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Author: Conner Cogwork
Description: What would you do, if you met a pony who was at once your brother, and yet not? Applebuck wishes to reunite with his 'Cousin JayJay', and braves the dimensional divide to reach his goal. But being a small foal, how will he deal with a world in which everything is flipped? His friends, his family, and even... himself? Finally from A Cross and Arrow, the sequel is here!
On a Whisper of Wind Chapter 1
On a Whisper of Wind Chapter 2
On a Whisper of Wind Chapter 3
On a Whisper of Wind Chapter 4 (New!)
On a Whisper of Wind (All Links)
Additional Tags: Alternate universes, existential crisis, genderswitch, family, MORE HIJINKS
126 comments:
Might have to read this one.
Ooooooh Boy...
Worth a read
Ohgod Sequel
No way. It's here! Yes! I was worried I wouldn't have something to read!
Holy cow! It's finally here!
Finally! I was starting to wonder if it would ever come out.
A sequel YES!
By Thor's ample bosom...
IT RETURNS.
Oh my God. There goes my plan for the day.
YES, FINALLLLY
*G.I.R. squeals and explodes*
Squee~ This is is the greatest day of my life.
YEEEEEESS!
Oh, yes, I have been waiting for this!
Now this I've got to read, been waiting for this since I read the prelude linked at the end of 'On A Cross and Arrow'.
Woo! Been waiting for this one for a while!
I thoroughly enjoyed On A Cross and Arrow, and I can't wait to read this.
Yes!!!
Totally made my day! :D
Just as I finished On a Cross and Arrow! Perfect Timing
Been looking forward to this for some time now.
How regularly will you update this story? I loved the On A Cross and Arrow, but I ussualy only read Completed stories since I hate cliffhangers + long wait time (like Transcendence).
:)
I feel not unlike Filly Pinkie upon first seeing a Sonic Rainboom. Time to read! 8D
OMIGOSH!!!!!!!!!! A SEQUEL TO "ON A CROSS AND ARROW" *jumps up and down!*
Oh look now it's on E:D good day... good day.
*finishes reading the chapter... and the preview for the next chapter*
I have this huge grin on my face, and I doubt that I could remove it, even if I wanted to.
This has made my day. ^_^
Dangit! CLIFFFHANGEEEERRRR!!! Well, shoot. How long until next update? Estimates?
Very good !
I will read !
As a fan of On A Cross and Arrow I must read this!
Sequel to On a Cross and Arrow? ME GUSTA.
OH. MY. GOD.
It has interrupted my seventh rereading of On a Cross and Arrow.
I AM TOTALLY OKAY WITH THAT.
AND SO IT CONTINUES, PRAISE CELESTIA!
ONWARD HO!
Holy- it's out.
...
-drops everything and reads-
yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes
You've got my undivided attention, "wow" us again if you can.
Cereal, could you link back to the original story page as part of the post? Thank you!
YES YES YES!
OMG!!!
I don't normally post comments before even reading a fic, but I have been waiting for this for so long, well only like two or three months, still a newish fan and all, but still this is going straight to the top of my reading list.
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HRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
This has forced my metaphorical hand. Time to reread On a Cross and Arrow, which I've been delaying doing for the past couple days (specifically hoping to do it before this came out actually, lol).
IT BEGIIIIIIIIIIIIIINS
HA HA YES YES YES YES IT BEGINS
AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My day has officially been made!
Thanks!!
I thought this sequel would never happen.
OHMYGODFINALLY!!!!!
On A Cross and Arrow was the second fanfic I've ever read ( and my first long one!), so I have extremely fond memories of it. I've been waiting about 3-4 months for this.
I have a book report due yesterday that I have yet to start, but it can wait. I have priorities.
So, how many hours do you think it'll take for this to reach 6 star?
HHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
Took you long enough -.-
When I saw the picture I knew it looked familiar; when I saw the title, I nearly lost control of my bladder. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS
*rainbowdashsoawesome* *fluttershyyay* *twilightyes* *pinkiesparklyeyes* *applejackhappy* *derpywoohoo* *squee*
Hasn't this been out since like September? I've already read it....
MRGRFRRRR
IT'S ONLY A SEQUEL TO ONE OF MY TOP 3 FAVORITE FAN FICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is my Valentine.
with any luck this will also be posted to FIMFiction.net so can track it there and read from my tablet.. googledocs is such a pain to read on my tablet..
ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh! A sequal!
@Marshal
There's more after the part where Applebuck meets the CMC.
I just finished this while listening to the LOTR soundtrack
It was amazing.
To be honest, this chapter seemed a bit short. Hopefully future chapters will be longer than this, but that's really all I can criticize. Your writing is still phenomenal, the characters are believable, and the cliff-hanger you ended on is killing me. I can guess where this story is going, and I quite like it. But I know you will completely blow away my expectations next chapter, because you are an alicorn among bronies.
In conclusion...
POSSIBLE FORESHADOWED SWEETIEBUCK SHIPPING FTW!!!!!!!!
Oh. My. GOD! It actually came out! You had me worried there Cogwork.
Jeez. You lot have been waiting impatiently, haven't you? Only the first chapter and already it's got 55 comments. 56, now, actually.
Oops, sorry, 58.
Woohoo, yes! I will enjoy reading this.
YEEESSSSSS
What the carp? Another story I HAVE to read, lol. :P
My gosh i'll be looking forward to updates on this as much as actual episodes i reckon
FINALLY!!!!!!
reading now!
FINALLY
Steel and Thunder!
"Hell, it's about time!"
My first thought when I saw the description.
YYYYAAAAAAA ....... SOMEONE DRAW A GENDER SWAPPED LUNA
Update this once a day or I will kill you, you should have saved up 3 or 4 chapters.
Omigoshomigoshomigooooooosh. *read*
ALL HELL IS ABOUT TO BREAK LOOSE!!!
AWWWW YEAAAAAHHHH
Its about time this showed up.
Hinting at sequels and then not following up would make me a sad pony.
By Solaris's mighty windswept beard!
I must read!
The journey I thought would not continue...
Aw yeah, I've been waiting for this. I'll be especially interested in seeing how you make Trixie x Presto happen, given the setup you've got here.
I'm so glad this is here. major props, Conner, for getting this up within days of the date you gave. ^.^
Finally, YEAH!
Woo-hoo! Months of waiting, and it's finally here! The long-anticipated sequel to one of the best fics ever written!
Love the teaser at the end of the fic. Connor Cogwork, you have made my day! I shall look forward to this being continued eagerly!
it looks like a conversion beaur story imnot complaining though i love them i hope it is
Yay! I hope it updates as fast as OACAA did!
Woohoo, the sequel!! And already off to a good start!! Man, can't wait for the next chapter, I hope poor Pinkie won't be too disappointed to know Berry didn't come along. But I think, it would probably be best, for the good of Equestria and everyponies sanity!
oh my cod, YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!
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I am going to read the crap out of this.
"Alright, let's just give EQD one last check before I start my homework for the evening. I got a ton of work though, so I'll just save anything I find for later..."
*checks the last few posts of the day... and notices a rather familiar drawing on one of the posts, and then notices the name which was mentioned in a previous story she'd read that was supposed to be the sequel of said story*
"... I-it updated!? It actually ACTUALLY updated!? OHMIGOSH YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES-YESSSSSSSS~~~! I gotta read it- No! I have homework, and when I say I have homework I mean I have a LOT of homework! But this is my favorite story, and I can't go another hour without getting my fix of this awesome super-duper story! Oooooh, but my homework.... I'll just read this story and then stay up late to get all my work done. I gotta get up real early in the morning though... I'll need an energy drink though- wait, I have an energy drink!!! Ponies, here I come~!"
Confound these ponies, they drive me to insomnia!!!
The cutie mark expert would be "drowning in blank flanks"? I'm not sure if that was intentional or not.
AHHH!!! AFTER ONE THOUSAND YEARS IT'S WRITTEN!
IT'S TIME TO READ THE HELL OUT OF THIS STORY
/Rita Repulsa
Dear sir,
I love you
-ME
Oh...My....Gosh...
...
*anime faint*
Dear sir,
I love you
-ME
This is the best possible thing!! I'm so excited and reading that ending and the preview of the next chapter was so incredibly nostalgic. Even though it wasn't that long ago On a Cross and Arrow finished
will read
OMG, You put out the sequel! Hijinks ahoy! <3
Yay, the sequel is finally ready for consumption! Cross and Arrow is one of the best MLP fanfics I've ever read, and I have faith that this will fully measure up to it!
BEST WAY TO END VALENTINE'S DAY EVER!!! I've been waiting so long for this fic! On a Cross and Arrow is what got me into the fandom and when i decided that i truely was a brony. This was the best valentine i got all day. /)^3^(\
...Well, when I saw this, I took a step back from the computer and did an actual backflip in excitement. I may or may not have shrieked in joy. <_< >_> ... I'm looking very forward to the next chapter.
What a time of day to discover the Epicness :/
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But seriously, really looking forward to reading through this one. Cogwork's previous work 'On a Cross and Arrow' was fantastic and had me checking fimfiction and ponychan on a regular basis for his updates. I expect great things from this story.
Best part is, its all (by proxy) Trixie's fault.
I have all the stories from the Cross and arrow saga on my computer, so happy that there are some new stuff on the way
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Doesn't BEGIN to cover it!
WAAAAAAAAAHH!!! WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! WAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! AT LAAAAAAST!!! IT'S HEEEEEEEERE!!! THE SEQUEL TO THE FIRST FANFIC I EVER READ!!!
(adds to a list I keep of fanfics I have to read with a "Must Read" tag and begins to wait impatiently for the chance to read it, which will be probably tommorrow at night :D)
On the next chapter: Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiet
I WAITED FOR SOOOO LONG TO READ AND I READ IT!
I WAITED FOR SOOOO LONG TO READ AND I READ IT!
AT LAST!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!
I hope it's like the last story where it changed POV :D
This is the greatest day of my life since Derpy spoke.
Psst. It's "half-pipe", not "half-pike".
Existential crisis? I'm only 2 chapters into Cross and Arrow and now I'm planning to read this one.
I love the rainbowdashxrainbowblitz!! We better see this! Lol
Sequel YEAH! :D and looking good so far
When are we getting the next chapter!? It's been two months now.
I seriously apologize for the lack of updates. It's been slow writing for me. Not a whole lot of inspiration going on, I'm afraid.
I'm hoping that'll change pretty soon though. It may not be very big, but there IS a chapter coming. I'll make an effort to not let updates be so sparse from now on.
Take your time Conner, I just want to see what you finish what you started. Also Suddenly Trixie.
OH SWEET ZOMBIE JESUS IT'S HERE
Aaaand UPDATE! And Trixie seems to suspect something...This ought to be good.
And poor Applebuck can't catch a break...I'm looking forward to the filly CMC's reactions when they find out just who he really is.
Please, try to update a little faster. This work deserves to be finished!
I love Pinkie Pie, I really do.
A shame the chapters are so small so far, but what's there is gold. Quality over quantity and all that...
So want to read more, of course.
I'm hoping for a guest appearance by Mrs. Turnip, Roxie, Monsieur LeFlour and Lady Lintsalot.
Okay, I've figured it out thanks to this new chapter and the Sweetie Chronicles update: dimension-hopping turns anypony and everypony into massive bags of hormones, regardless of age. Keep it up, 'cause that's awesome XD.
I really like the "coupling" you did with the Sweetie Chronicals in this update - you are the first author who does this AFAIK :-)
Minor complaint. Mr. Cake's cutie mark is a trio of Carrot cakes. Not Brownies. He's Carrot Cake. His wife being Cup Cake.
Will this piece ever be continued? I really loved the last one and i am super excited about this colt version of Trixie! On cross and arrow was wonderful and has introduced me to fan-fiction. I understand if it were to be discontinued but I would be eternally grateful if it were to be continued.
there has been an update, chapter 3 is out http://www.fimfiction.net/story/10851/3/On-a-Whisper-of-Wind/Part-3%3A-Through-Eyes-Unused. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026934/3/On_a_Whisper_of_Wind
Oh boy. Cutie Mark Crusaders Petty Theives Yay!
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
Thou has updated it, huzzah!
Damn it Connor, update it!
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