[Sad] [Shipping-ish]
Author: Aqua Bolt
Description: Octavia and her childhood friend Allegro con Brio have grown distant ever since he moved away when they were thirteen. Now, caught in a dream, she must relive a series of scattered memories of him through the helpless eyes of an observer cursed with the gift of hindsight.
Requiem
Additional Tags: You can't change the past.
16 comments:
Wohoo! Octavia!
Second?
Looks good. Also very deep. But it's OCTAVIA! Will read
Finally, Octavia without Vinyl!
I never liked or understood Vinyltavia.
You can't Change The Past But, You Can Change The Future!
…Well, that was depressing. Well-done, but depressing. I'm going to go listen to some happy music to get rid of this acute case of sad.
those tags r really depressing
Tears? No. I'm too manly for tears.
*sniff*
But, honestly, it was pretty good. I don't normally do sad, but I really liked this one.
Shipping-ish.
Cool tag.
Eh, I'll be honest: this seemed a fair bit rushed. The characterizations, the plotline, the writing, everything just seemed a bit condensed. Also, I spotted a few stylistic errors that kind of got on my nerves. Oh well. Decent story, nonetheless.
Awesome! And I agree with you RessQ.
Sad ? Octavia ?
I HAVE to read this. Let's go
It was decent, title is what caught me; I love the Mozart Requiem, it's a personal favorite, but I digress, it is a decent fanfic, but I do have to agree it seemed a bit rushed.
Yay Octavia! But why sad octavia;(
@Ryonne
Thanks for the honest feedback. Any suggestions on what/how to improve in the future/specific things you had a problem with?
@RessQ
It's the standard "opposites attract" approach. Octavia's a cultured, expensive-looking mare, Vinyl's trendy and energetic-looking by comparison. One deals in classical, the other in electronica.
Fairly unoriginal but it works.
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