905834879592011-07-31T10:40:15.571-06:002011-07-31T10:40:15.571-06:00Absolutely loved Part 3.Absolutely loved Part 3.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-68116089197976301442011-07-31T10:14:58.762-06:002011-07-31T10:14:58.762-06:00@Venlin
Venlin, Pinkie Pie's mental instabili...@<a href="#c2950201929378886628" rel="nofollow">Venlin</a><br /><br />Venlin, Pinkie Pie's mental instability is canon. When faced with the prospect of being abandoned, she doesn't cope like a "normal" pony would, but instead resorts to getting her love from inanimate objects. Her mental instability doesn't make her a sadistic murderer or unable to be a functioning member of society.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-25114653104843284582011-07-31T09:59:00.656-06:002011-07-31T09:59:00.656-06:00A good story. It needs some work when it comes to...A good story. It needs some work when it comes to tenses, there were misspellings, and at times it didn't feel like Pinkie wasn't the one narrating. Even when she's sad in Party of One, she still keeps a loopy perspective on life and that was dropped. One thing confused me, though. It says that Pinkie didn't want friends because she didn't know they existed, but then two paragraphs later she says she wanted to join the school fillies and that's what prompted the parties with inanimate objects.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-29502019293788866282011-07-31T03:36:07.665-06:002011-07-31T03:36:07.665-06:00It's good to see that she not mentally unstabl...It's good to see that she not mentally unstable, like I see in other fic. She just had a very boring childhood. Keep up the good work!Venlinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-81647419386072354482011-07-31T01:09:38.991-06:002011-07-31T01:09:38.991-06:00Someone needs to slap a [Sad] tag on this, serious...Someone needs to slap a [Sad] tag on this, seriously. Especially if it keeps on going the direction it is. <br />I kinda like the formal style of Pinkie's thoughts. It seems to ex...Um... Bring out the fact that she's not all that far from another breakdown. I think I just had a Spike moment...Ok, I've got to go find something a lot happier now, before I start going completely Pinkie Pie.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-41873802875943663212011-07-31T00:16:25.592-06:002011-07-31T00:16:25.592-06:00Baaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww!!!!! Pinkie pie!!!! Im sorry f...Baaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww!!!!! Pinkie pie!!!! Im sorry for your childhood!!! I just want to hug you forever!!!! I am Fighting the urge to cry at chapter three..twilightlover21https://www.blogger.com/profile/13625484861697329843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-16134464513855541182011-07-31T00:12:53.694-06:002011-07-31T00:12:53.694-06:00MOAR.MOAR.Commodore Znoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-8075400598965005392011-07-31T00:10:39.669-06:002011-07-31T00:10:39.669-06:00Also, as much as I like this fic, I think it might...Also, as much as I like this fic, I think it might prove that Pinkie doesn't quite work in the first person. Valiant effort on it, though, and still an interesting story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-71480883162420458742011-07-31T00:09:09.694-06:002011-07-31T00:09:09.694-06:00Yay, somebody has the same theory I do on the orig...Yay, somebody has the same theory I do on the origins of Pinkie's other "friends."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-35622846827761185342011-07-30T23:29:33.482-06:002011-07-30T23:29:33.482-06:00Somepony complined about the word "anybody&qu...Somepony complined about the word "anybody" was used instead of "anypony".<br />Anypony means only ponies.<br />Anybody includes other species like Griffins or even Gummy.RedCorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12300262785094020281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-33215416549119122972011-07-30T23:19:22.720-06:002011-07-30T23:19:22.720-06:00darn it, ya made me start to crydarn it, ya made me start to cryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-18217104708676397002011-07-30T21:42:36.086-06:002011-07-30T21:42:36.086-06:00The last few lines of part three made me tear up.....The last few lines of part three made me tear up... so much in contrast to "Cupcakes"... eeech.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-88584671847319655902011-07-30T21:00:50.394-06:002011-07-30T21:00:50.394-06:00That was pretty cute. Your Pinkie seems to be pret...That was pretty cute. Your Pinkie seems to be pretty in-character. ^^<br /><br />However, I think the story could do with a bit more proofreading. There's quite a few misspellings and grammar mistakes, and they kind of detract from the experience.<br /><br />I'll give this a... hm... 3.7.Autumn Windnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1865775941337421610.post-88802586398240541762011-07-30T20:27:26.353-06:002011-07-30T20:27:26.353-06:00Well, that makes a lot of sense. Imaginary friends...Well, that makes a lot of sense. Imaginary friends who later became split personalities :DThe J.A.M.http://www.fanfiction.net/thejamakanumbuhinoreply@blogger.com