[Sad/Bittersweet] Everyone says this one is amazing. The white/black swap has a point, so roll with it.
Author: Chromosome
Description: My name is Canvas. I remember because I wrote it in the corner of the white box. It takes twelve steps to get from the cot to the wall. And the lights hurt my eyes.White Box
Additional Tags: I am a pretentious pony
209 comments:
This is an awesome little abstraction of a story. Sorta reminds me of Plato's allegory of the cave, where people spend their whole lives in a cave to believe the shadows on the walls are the only reality.
ReplyDelete@Star Pony I hadn't really drawn those parallels, but I definitely see them now. Perhaps it's why I enjoyed the fic so much.
ReplyDelete"There’s also Rarity, a unicorn whose mane is a majestic purple while her fur is an ugly white."
ReplyDeleteYou sir are brilliant, I loved this story, and strangly, I tend to associate colours to things in my mind aswell...
A joy to read.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure how to feel after reading this. I suppose I was expecting a happier ending? But thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteFascinating... completely fascinating. So interesting, and thoughtful. I really cannot think of a FIM story like this... nor do I think, there will ever be one like this.
ReplyDeleteThis story pushes an image into my head...
ReplyDeleteI've never seen it before, yet I know it...
Everything looks different to when I started reading...
This was a joy to read, and the ending makes me wonder what really happens. Why must you tease us so! Seriously it was awesome and engaging and thought provoking. 6 stars!
ReplyDelete6/5
ReplyDeleteWhoa.
Whoa.